Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and complete your sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and add one specific detail or short example. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words like 'also' or 'however' to connect ideas.

Example: I like wearing sporty clothes, especially polo T-shirts, because they match my active personality. Also, I feel comfortable and presentable in them, for example when I go to the gym or meet friends.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, then briefly contrast the two situations with clear linking words ('however', 'when'). Remove hesitations and finish thoughts. Provide one specific example of a smart outfit you choose for presentations.

Example: I prefer casual clothes for everyday tasks, but I choose smart clothes for formal events. For instance, I wear a collared shirt and blazer for presentations, whereas I wear polo T-shirts and casual trousers for paperwork.

Suggestion: Be more fluent and avoid repetition. Start with a clear statement and add one concise reason with a specific detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and suit my athletic build. For example, polo shirts fit well and make me look neat when I meet friends.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: give a clear general statement, then one specific example. Remove fillers and complete sentences. Replace vague phrase 'branding' with a clearer word like 'brand event' or 'special event'.

Example: It depends on the occasion: I spend a lot of time choosing clothes for special events but very little for daily wear. For example, I might spend several weeks planning outfits for a high-profile brand event, but I often repeat clothes on ordinary days.

Suggestion: Answer directly and finish the thought. Use a clear topic sentence like 'No, I usually wear the same style.' Give one brief reason and an example of when you would change style for a specific event.

Example: No, I usually wear the same comfortable clothes on weekdays and weekends because I prefer easy movement. However, I dress differently for a wedding or formal event, when I wear dressier clothes.

Suggestion: Be concise and explain clearly. State your preference, give one clear reason, and avoid unrelated or unclear comments about weather unless directly relevant. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: I prefer light-colored clothes because they make me feel calm and confident. For example, I often choose pastel shirts instead of bright colors, which I find overwhelming.

× I enjoy wearing sport T-shirts and a sports attire because it suits to my personality.

✓ I enjoy wearing sports T-shirts and sports attire because they suit my personality.

Use of preposition 'to' after 'suit' is incorrect in this context; 'suit' does not need a preposition before the person. Also 'sport' should be 'sports' and 'a sports attire' is unidiomatic; use 'sports attire' and match plural subject 'T-shirts and sports attire' with plural verb 'suit'. Suggestions: remove 'to', use 'sports', and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Moreover, I feel presentable while wearing sporty clothes.

✓ Moreover, I feel presentable when I wear sporty clothes.

Using 'while wearing' is not wrong but 'when I wear' is more natural here. This fixes awkward adverbial phrasing and maintains present simple tense for habitual action. Suggestion: prefer 'when I wear' for clarity.

× Although I do uh appreciate wearing different kind of design and style but uh, in my.

✓ Although I appreciate wearing different kinds of designs and styles, in my opinion...

Sentence is incomplete and contains filler words 'uh'. 'Different' requires plural 'kinds' and 'designs and styles' plural nouns. Use 'in my opinion' to complete the thought. Suggestion: remove fillers and complete the clause.

× Uh, if I am doing my work, dealing with some repetitive task, especially the document work that I love to wear polo T-shirts with the casual pant.

✓ If I am doing my work, dealing with repetitive tasks, especially paperwork, I like to wear polo T-shirts with casual pants.

Tense 'am doing' is okay for current actions, but phrase needs plurality and clearer nouns: 'repetitive tasks' and 'paperwork' instead of 'document work'. 'the casual pant' is incorrect; use 'casual pants'. Also replace 'that I love to' with 'I like to' for naturalness. Suggestion: use plural nouns and natural collocations.

× But if I'm appearing for a presentation or attending a function, then I love to experiment with clothes and style so that I'll represent what I'm.

✓ But if I'm giving a presentation or attending a function, I like to experiment with clothes and styles so that I can present myself well.

'Appearing for a presentation' is awkward; use 'giving a presentation'. 'Love to' is acceptable but 'like to' fits better. The clause 'so that I'll represent what I'm' is incomplete and wrongly formed; use 'so that I can present myself well.' Suggestion: complete the idea and use correct verb phrases.

× I do love wearing T-shirts because I feel so relaxed as well as, uh, extremely presentable, uh, by wearing polo T-shirts, especially because I have, uh, an athletic health, Uh, so wearing these kind of T-shirts are most suitable to me, just reflect me as a sports person.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts because I feel relaxed and presentable when I wear polo T-shirts, especially because I have an athletic build, so wearing these kinds of T-shirts is most suitable for me and reflects that I am sporty.

Remove fillers. 'Athletic health' is incorrect; use 'athletic build'. 'These kind of T-shirts are' should be 'these kinds of T-shirts are' or 'these kinds of T-shirts are' but better 'these kinds ... is' depends; correct is 'these kinds of T-shirts are' but here 'wearing these kinds ... is suitable' used. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'wearing ... is most suitable'. Also 'reflect me as a sports person' is unidiomatic; use 'reflect that I am sporty.' Suggestion: simplify sentence, correct noun phrases and agreement.

× Uh, it depends upon the kind of function I am appearing for.

✓ It depends on the kind of event I am attending.

Use 'depends on' rather than 'depends upon' for natural speech; 'function I am appearing for' is awkward—use 'event I am attending.' Suggestion: prefer 'depends on' and 'attending an event'.

× For example, if I'm attending any branding then I can spend more than a month for selecting clothes for a specific look.

✓ For example, if I'm preparing for any branding event, I may spend more than a month selecting clothes for a specific look.

Use 'preparing for' or 'preparing for a branding event' instead of 'attending any branding'. 'Can spend' is acceptable but 'may spend' or 'might spend' is more natural. Remove unnecessary 'for' before 'selecting'. Suggestion: use 'selecting clothes' without extra preposition and correct noun phrase.

× But if I'm choosing to wear for a usual day then I don't waste my time.

✓ But if I'm choosing clothes for an ordinary day, I don't waste time.

Original has missing object after 'choose to wear'. Reword to 'choosing clothes' and 'ordinary day' or 'usual day'. Remove unnecessary 'my' before 'time'. Suggestion: include the noun after 'choose' and simplify.

× No, there is not as such difference between the output that I wear during weekdays or on the weekend because uh, I always enjoy wearing comfortable and easy to move in style.

✓ No, there is no real difference between what I wear on weekdays and at the weekend because I always enjoy wearing comfortable, easy-to-move-in clothes.

'There is not as such difference' is awkward; use 'there is no real difference'. 'Output' is the wrong word; use 'what I wear'. Use 'on weekdays and at the weekend' or 'on the weekend'. Hyphenate 'easy-to-move-in' when used as an adjective and use 'clothes' instead of 'style'. Suggestion: replace incorrect vocabulary and fix articles.

× I don't mind what kind of the day is going on, but I am very conscious when there is a specific.

✓ I don't mind what kind of day it is, but I am very conscious when there is a specific occasion.

Original has awkward word order 'what kind of the day is going on' and ends incomplete. Use 'what kind of day it is' and complete with 'specific occasion'. Suggestion: fix word order and complete the clause.

× I prefer wearing light shaded clothes because I feel more confident and peaceful by wearing those specific shades and moreover, brighter colours sometimes irritate my mood.

✓ I prefer wearing light-colored clothes because they make me feel more confident and calm; moreover, bright colors sometimes put me in a bad mood.

'Light shaded' should be 'light-colored' or 'light shades'. 'Peaceful by wearing those specific shades' is awkward—use 'make me feel calm'. 'Brighter colours sometimes irritate my mood' is unidiomatic; say 'put me in a bad mood' or 'annoy me'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'light-colored' and 'put me in a bad mood'.

× Uh, because weather conditions are not that present here most of the time we are experiencing.

✓ This is because we often experience weather conditions that are not very pleasant here.

Original word order is incorrect and 'not that present' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'we often experience weather conditions that are not very pleasant here' for clarity and correctness. Suggestion: reorder sentence and use 'often experience' and 'not very pleasant'.