Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify vocabulary and organize your answer into a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid incorrect words (e.g., “blood cells”) and filler sounds. Use one or two cohesive sentences about casual clothes and one about work attire, with linking words to contrast them.

Example: I usually prefer casual, simple clothes because they make me feel comfortable. However, when I go to work I wear more professional outfits, such as a shirt and trousers, and I often wear an abaya on top to look more formal.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then add one clear reason using linking words (because/so). Avoid repetition and grammatical errors; keep to two or three sentences.

Example: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and concentrate on my work. For example, when I wear casual clothes I feel relaxed and can complete tasks more efficiently.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and explain with a specific reason. Correct incorrect vocabulary (e.g., ‘under antibiotic’ is wrong). Mention when you do wear T-shirts and why, using linking words (however, sometimes).

Example: I usually prefer long plain shirts because they look more presentable to me. However, I sometimes wear T-shirts underneath for extra comfort, especially at home or when I know I will be doing physical tasks.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and then give two specific reasons. Avoid vague phrasing and repeated words. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and give a brief example of what you consider when choosing clothes.

Example: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I worry about whether an outfit suits the occasion and my body shape. For example, I often consider the colour, fit and comfort before deciding what to wear.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first, then explain exceptions clearly. Fix unclear words (e.g., ‘bias and another buyer’) and describe the different outfits you wear for work and leisure using linking words (but/when). Keep it concise.

Example: Generally, I wear similar casual clothes on weekdays and weekends. But when I go to my shop or meet customers, I wear shirts and trousers to look more professional.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific seasonal preferences with clear vocabulary. Use linking words (in summer/while/in winter) and avoid vague words like ‘panels’. Mention concrete colours as examples to be more specific.

Example: I like different colours depending on the season. In summer I prefer light, fresh colours like white, beige or pastel blue because they feel cool, while in winter I often wear darker or richer colours such as navy, burgundy or forest green.

× I prefer casual and simple blood cells that make me feel easy and comfortable.

✓ I prefer casual and simple clothes that make me feel comfortable and relaxed.

The student used 'blood cells' (incorrect word) and 'easy' (wrong adjective for feeling). Use 'clothes' not 'blood cells'. Use 'comfortable' and 'relaxed' as appropriate adjectives to describe feelings. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and pair adjectives that naturally describe feelings (comfortable, relaxed).

× For example, I wear shirts and trousers for, uh, trousers and when I went to my job, I like to get the professional dresses, shirts and trousers, but I put abaya on these clothes that make me feel professional.

✓ For example, I wear shirts and trousers. When I go to work, I like to wear professional outfits, including shirts and trousers, and I sometimes put an abaya over them because it makes me feel professional.

The original sentence mixes tenses, repeats words and has unclear structure. Use present tense 'go' to match habitual action and rephrase into clear clauses. Use 'an abaya' with article and combine related ideas into coherent sentences. Suggestion: break long run-on sentences into shorter sentences, keep consistent tense for habits (present simple).

× Generally, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I think never I wear the comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ Generally, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I never feel uncomfortable in them.

The phrase 'I think never I wear the comfortable and casual clothes' is ungrammatical and confuses meaning. Use 'I never feel uncomfortable in them' to express the intended idea. Keep present simple for preferences and general statements. Suggestion: state opinions and habits using present simple and place negation before the main verb or adjective correctly (never + verb or never + feel).

× I feel so easy and relax and do so much work with fresh smiles.

✓ I feel relaxed and at ease and can do a lot of work with a fresh smile.

Use adjectives 'relaxed' and phrase 'at ease' rather than 'easy' and 'relax'. Use 'a lot of work' instead of 'so much work' for natural phrasing and 'with a fresh smile' for singular noun agreement. Suggestion: use adjective forms for feelings and natural collocations (feel relaxed, at ease, do a lot of work).

× So I like to wear simple and casual clothes even though even though my job at my job.

✓ So I like to wear simple and casual clothes even though my job is formal.

The sentence repeats 'even though' and 'my job' and lacks a clear clause. Replace with a concise contrast clause 'even though my job is formal'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and complete the subordinate clause with a verb and complement.

× I don't like wearing T-shirts because I prefer shirts, especially long plain ones which I find needed and more presentable.

✓ I don't like wearing T-shirts because I prefer shirts, especially long plain ones which I find neater and more presentable.

Use adjective 'neater' instead of 'needed' which is incorrect. Maintain present simple for preferences. 'Needed' is a past participle and does not convey intended meaning. Suggestion: choose correct adjective (neat/neater) and keep consistent tense for general preferences.

× However, I sometimes wear T-shirts under antibiotic because they make me feel more comfortable and feel bad.

✓ However, I sometimes wear T-shirts under my shirt because they make me feel more comfortable.

'Under antibiotic' is nonsensical; likely intended 'under my shirt'. Also 'feel bad' contradicts previous clause and should be removed. Ensure correct preposition 'under' with a clear noun. Suggestion: use clear, logical prepositions and avoid contradictory descriptions.

× And for me, I spend lot of time for using clothes because when I'm choosing my clothes, my mind has so many questions what what the excesses of this dress of this outfit and that suit me.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because when I'm choosing my outfit, I have many questions about the advantages of each piece and whether it suits me.

Missing article 'a' in 'a lot of time'. 'for using clothes' is incorrect; use 'choosing clothes'. The clause 'what what the excesses...' is unclear; rephrase to 'questions about the advantages of each piece and whether it suits me.' Suggestion: use 'a lot of' for quantity, and simplify the clause to state what questions you have when choosing clothes.

× So for me there is a lot of time choosing a clothes.

✓ So for me there is a lot of time spent choosing clothes.

'a clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also better to say 'time spent choosing clothes' for natural English. Suggestion: remember 'clothes' is plural and use correct quantifier or restructure the sentence.

× Not actually, I wear the same outfit from weekdays and weekends, but when I went to my shop I want to look more professional so I wear a bias and another buyer.

✓ Not really. I wear the same outfits on weekdays and weekends, but when I go to my shop I want to look more professional, so I wear a blazer and other smart clothes.

Use present simple 'go' for habitual action. 'From weekdays and weekends' should be 'on weekdays and weekends'. 'I went' is past tense incorrectly used. 'bias and another buyer' are incorrect words; likely 'blazer and other' items. Replace with 'blazer and other smart clothes.' Suggestion: use present simple for routines, correct prepositions (on weekdays), and check vocabulary (blazer).

× I put shirts and trousers and and sometimes I do T-shirts underwear so normally.

✓ I wear shirts and trousers, and sometimes I wear T-shirts underneath; that's my normal style.

Sentence repeats 'and' and uses 'do T-shirts underwear' which is ungrammatical. Use 'wear T-shirts underneath' to express layering and end with a clear statement. Suggestion: simplify to subject + verb + object and use natural verbs like 'wear'.

× I think all panels are good, but colours affect me very much.

✓ I think all patterns are good, but colors affect me a lot.

'Panels' likely should be 'patterns' or 'colors'; choose 'patterns'. 'Affect me very much' is better as 'affect me a lot' for naturalness. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and common adverbial phrases (a lot).

× When in summer I uh like to prefer light, simple and refreshing colour that makes me feel so cool, relaxed and comfortable, while in winter, uh, I like to use all the colours, even new colours.

✓ In summer I prefer light, simple, and refreshing colors that make me feel cool, relaxed, and comfortable, while in winter I like to wear darker or richer colors, and sometimes new colors.

Use 'prefer' rather than 'like to prefer'. Keep verbs in present simple for habitual actions. 'Colour' singular should be 'colors' to match plural descriptors. Clarify winter preference as 'darker or richer colors'. Suggestion: avoid redundant phrases ('like to prefer') and keep parallel structure when listing adjectives.