Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct some grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details (e.g., types of clothes and why). Avoid filler phrases like “I guess.” Use linking words like “because” to explain reasons.

Example: I usually choose clothes according to the weather. In summer I prefer T-shirts and lightweight fabrics because they keep me cool and comfortable.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence then support with specific reason and one example. Reduce hesitations and correct awkward expressions (e.g., “I’m not the kind of person who follows trends”). Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Example: I prefer casual clothes rather than smart outfits because comfort matters most to me. For example, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt to work on days when I don't have meetings.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use correct verb forms and reduce hesitations. Add a brief specific detail about when or why you choose T-shirts to make the answer richer.

Example: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts; they are my favorite because they are comfortable and help me relax. I often wear them at home or on casual weekends.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes or No) and give a concise reason with one detail. Remove fillers like “Oh my God” and hesitations. Use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I do. It usually takes me about 30 minutes to choose an outfit because I want something comfortable that also suits the weather and my schedule.

Suggestion: Provide a direct statement about the difference, then give one specific example and avoid repetitions. Fix grammar (e.g., “I prefer to wear formal clothes on weekdays and T-shirts on weekends”). Use linking words like “however” or “also.”

Example: Yes, I wear different styles: I usually wear formal clothes like a shirt and trousers on weekdays, but on weekends I prefer T-shirts and jeans because I want to relax.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear topic sentence and give concise, specific reasons without repeating the same idea. Replace vague phrases with concrete reasons (e.g., white feels fresh, matches many items). Use one linking word like “because.”

Example: I like white the most because it feels fresh and peaceful, and it goes well with many other colours, so I can mix and match easily.

× Honestly it depends on the weather.

✓ Honestly, it depends on the weather.

This sentence needs a comma after 'Honestly' for natural phrasing; verb tense is correct (simple present) to express habitual fact, so keep 'depends'. Use comma to separate the introductory adverb.

× On the summer I would love to wear clothes like T-shirts and comfortable clothes, not like very heavy clothes.

✓ In the summer, I would love to wear clothes like T-shirts and other comfortable items, not very heavy clothes.

Use 'in the summer' rather than 'on the summer'. Also remove redundant 'like' before 'very heavy clothes' and replace second 'clothes' with 'items' or omit to avoid repetition. Add comma after introductory phrase.

× So it depends on whether I guess.

✓ So I guess it depends.

The original word order is awkward and unclear. Reordering to 'I guess it depends' produces a natural English sentence conveying uncertainty.

× Honestly I prefer casual clothes more than smart clothes because for me if it's comfortable for me, it is best clothes for me.

✓ Honestly, I prefer casual clothes to smart clothes because if something is comfortable for me, it is the best choice.

Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A more than B'. Remove repeated 'for me'. Use 'the best choice' with definite article to correctly form superlative sense. Add commas for clarity.

× I'm not kind of person who runs after the uh trains or any trying to new things.

✓ I'm not the kind of person who runs after trends or tries new things.

Use 'the kind of person' with definite article. 'Runs after the trains' is incorrect; likely intended 'trends'. Use parallel verbs 'runs after trends or tries new things' and correct verb forms.

× I just keep it simple.

✓ I just keep things simple.

'Keep it simple' is acceptable, but with 'clothes' context 'keep things simple' is clearer. No tense change needed; present simple expresses habitual action.

× Yes, I do like wear T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts.

After 'do like' use gerund 'wearing' rather than bare infinitive 'wear'. The auxiliary 'do' is used for emphasis; keep present simple.

× Actually it is my favorite uh attire to wear because it is so comfortable and make me feel relaxed and it just make me happy to wear AT shirt more than anything.

✓ Actually, it is my favorite attire to wear because it is so comfortable and makes me feel relaxed; it just makes me happier to wear a T-shirt than anything else.

Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'it' requires 'makes' not 'make'. Use articles correctly: 'a T-shirt'. Use comparative 'happier' and 'than anything else' for clarity. Add punctuation.

× Whenever I uh, wake up in the early in in the morning to ready for my office, it takes me 30 minutes to just decide what to wear, which is easy to wear or suits with the weather.

✓ Whenever I wake up early in the morning to get ready for the office, it takes me 30 minutes to decide what to wear, which will be comfortable or suitable for the weather.

Correct prepositions and phrases: 'wake up early in the morning', 'get ready for the office'. Remove duplicate words. Use 'suitable for the weather' rather than 'suits with'. Use 'comfort able' phrasing and future/modal 'will be' or simple present 'is' depending on habit; here simple present is fine but 'will be' clarifies intent.

× Yeah, I prefer put on uh, formal clothes on weekdays and T-shirt or any dress on weekends.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to put on formal clothes on weekdays and T-shirts or casual dresses on weekends.

After 'prefer' use 'to' + verb or 'prefer doing'. Use plural 'T-shirts' and specify 'casual dresses' for clarity. Remove filler 'uh'.

× So it depends what the day is and what the mood is.

✓ So it depends on the day and my mood.

Simplify structure: use 'depends on' with noun phrases. 'What the day is' and 'what the mood is' are wordy.

× Also, if I'm not feeling like wearing this, so I just uh, put on AT shirt and.

✓ Also, if I'm not feeling like dressing up, I just put on a T-shirt.

Remove redundant 'so' after 'if' clause. Use 'dressing up' instead of vague 'wearing this'. Use article 'a T-shirt'. Remove trailing 'and'.

× The colour I like the most is white because it gives me the energy, uh, which brings positivity in me and it is a colour of peace and a white colour brings you the positivity and surround you with the everything good.

✓ The colour I like the most is white because it gives me energy and brings me positivity; it is a colour of peace and makes you feel surrounded by good things.

Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'energy', use 'brings me positivity' not 'brings positivity in me'. Avoid repetition ('a white colour brings you the positivity'). Use correct verb forms 'makes you feel' and 'good things' instead of 'the everything good'. Use concise phrasing.