Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a complete topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Use natural grammar (full sentences) and avoid vague phrases like "just like that."

Example: I usually like to wear casual outerwear, such as hoodies and jackets. For example, I often choose a lightweight hoodie in spring and a warm padded jacket in winter because they keep me comfortable and suit my style.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct answer (no "Yes" to a choice question), then give concise reasons and an example using a linking word (because/so). Reduce repetition.

Example: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed. For instance, I usually wear jeans and a hoodie when I go to the mall because it helps me feel confident and at ease.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use natural phrasing; avoid awkward expressions like "good to me." Add one specific reason or example and use linking words.

Example: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts and I wear them every day because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I often wear plain cotton T-shirts for both study and relaxing at home.

Suggestion: Clarify meaning and correct grammar; give a specific routine or reason and avoid unclear terms like "unit law." Use a linking phrase to explain why it takes time.

Example: Yes, I sometimes spend a long time choosing clothes, especially for special events. For example, when I prepare an outfit for a party, it can take me two to three hours because I try on different combinations to find something that looks right.

Suggestion: Use full sentences and correct verb forms. State the general pattern then give a brief reason or example using linking words (because/so). Avoid filler words like "just."

Example: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear T-shirts and jeans for comfort at work or classes, while on weekends I prefer sweaters or hoodies because I want to stay warm and relaxed.

Suggestion: Answer with a complete sentence and explain specifically how the colour relates to your personality. Use correct grammar (represents) and add one brief supporting detail.

Example: I like blue because it represents my calm and reliable personality. For instance, I often choose navy shirts since they look professional yet relaxed and make me feel confident.

× Hoodie, jacket, just like that.

✓ A hoodie and a jacket, just like that.

The sentence lists nouns without articles; English often requires articles with singular countable nouns. Use 'a' before singular items and connect items with 'and' to form a natural list. Suggestion: use 'a hoodie and a jacket' or 'hoodies and jackets' for plural generalization.

× Yes, I prefer wearing comfortable clothes and casual clothes.

✓ Yes, I prefer wearing comfortable, casual clothes.

Repetition of 'clothes' is unnecessary and makes the sentence awkward. Combine adjectives with a single noun. Also 'prefer wearing' is acceptable; no modal needed. Suggestion: streamline by using one noun and comma between adjectives.

× Actually, when I'm going out, I wear casual clothes, so I feel confident when I'm going out or going to the mall.

✓ Actually, when I go out, I wear casual clothes, so I feel confident when I go out or go to the mall.

Use simple present 'I go' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm going' which suggests an action happening now. Repetition 'going out' can be retained but use consistent tense.

× Yes, I wear T-shirts every day because it's comfortable and it's really good to me.

✓ Yes, I wear T-shirts every day because they're comfortable and they suit me well.

'T-shirts' is plural, so pronoun and verb must agree: use 'they're' not 'it's'. Also 'good to me' is unnatural; 'suit me' or 'feel good' is better. Suggestion: match pronouns to plural nouns and use appropriate verbs/phrases.

× Yes, actually when I'm going to unit law, it takes me two hours or three hours to choose the clothes and good outfit to me.

✓ Yes, actually when I'm going to university law class, it takes me two or three hours to choose clothes and a good outfit.

The phrase 'going to unit law' is unclear; likely 'university law class'. 'It takes me two or three hours' is correct but streamline numbers. 'Choose the clothes and good outfit to me' is ungrammatical; 'choose clothes and a good outfit' is correct. Remove 'to me' or replace with 'for me' if needed.

× Yes I will T-shirts on weekdays and I'm just wearing sweater or hoodie when weekends.

✓ Yes, I wear T-shirts on weekdays and I just wear a sweater or a hoodie on weekends.

'I will T-shirts' is ungrammatical; use simple present 'I wear' for habits. Use 'wearing' continuous is incorrect here; use 'wear'. Also countable nouns need articles: 'a sweater' or 'a hoodie'. Use 'on weekends' for time expression.

× Blue because it represent me personality.

✓ Blue, because it represents my personality.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' (singular) requires 'represents' (third person singular). 'Me personality' is incorrect pronoun and word order; use possessive 'my personality'. Suggestion: use 'it represents my personality'.