Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and use a clearer topic sentence plus one specific detail. Avoid redundancy like “normal casual” and fix grammar (subject-verb agreement).

Example: I prefer casual clothes, such as jeans or chinos, because they are comfortable and practical for everyday activities.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence, use correct tense, and link ideas with a short connector. Give one clear example of each situation and avoid repetition (“meeting or a professional meeting”).

Example: It depends on the situation: for work meetings I wear smart, professional clothes, while on regular days I usually wear casual outfits like jeans and a shirt.

Suggestion: Correct grammatical errors and be specific. State your position and give a reason with a concrete example. Avoid accidental words like “teachers.”

Example: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable and versatile, so I often wear them when I meet friends or run errands.

Suggestion: Use fluent, error-free sentences and avoid fillers. Provide a short explanation and one clear contrast for special occasions. Replace vague phrases like “SH pick” and correct word order.

Example: No, I rarely spend much time choosing clothes because I'm easygoing and usually grab the first suitable item from my wardrobe. However, for special occasions like weddings I plan my outfit carefully.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, correct nouns and plurals, and use a linking word to compare. Be specific about what ‘formal’ and ‘casual’ mean for you.

Example: Yes. As an accountant I wear formal attire such as dress shirts and trousers on weekdays, while on weekends I prefer casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans.

Suggestion: Answer directly without fillers, correct grammar and vocabulary (use ‘neutral’ not ‘natural’), and finish the list. Give a brief reason for your preference.

Example: I prefer neutral colours, such as black, white and gray, because they are easy to match and look professional.

× I like to wear a normal casual style like trousers or jeans which is make me feel comfortable.

✓ I like to wear a normal, casual style like trousers or jeans which makes me feel comfortable.

The relative clause refers to 'style' (singular) so the verb must be in third-person singular present form 'makes' rather than 'make'. Also add a comma between adjectives 'normal' and 'casual' for correct adjective order and clarity.

× I would say it depends on situations. If I got to attend a meeting or a professional meeting for instance I would wear professional clothes but in a daily normal days I was wear a casual clothes.

✓ I would say it depends on the situation. If I have to attend a professional meeting, for instance, I would wear professional clothes but on ordinary days I wear casual clothes.

Use 'depends on the situation' (singular, idiomatic), and the conditional clause should use present tense 'have to' for obligation. 'Daily normal days' is incorrect phrase; use 'ordinary days' or 'on ordinary days'. Use simple present 'wear' for habitual action instead of 'was wear'. Also remove redundant 'meeting' phrase.

× Absolutely, because teachers is comfortable and easy to wear anywhere.

✓ Absolutely, because T-shirts are comfortable and easy to wear anywhere.

The student likely meant 'T-shirts' not 'teachers'. 'T-shirts' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'. Ensure correct noun choice and subject-verb agreement.

× I don't really spend much time on choosing clothes because I'm a very easy going person. I normally SH pick whatever on the top of my wardrobe. However is umm it's special occasions I would spend some time picking.

✓ I don't really spend much time choosing clothes because I'm a very easygoing person. I normally just pick whatever is on the top of my wardrobe. However, on special occasions I would spend some time picking.

Remove unnecessary 'on' after 'spend time'—use 'spend time choosing'. 'Easygoing' is one word. Insert 'just' for naturalness and add 'is' for the clause 'whatever is on the top...'. Use 'on special occasions' not 'is umm it's special occasions'. Add commas for clarity.

× Oh, of course. Due to my positions as accountants, I normally have to wear formal clothes on weekdays. However, on the weekend I usually pick something easy like a teacher's and a jeans to wear.

✓ Oh, of course. Due to my position as an accountant, I normally have to wear formal clothes on weekdays. However, on the weekend I usually pick something easy like a T-shirt and jeans to wear.

Use singular 'position' and 'an accountant' if referring to one job; 'positions as accountants' is plural and mismatched. 'Teacher's' is incorrect noun; likely 'T-shirt'. Use plural noun 'jeans' without 'a'. Ensure noun forms match intended meaning.

× That's very interesting. Uh, because I'm an easy going person, so I normally don't like wearing things fancy or colorful. I usually wear things that is more natural color, I would say like blacks, white or.

✓ That's very interesting. Because I'm an easygoing person, I normally don't like wearing things that are flashy or colorful. I usually wear clothes in more natural colors, I would say like black or white.

Use 'easygoing' as one word. Do not combine 'because' and 'so' together. Use 'things that are' (plural subject with plural verb). 'Fancy' is better as 'flashy' here; 'more natural color' should be 'more natural colors'. Use 'black or white' (singular color words as adjectives) and remove trailing 'or'.