Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a brief example. Avoid repetition and correct word forms (e.g., 'often' not 'oftenly'). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'since'.

Example: I usually wear sports T-shirts and trainers because they are comfortable and practical. For example, when I go jogging in the park I can move freely and my clothes dry quickly.

Suggestion: Give one clear main point and two concise, properly linked reasons. Use correct verb forms and fewer hesitations. Replace vague phrases like 'depend depending on my emotion' with clearer explanations (e.g., 'depending on my mood or plans').

Example: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my everyday activities and mood. For instance, if I have a relaxed day at home or a casual meet-up, casual wear is more appropriate and comfortable.

Suggestion: Be specific and avoid unclear phrases. State a short topic sentence and give one precise supporting detail (e.g., choice of styles and affordability). Remove awkward expressions like 'have the relative of brand' and correct grammar.

Example: Yes, I like T-shirts because they are comfortable and affordable. Also, there are many styles and brands to choose from, so I can always find one that fits my taste.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give a clear, concise reason and one supporting detail. Avoid filler words and repetitions. Use a linking phrase like 'because' and correct sentence structure.

Example: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prioritise comfort and practicality. For example, I usually pick a simple casual outfit that looks neat and saves time in the morning.

× I would prefer to wear sports T-shirts and sports shoes since they are very convenient.

✓ I prefer to wear sports T-shirts and sports shoes because they are very convenient.

The speaker uses 'would prefer' which is conditional and not needed when stating a general preference. Use simple present 'prefer' for habitual or general facts.

× They are very comfortable and I also go to play sports oftenly.

✓ They are very comfortable and I also often play sports.

The adverb 'oftenly' is not correct; the correct form is 'often'. Place adverbs of frequency before the main verb ('often play') for natural word order.

× I would prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes since I can change them depend depending on my emotion, my schedule and I'm not familiar with smart clothes so I will say I'm preferred to wear comfortable and casual clothes more.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes since I can change them depending on my mood and my schedule, and I'm not familiar with smart clothes, so I would say I prefer comfortable, casual clothes.

Multiple issues: 'would prefer' changed to simple present 'prefer' for general preference; 'depend depending' is redundant and 'depend' should be 'depending'; 'emotion' is better as 'mood'; 'I'm preferred' is incorrect passive/tense — use 'I prefer'. Also added commas and simplified to avoid repetition.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts since they are very comfortable and have the relative of brand that I can choose the his most common clothes in the world.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts since they are very comfortable and come in many brands that I can choose from; they are among the most common clothes in the world.

The original has unclear structure and incorrect phrases: 'have the relative of brand' and 'choose the his' are incorrect. Use 'come in many brands' and 'choose from'. Also split into two clauses for clarity and use present simple for general facts.

× So I would say wearing T-shirts very convenient to obtain and very comfortable to wear.

✓ So I would say T-shirts are very easy to obtain and very comfortable to wear.

Missing verb 'are' causes ungrammatical sentence. Use 'easy to obtain' rather than 'very convenient to obtain' for natural phrasing and include 'are'.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes since I think clothing is not that important to me.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I think clothing is not that important to me.

Use 'because' instead of 'since' for clearer causal meaning in spoken answers; otherwise present tense is fine for habitual actions.

× I think for me comfortable and at least don't make people think I'm I'm a messy guy so I think umm.

✓ I think I prefer clothes that are comfortable and at least do not make people think I'm a messy person.

Sentence had missing verbs and incorrect structure: 'comfortable and at least don't make' is ungrammatical. Added 'prefer clothes that are' and 'do not make people think' and replaced 'messy guy' with more neutral 'messy person'. Removed filler 'umm'.