Music— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and fluent: remove fillers (uh, um), correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Aim for 2–3 sentences, using linking words if adding a reason. Also use more precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘people’ not ‘the human’).

Example: I prefer happy music. I enjoy dancing to upbeat songs, and I think they lift people’s moods because the rhythm makes you feel energetic.

Suggestion: Speak with correct grammar and fewer repetitions: avoid extra fillers, use correct verb forms, and combine ideas with linking words. Provide a clear short answer and one specific supporting detail about how it affects you.

Example: Yes, it definitely makes me feel more excited and happier. For example, upbeat music energizes me in the morning and improves my mood throughout the day.

× I prefer happy music because, uh, I like to dance on this happy music and I believe, uh, the human who listen to happy music, he will be more happy.

✓ I prefer happy music because I like dancing to happy music, and I believe people who listen to happy music will be happier.

Errors: 'dance on this happy music' is unnatural; use 'dance to' or 'dance to the music'. 'I like dancing' uses the gerund after 'like' (verb + -ing). 'the human who listen' has incorrect noun choice and subject-verb agreement: 'human' should be 'people' and 'listen' should be 'listen' for plural (or 'listens' for singular). 'he will be more happy' repeats subject and uses comparative incorrectly; use 'will be happier'. Suggestion: use 'I like dancing to happy music' and 'people who listen... will be happier' to correct form and natural phrasing.

× Yes, uh, it's make me more excited and more happier.

✓ Yes, it makes me more excited and happier.

Errors: 'it's make' is wrong because third person singular present requires 'makes'. Also 'more happier' is redundant; 'happier' is already comparative and should not combine with 'more'. Suggestion: use 'it makes me more excited and happier.'

× Umm and uh, it's uh, it's give me a good vibe on my day.

✓ It gives me a good vibe throughout my day.

Errors: 'it's give' requires correct verb agreement 'it gives'. Preposition 'on my day' is incorrect; use 'throughout my day' or 'in my day'/'during my day'. Also replace 'good vibe' possibly with 'a good vibe' (need indefinite article). Suggestion: 'It gives me a good vibe throughout my day.'