Teachers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and add a brief specific reason with one linking word. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes. My favorite teacher is my English professor because he is kind, understanding and optimistic. For example, he always gives detailed feedback on my essays, which helped me improve my writing.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence stating your decision, then briefly explain reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (adjective vs adverb), reduce hesitation, and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I don't think I want to be a teacher because I get stressed easily and feel it would be challenging. However, I do love children, so I have sometimes dreamed about teaching in a supportive role.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific example with a linking word and finish the thought. Avoid trailing off and repetition.

Example: Yes, I remember many childhood teachers because they were very kind. For instance, my geography teacher was especially supportive; she always encouraged me to ask questions and explore topics further.

Suggestion: Answer directly using correct verb forms (use negative with auxiliary), give one brief reason, and avoid fillers. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

Example: No, I don't have contact with my primary school teachers because I moved and studied in several different cities. As a result, I lost touch with most of them.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating the help received, then give a specific example and use linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Avoid repetition and finish the example.

Example: My favourite teacher helped me become more confident speaking in public because I used to have social anxiety. For example, she gave me small classroom tasks and praised my progress, which gradually reduced my fear.

Suggestion: Give a direct comparison sentence, then provide one specific reason with an example. Eliminate hesitations and complete the example coherently.

Example: I prefer my high school teachers because they were more helpful and understanding. For example, one teacher would notice when I struggled and offer practical advice and extra support to improve my work.

× Yes I do and one of my favorite teacher is my English professor because his so kind and understandable and optimistic person for.

✓ Yes, I do, and one of my favorite teachers is my English professor because he is so kind, understanding, and optimistic.

The noun 'teacher' should be plural after 'one of my' (singular and plural issue). 'His' is incorrect pronoun and missing verb: use 'he is'. 'Understandable' describes something easy to understand, but 'understanding' (an adjective for a person who shows empathy) is correct. Also fix word order and add commas. Suggestion: Use 'one of my favorite teachers' and complete verb phrases (he is). Use 'understanding' to describe a person.

× She always encouraged me to.

✓ She always encouraged me.

The verb 'encouraged' is correctly in past tense but the sentence ends with 'to' implying an infinitive; the correct complete sentence is 'She always encouraged me.' The trailing 'to' is unnecessary and ungrammatical. Suggestion: Avoid incomplete infinitive markers at the end; complete the idea if you intend an infinitive (e.g. 'encouraged me to try new things').

× Honestly I don't think this job suits me because I'm very stressful person I get stressed and angry are simple things but I as I love children I I have always dreamed about to teach.

✓ Honestly, I don't think this job suits me because I'm a very stressed person; I get stressed and angry easily, but since I love children, I have always dreamed of teaching.

'I'm very stressful person' incorrectly uses 'stressful' (causing stress) instead of 'stressed' (feeling stress) — adjective choice (present tense context). 'Are simple things' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'easily'. 'Dreamed about to teach' is incorrect verb pattern: after 'dream' use 'of' + gerund (dreamed of teaching) or 'dreamed about' + gerund. Also remove duplicate 'I' and fix sentence connectors. Suggestion: Use 'I'm a very stressed person' and 'I have always dreamed of teaching.' Use semicolon or separate sentences to improve clarity.

× No, I have any contact with my primary teachers as I studied in several cities and my primary was in another city, so I don't have, uh, any contact with them. Whoa.

✓ No, I don't have any contact with my primary school teachers because I studied in several cities and my primary school was in another city, so I don't keep in touch with them.

'I have any contact' is incorrect negative construction; English requires 'I don't have any contact' (use of auxiliary). Pronoun 'primary' used alone is unclear; say 'primary school'. Repetition 'I don't have... any contact' corrected for clarity. 'Keep in touch with' is more natural than 'have contact with.' Suggestion: Use proper negative auxiliary 'do not' + base verb and specify 'primary school teachers.'

× Well, one of them, they improve me, they help me to improve my social speaking or let's say speak in public because I used to have social anxiety and it was hard for me to speak in public.

✓ Well, one of them helped me; she helped me improve my public speaking because I used to have social anxiety and it was hard for me to speak in public.

Mixing singular 'one of them' with plural pronoun 'they' causes subject-verb agreement errors. Tense shifts are inconsistent: 'improve' vs past context. Use past tense 'helped' to match 'used to.' Also 'social speaking' is not natural; use 'public speaking.' Suggestion: Keep pronouns consistent with the subject (one of them -> she/he) and match verb tense to the time frame.

× Honestly, I prefer my high school teacher more than a primary school teacher because they were so helpful and understandable.

✓ Honestly, I prefer my high school teachers to my primary school teachers because they were so helpful and understanding.

'Prefer... more than' is awkward; use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons. 'Teacher' should be plural when speaking generally. 'Understandable' means easy to understand; to describe people use 'understanding.' Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and choose the correct adjective 'understanding.'

× She always, she, she used to give me advice is if she saw me with the.

✓ She always used to give me advice, for example, if she saw me struggling.

The original sentence is fragmented, has repetition 'she, she, she', and ends abruptly 'with the.' It's a sentence structure error. Provide a complete clause (e.g. 'if she saw me struggling') and remove fillers. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and complete conditional clauses; use 'for example' to introduce instances.