Teachers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác. Nên có 1 câu chủ đề rõ ràng (tên/ môn) và 1–2 câu hỗ trợ với chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ cách dạy, một kỷ niệm). Tránh lỗi số nhiều và thiếu từ. Dùng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần.

Example: Yes. My favourite teacher is my high school math teacher, Mr. Nguyen. He made difficult topics easy by using real-life examples and step-by-step explanations, so I always understood the lessons.

Suggestion: Cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Tránh mâu thuẫn ý ("can't teach" vs ý muốn ca ngợi). Nên nêu lý do cụ thể (yêu trẻ, truyền cảm hứng, thích giảng dạy) và một ví dụ về điều mình muốn làm nếu trở thành giáo viên.

Example: Yes, I would like to be a teacher because I enjoy helping students learn and grow. For example, I want to create engaging lessons that build confidence and encourage critical thinking.

Suggestion: Cần dùng cấu trúc câu chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp. Tránh lặp từ (remember) và sửa lỗi chữ ("Morrow" không rõ). Nên nêu tên hoặc môn học và một kỷ niệm cụ thể về điều học được để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Example: Yes, I still remember my primary school teacher, Mrs. Tran. She taught me not only reading and math but also how to be disciplined; I remember she stayed after class to help me with homework.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp trước rồi giải thích ngắn gọn; sửa ngữ pháp (thời và số). Nên cung cấp lý do cụ thể và có thể nói liệu bạn có kế hoạch liên lạc lại hay không. Tránh tiếng lắp (uh) trong bài thi.

Example: I used to stay in touch with my primary teacher while I was in secondary school, but now we have lost contact because we haven't met for years. I would like to reconnect by sending a message or email.

Suggestion: Cần diễn đạt rõ các cách cụ thể giáo viên giúp (cách giảng, phương pháp học, hỗ trợ cá nhân). Dùng cấu trúc mạch lạc với liên từ và sửa động từ sai. Giữ 2–3 câu hỗ trợ với ví dụ cụ thể.

Example: My favourite teacher helped me by explaining problems step-by-step and giving useful practice exercises. She also gave me personal feedback and encouragement, which improved my confidence and grades.

Suggestion: Cần rõ ràng so sánh và dùng ngữ pháp thì đúng. Nêu một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể (tận tâm, quan tâm cá nhân) và ví dụ minh họa. Tránh lặp và dùng từ thừa như "showed off" nếu ý muốn khen ngợi.

Example: I prefer my primary school teachers because they were very caring and dedicated. For example, my primary teacher often stayed late to help struggling students, which made me respect her a lot.

× He is such an devoted teacher that every students in the class love him very much and I am interested in his lesson and his.

✓ He is such a devoted teacher that every student in the class loves him very much, and I am interested in his lessons and teaching.

'Every students' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular noun; use 'every student'. Subject-verb agreement: 'every student' takes singular verb 'loves'. 'His lesson and his' is unclear and ungrammatical; replace with 'his lessons and teaching' to convey meaning clearly.

× Absolutely yes. Teachers is one of the most humane job in the world that they can't teach student knowledge and they can bring up children to their and pave the way to their success.

✓ Absolutely yes. Teaching is one of the most humane jobs in the world; teachers not only teach students knowledge but also bring up children and pave the way for their success.

There are multiple issues: 'Teachers is' mixes plural subject with singular verb (subject-verb agreement) and wrong lexical choice; 'teaching' or 'teachers' with correct verb should be used. 'One of the most humane job' should be 'one of the most humane jobs' (singular/plural and article). 'They can't teach student knowledge' likely intended 'not only teach students knowledge' (modal/meaning issue). 'Bring up children to their' is ungrammatical; use 'bring up children and pave the way for their success' for correct preposition and clarity.

× Yes I do. I am a remember who always remember the teacher who taught me everything from education to Morrow and I was really respected to the teacher.

✓ Yes I do. I remember the teacher who taught me everything, from education to morals, and I respected that teacher very much.

'I am a remember who always remember' uses incorrect verb forms and unnecessary nominalization; use 'I remember'. 'Morrow' is incorrect word choice; likely 'morals' or 'manner' fits. 'I was really respected to the teacher' misuses passive/verb and preposition; correct is 'I respected that teacher' or 'I had great respect for the teacher'.

× I used to keep in touch with my primary teacher uh in secondary school, but right now I'm not because teacher in primary school are not so familiar with me now and we don't meet each other for years so.

✓ I used to keep in touch with my primary school teachers while I was in secondary school, but right now I'm not because the teachers from primary school are not very familiar with me anymore, and we have not met each other for years.

Tense and agreement fixes: 'used to keep' is fine but timing needs clarification: 'while I was in secondary school'. 'teacher in primary school are' has subject-verb agreement error and missing article: use 'the teachers from primary school are'. 'We don't meet each other for years' should be present perfect negative 'we have not met each other for years' to show an action continuing up to now.

× My favorite teacher also helped me find instructing, made a way to finish homework or to do exercises. Umm. Besides, my teacher also be a close friend and she always encouraged me to be better.

✓ My favorite teacher also helped me find guidance, showed me ways to finish homework and do exercises. Besides, my teacher was also a close friend and she always encouraged me to improve.

'Find instructing' is incorrect collocation; use 'find guidance' or 'receive instruction'. 'Made a way to finish homework' should be 'showed me ways' for correct verb and noun use. 'My teacher also be a close friend' uses wrong verb form; use past tense 'was' (or 'is' if still true). 'Encouraged me to be better' is understandable but 'encouraged me to improve' is more natural.

× In my opinion, I will like my primary school teachers more than high school teachers because of her devoted dedication in her job and the humanity that she showed off and I was very respectful.

✓ In my opinion, I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because of their devoted dedication to their job and the kindness they showed, and I respect them very much.

Tense/modal: 'I will like' is incorrect for a general preference; use present 'I like'. Pronoun and number agreement: 'her devoted dedication' mismatches plural 'teachers' and singular 'her'; use 'their' and 'they'. 'Devoted dedication in her job' should be 'devoted dedication to their job'. 'Showed off' has wrong nuance; use 'showed' or 'demonstrated'. 'I was very respectful' is wrong verb form; use 'I respect them' or 'I was very respectful towards them' depending on intended meaning.