Teachers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (a lot, teaches maths → teaches maths, he’s caring, taught us about careers).

Example: Yes. My favourite teacher is Sukhwinder Sir, who teaches mathematics. He is very caring and often advises students about career choices, which helped me plan my future.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first, then briefly explain with clear reasons and linking words. Fix grammar and redundancy ("in a future", "main motive"). Keep within 3–4 sentences and use specific details (when, how you will help).

Example: No, I don't. I want to become a doctor because I have dreamed of it since childhood, and I want to help poor people who cannot afford medical care. For example, I hope to work in free clinics after I qualify.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the teacher, then add one or two specific memories. Correct pronoun and article errors (a very good and kind teacher; his teaching style). Use linking words like "because" or "for example".

Example: Yes, I do. I still remember Sukhwinder Sir because he explained difficult maths topics clearly and encouraged me when I struggled. For example, he used simple examples to make complex ideas easier to understand.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give one or two specific channels and perhaps frequency. Use natural phrasing ("I keep in touch","on social media","by phone"). Avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I keep in touch with some of my primary school teachers. We contact each other mainly through WhatsApp and Facebook, and I also have a few of their phone numbers, so we message or call occasionally.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence, then list two specific ways the teacher helped, using linking words (for example, such as, moreover). Correct grammar (they listened to me about many things; help me with doubts; how to tackle problems). Be specific about one example.

Example: He has helped me in two main ways. First, he listened to my concerns and gave practical career advice, such as which subjects to focus on. Second, he helped me solve difficult maths problems by teaching step-by-step strategies, which improved my confidence.

× Yes, I have a lots of favorite teachers but one of them is Sukhwinder Sir who teaches maths and he's very caring and taught us about our career in very good way and he's very kind person.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of favorite teachers, but one of them is Sukhwinder Sir, who teaches math and is very caring. He taught us about our careers in a very good way, and he is a very kind person.

The phrase 'a lots' is incorrect; the correct form is 'a lot' (quantifier) or 'lots of' followed by a noun. 'Maths' is acceptable in British English but 'math' is common in other varieties; keep consistent. 'Taught us about our career' should use plural 'careers' because 'us' refers to multiple students. Run-on sentence was split for clarity and correct punctuation. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' or 'a lot' for quantity, ensure noun number matches (careers), and break long sentences into shorter ones.

× Let me thinking no I don't want to become a teacher in a future since my main motive is to become a doctor as it is my main dream from my childhood.

✓ Let me think. No, I don't want to become a teacher in the future because my main goal is to become a doctor; it has been my dream since childhood.

'Let me thinking' is incorrect; the phrase is 'Let me think' (base verb after let). 'in a future' is wrong; use 'in the future'. 'Motive' is better as 'goal' or 'aim' in this context. Use present perfect 'has been my dream since childhood' to indicate a desire from past continuing to present. Suggestion: use 'Let me think', 'in the future', and appropriate tense 'has been' to express ongoing past-to-present states.

× Only become to doctor and help the poor people who can't afford the medicines.

✓ I only want to become a doctor and help poor people who cannot afford medicine.

'Only become to doctor' is ungrammatical; you need a subject and verb like 'I want to become a doctor'. 'the poor people' can be 'poor people' and 'can't' in formal answer should be 'cannot'. 'the medicines' is unnecessarily definite; 'medicine' as an uncountable noun fits here. Suggestion: include subject 'I', use 'want to become', and choose correct noun forms (uncountable 'medicine').

× Yes, that is Sukhwinder Sir. I know him very personally, he's very good and kind teacher and he taught me the subject maths and I love her teaching way.

✓ Yes, that is Sukhwinder Sir. I know him personally; he is a very good and kind teacher, and he taught me math. I love his way of teaching.

Pronoun mismatch: 'him' is correct earlier but 'her' is wrong when referring to the same male teacher; use 'his'. 'Very personally' is awkward; 'personally' suffices. 'The subject maths' should be 'math' or 'mathematics'. 'I love his way of teaching' is natural word order. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree with antecedent gender ('his'), simplify adverb use, and use natural noun order for 'way of teaching'.

× Yeah, I contact with my primary school teachers on social media. They are connected with me on my social media profiles. Also, I have their numbers in my mobile phones.

✓ Yes, I contact my primary school teachers on social media. They are connected with me on my social media profiles. Also, I have their numbers in my mobile phone.

The verb 'contact' does not require 'with' when used in this way; say 'contact someone'. 'Mobile phones' should be singular when referring to one's device: 'my mobile phone' or 'my phone'. Suggestion: use 'contact someone' (no 'with') and use singular 'my mobile phone' unless you own multiple devices.

× As well they heard me in my lot of things as they help me in my career and the most important thing that when I get any doubt in any related questions they help me how to tackle with the questions and how to solve this problems. They also help me to choose my career in best way.

✓ They have listened to me about many things and helped me with my career. Most importantly, when I have doubts about related questions, they help me tackle and solve these problems. They also help me choose my career in the best way.

Original has multiple issues: 'heard me in my lot of things' is incorrect; use 'listened to me about many things'. Tense should be present perfect or past depending, here present perfect 'have listened' and 'have helped' shows ongoing support. 'When I get any doubt' should be 'when I have doubts'. 'How to tackle with the questions' is incorrect; use 'help me tackle the questions' or 'show me how to tackle the questions' (no 'with'). 'This problems' should be 'these problems'. 'Choose my career in best way' needs article 'the best way' and verb form 'help me choose'. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'listen to', 'help with', 'have doubts', 'tackle questions', and correct demonstratives ('these').