Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetitions, use correct articles and word order. Add one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I like to keep things tidy. For example, I arrange my clothes by type and color in my wardrobe so I can find items quickly, especially when I'm in a hurry.

Suggestion: Improve past-tense accuracy and fluency. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was at primary school my mother taught me to tidy my things, and if I failed she would scold me. As a result, I developed a habit of organizing my room and I still appreciate her guidance.

Suggestion: Be specific and complete sentences. Use present simple for routines and linking words (for example, so, therefore). Mention concrete actions and avoid trailing off. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I keep my study space tidy by using shelves and a wardrobe to store clothes and books. I also remove non-essential items from the room so there is more space to work.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and clarity: use a clear topic sentence and then a specific reason with an example. Use linking words like because or for example. Avoid vague phrases and hesitations.

Example: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because it saves time. For example, if there is an emergency I can immediately find important documents or medication without searching.

× Yes, I'm a organized any person, so I I would like the things properly umm in a in a good spot, particularly my clothes.

✓ Yes, I'm an organized person, so I like to keep things properly in a good spot, particularly my clothes.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound and 'organized person' (adjective + noun) is correct; remove extraneous words ('any') and repeated fillers; change 'would like the things properly in a in a good spot' to 'like to keep things properly in a good spot' for natural adjective/adverb use and word order.

× I I want to have the specific items in the cabinet, so every time I I need something like specific clothes, I can able to find it right away.

✓ I want to have specific items in the cabinet, so every time I need a particular piece of clothing, I can find it right away.

Remove redundant 'can able to' (modal + adjective error). Use 'can find' or 'be able to find' but not both. Also replace 'something like specific clothes' with 'a particular piece of clothing' for clarity and correct noun phrase.

× Yes, I remembered when I was in my primary school, my mother teach me how to to fix and organize my my things properly.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was in primary school, my mother taught me how to fix and organize my things properly.

Use present tense 'remember' to express a memory in general; use past tense 'taught' for the action in the past. Remove duplicate words and unnecessary articles ('my primary school' -> 'primary school').

× And if I don't do it in a proper way, she get mad on us.

✓ And if I didn't do it properly, she got mad at us.

Match tense: past habitual event requires past tense 'didn't do' and 'got mad'. Use 'mad at' rather than 'mad on'. Use 'properly' (adverb) instead of 'in a proper way' for concise natural phrasing.

× And also that way I develop the the sense of being a tidy person and I appreciate my mom because she. Instructed.

✓ And that way I developed a sense of being a tidy person, and I appreciate my mom because she instructed me.

Use past tense 'developed' for past process, use 'a sense' (article), combine broken sentence 'she. Instructed.' into 'she instructed me' to complete the verb and object; remove duplicated words.

× I have a specific wardrobe that I can able to organize my my clothes as well as I put some not very important items outside of my room so I have more space particularly of my clothes and.

✓ I have a specific wardrobe where I can organize my clothes, and I put less important items outside my room so I have more space for my clothes.

Remove 'can able to' and duplicate words. Use 'where I can organize' or 'in which I can organize' for relative clause; use 'less important' instead of 'not very important' for natural phrasing; use 'space for my clothes' not 'particularly of my clothes'. Remove trailing 'and'.

× Yes, it's very important to being a neat and organized person because if you have a specific items in your house, you can find it easily without thinking where is it.

✓ Yes, it's very important to be a neat and organized person because if you have specific items in your house, you can find them easily without wondering where they are.

Use infinitive 'to be' not 'to being'. 'Specific items' is plural so use 'them' and 'they are' rather than 'it' and 'where is it'. Use 'wondering' instead of 'thinking' for natural phrasing.

× And specifically if it's something like emergency, yeah, bad things you can find.

✓ And specifically if it's an emergency, you can find what you need quickly.

Use 'an emergency' (article) and avoid vague 'bad things you can find'. Replace with clear pronoun and verb: 'find what you need quickly'. This corrects pronoun/phrase reference and improves clarity.