Tidiness— Part 1 Report

× For example, I make my bed every day after I waking up because it has been a part of my routine.

✓ For example, I make my bed every day after I wake up because it has been a part of my routine.

句中出现了“after I waking up”，这是动词-ing形式被错误用在句子中，正确的结构应使用一般现在时的动词原形或现在时形式“wake”而不是“waking”。原因是“after”后接完整子句时需要使用主语+动词原形或适当时态，而不是现在分词。建议：在表示日常习惯时使用一般现在时，改为“after I wake up”。

× Absolutely, I would like to clean my room and wipe my desk regularly because my parents told me to do that when I was a child.

✓ Absolutely, I liked to clean my room and wipe my desk regularly because my parents told me to do that when I was a child.

原句中使用了“would like”表示愿望，与后面“when I was a child”这一过去时间点不一致。要表达过去的习惯，应使用过去式（liked 或 used to）或短语“used to”。建议：若指过去习惯可说“I used to clean my room and wipe my desk regularly”或“I liked to clean my room...”以保持时态一致。

× Yes, as I mentioned before, my parents asked me to do so when I was a child and I have cultivated that habit that time for now.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned before, my parents asked me to do so when I was a child and I have cultivated that habit since then.

原句“that time for now”表达不自然且时态混乱。要表达从过去到现在持续的状态，应使用“since then”搭配现在完成时“have cultivated”。建议使用“have cultivated that habit since then”或改为过去时描述过去习惯。

× I also like tidying my room every weekend.

✓ I also like tidying my room on weekends.

英语中谈论“每个周末”通常用介词短语“on weekends”或“every weekend”。原句“every weekend”语法上其实可接受，但与上下文更自然的表达是“on weekends”。若保留“every weekend”也可，但注意介词搭配。建议使用“on weekends”或保持“every weekend”。

× I use link rollers to clean the floors, then wipe my desk with the clothes.

✓ I use lint rollers to clean the floor, then wipe my desk with a cloth.

原句中“link rollers”应为“lint rollers”（拼写错误，不在列出问题但影响理解）。同时“the floors”不必要使用定冠词，应为“the floor”或“floors”取决数量；“the clothes”不对，正确为“a cloth”或“cloths”。根据语境，使用“lint rollers”、“the floor”或“floors”与“a cloth”。建议记住常用搭配：“lint roller”，“wipe with a cloth”。

× I also put the unused books back to the bookshelf to make my place looks tidy.

✓ I also put the unused books back on the bookshelf to make my place look tidy.

动词短语应为“put ... back on the bookshelf”，而不是“back to”。此外“make my place looks tidy”中“make”后接动词要用原形，应为“make my place look tidy”。建议：使用固定搭配“put ... on the bookshelf”和在“make”后用动词原形。

× Yes, As for me, it's a conducive way to help me concentrate on my study and it's a tidy place, also make me feel relaxed and it's also a good habit.

✓ Yes, as for me, it helps me concentrate on my studies; a tidy place also makes me feel relaxed, and it's a good habit.

原句连接混乱，大小写错误（As），并且句子含有多个并列从句但结构不一致。“it's a conducive way to help me concentrate on my study”表述笨拙，且“make me feel relaxed”缺少主语与正确动词形式。应把句子拆分或用正确连词连接，保持主谓一致。建议：使用简洁句子，例如“It helps me concentrate on my studies. A tidy place also makes me feel relaxed, and it's a good habit.”