Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep your answer concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common grammar errors (e.g., verb forms, pronouns) and avoid redundancy (don't repeat words like "clean" and "tidy" too often).

Example: Yes, I enjoy keeping things tidy. My mother taught me to be organised, so I usually put things back in their place and clean surfaces regularly. This habit helps me stay calm and keeps the home hygienic.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear past-time reference and one specific reason or example. Use correct past tense forms and avoid awkward phrasing. Use a linking word to connect reason to statement (e.g., "because" or "so").

Example: No, I didn't keep my room tidy when I was a child because I preferred playing and often left toys scattered on the floor. As a result, my parents frequently asked me to clean up.

× I love to keep things very clean and tidy as this habit is came in me from my mom as they're very similar to me.

✓ I love to keep things very clean and tidy because this habit came from my mom, since she is very similar to me.

Errors: 'is came in me' uses incorrect tense and auxiliary; correct is simple past 'came' and preposition 'from'. 'as' used twice creates awkward clause; replace first 'as' with 'because' and second 'as' with 'since' or restructure. Also 'they're very similar to me' is wrong pronoun and contraction; refer to mother with 'she is' or 'she was'. Suggestion: use simple past for inheritance of habit ('came from my mom') and maintain correct subject pronoun 'she'. Grammar problem types: 5 (Past tense issue), 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× She also like very neat and clean tidy rooms because it is important to maintain our house well for hygiene it is good for.

✓ She also likes very neat, tidy rooms because it is important to maintain our house well for hygiene.

Errors: 'She also like' lacks third-person singular -s; correct form 'She also likes' (Grammar problem type 2). Word order and redundancy: 'clean tidy' should be 'neat, tidy' or 'clean and tidy'. The clause 'for hygiene it is good for' is ungrammatical and redundant; rephrase to 'because it is important to maintain our house well for hygiene.' Suggestion: add -s for third-person singular, use parallel adjectives with comma or 'and', and place purpose phrase at sentence end correctly. Grammar problem types: 2 (Third person singular issue), 18 (Incorrect order of adjectives), 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× When I was a child I usually keep my room very dirty as we know that child main focus is only to play and destroy the things.

✓ When I was a child I usually kept my room very messy because we know that a child's main focus is only to play and to break things.

Errors: 'I usually keep' is wrong tense with 'When I was a child' — use past 'kept' (Grammar problem type 5). 'very dirty' is odd for a room; 'messy' is more natural (word choice). 'child main focus' needs possessive: 'a child's main focus'. 'destroy the things' is unnatural; use 'break things' or 'play with and break things'. Suggestion: match past time frame with past tense verbs, use possessive for noun modifiers, and choose natural collocations. Grammar problem types: 5 (Past tense issue), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns/possessive), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).

× So when I was child I don't keep my home tidy.

✓ So when I was a child I didn't keep my home tidy.

Errors: Time clause 'when I was a child' requires past tense in main clause; use past simple negative 'didn't keep' rather than present 'don't keep' (Grammar problem type 5). Also 'when I was child' is missing article 'a' (Grammar problem type 22 Article errors). Suggestion: use 'I didn't keep' for past negative and include 'a child'. Grammar problem types: 5 (Past tense issue), 22 (Article errors), 27 (Subject-verb agreement)