Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and natural: avoid incorrect idioms and filler words, use one concise topic sentence followed by 1–2 specific supporting details linked logically. Correct word choice (e.g. "particular" not "chlorine free") and remove hesitation will improve fluency and coherence. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding a reason or example.

Example: Yes, I do. I prefer to work in a tidy space because clutter distracts me and makes it hard to concentrate. For example, when my desk is organised I can find documents quickly and complete tasks faster.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear contrast and specific details. Use correct tense and plural forms, avoid repeating words, and link ideas with words like "however" or "but". Give a short example or reason to illustrate the change from childhood to now.

Example: Not really — when I was a child I often left toys and clothes on the floor because I was more interested in playing than tidying. However, as I grew older I learned to organise my room because it helps me focus and saves time when I need something.

× Very much, I am a kind of chlorine free person and top that I cannot proceed on doing any type of activity if I don't tidy the place up.

✓ Very much. I am the kind of person who prefers to avoid chlorine, and on top of that I cannot start any activity if I don't tidy the place up.

The original sentence has awkward adjective/noun usage and word choice. 'Chlorine free person' is unclear; use 'the kind of person who prefers to avoid chlorine' to show the adjectival idea. 'Top that' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'on top of that'. 'Proceed on doing' is wrong verb collocation; use 'start' or 'proceed with' followed by a noun or gerund. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× Back when I was a child I I used to just throw my stuffs around since I'm not that kind of clean freak as I am now, but I do still keep my things clean but in a messy type of environment.

✓ Back when I was a child I used to just throw my stuff around since I wasn't as much of a clean freak as I am now, but I still keep my things clean, although the environment is messy.

'Stuffs' is incorrect pluralization; 'stuff' is an uncountable noun. 'I I' is a typo and should be 'I'. Tense consistency: talking about childhood requires past tense 'wasn't'. The comparative phrase 'not that kind of clean freak' is awkward; use 'wasn't as much of a clean freak'. The clause 'I do still keep my things clean but in a messy type of environment' is repetitive and unclear; rephrase to 'I still keep my things clean, although the environment is messy' for clarity and correct conjunction use.

× ...since I'm not that kind of clean freak as I am now, but I do still keep my things clean but in a messy type of environment.

✓ ...since I wasn't as much of a clean freak as I am now, but I still keep my things clean, although the environment is messy.

The sentence mixes present and past forms incorrectly. For childhood reference use past tense 'wasn't'. Also 'I do still keep' is unnecessary emphatic present; 'I still keep' is more natural. Ensure subject-verb forms match tense and person.