Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, correct grammar, and make your points concise with linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Fix verb forms and plural agreement (e.g., 'keep' not 'keeps', 'guests' not 'guest'). Avoid redundancy and limit to 2–4 short sentences.

Example: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it helps me find items quickly. For example, when my desk is organised I can save time looking for documents, so I feel less stressed. Also, tidy rooms make guests feel more comfortable.

Suggestion: Give a clear past-focused answer and use correct past tense forms. Begin with a topic sentence about the past (e.g., 'Yes, I used to...'), then explain briefly why with specific detail and a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. Correct common errors: 'when I was a child', 'my mum taught me', 'as I grew up'. Avoid unclear phrases like 'light chow'.

Example: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy as a child because my mum taught me to clean every weekend. For example, she showed me how to fold clothes and put toys away, so by the time I grew up keeping things organised became a habit.

× Yes, when I keeps it tidy I can search with easily to get my things and when my guest came to my home they will feel more comfortable and calm.

✓ Yes, when I keep it tidy I can find my things more easily, and when guests come to my home they feel more comfortable and calm.

There are multiple subject-verb agreement and related grammar issues: 'keeps' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base verb 'keep' (Grammar problem type ID 27). 'search with easily to get my things' is ungrammatical: use 'find my things more easily' to convey purpose and correct adverb placement (Grammar problem type ID 20 and 26). 'my guest came to my home they will feel' mixes tenses and number: 'guest' should be plural 'guests' to match 'they' or change pronoun; here using 'guests' with present tense 'come' keeps general meaning and 'they feel' matches present-tense habitual meaning (Grammar problem type IDs 1, 6, 27). Suggestions: use 'keep' after 'I', replace 'search with easily to get' with 'find ... more easily', use consistent plural/singular for guest/they and maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× Yes, when I was child my mum is teaching me how to make it clean and tidy, so when I was grow up my room is tidy, light chow.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my mum taught me how to keep it clean and tidy, so when I grew up my room stayed tidy and neat.

Multiple errors: 'when I was child' needs an article 'a' (Grammar problem type ID 22 'Article errors'). 'my mum is teaching me' uses present continuous but the action refers to the past, so use past simple 'taught' (Grammar problem type ID 5). 'how to make it clean and tidy' is slightly awkward; 'how to keep it clean and tidy' is more natural (Grammar problem type ID 26). 'when I was grow up' is incorrect tense and form; use 'when I grew up' (Grammar problem type ID 5). 'my room is tidy, light chow' is unclear; 'is tidy' should be past 'stayed tidy' to match narrative, and 'light chow' appears to be wrong wording—replace with 'neat' or omit (Grammar problem type IDs 26 and 13). Suggestions: add articles where needed, keep past-tense consistency for past events, use correct past forms 'taught' and 'grew', and choose clear adjectives like 'neat'.