Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear opening sentence, and avoid repetition such as “daily” and “we used to go.” Use the natural phrase “on a daily basis” and say “after school,” not “after my school.” Organize the answer with a linking word such as “usually” or “and,” then add one specific activity. Also work on fluency by avoiding repeated words and false starts.

Example: Yes, I really enjoyed going to parks as a child. I usually went there after school with my friends or family, and we played games such as football and hide-and-seek. It was a fun way to relax and spend time outdoors.

Suggestion: State your main idea clearly and correct the contradiction between “I can go” and the intended meaning, which seems to be “I cannot go very often.” Use “at weekends” rather than “in my weekend days,” and use the present tense “we go” because you are describing a current routine. Explain that you go when your friends or siblings are available, and give a natural reason such as enjoying the peaceful atmosphere.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, although I cannot go very often because of my busy schedule. At weekends, I sometimes go with my friends or siblings if they are free. We usually stay for a while because the peaceful atmosphere helps me relax.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct answer such as “Yes, definitely.” Correct the plural and article errors in “there are not many parks in the city.” For a future condition, use “if there were more parks” or “if the city built more parks,” followed by “it would be easier.” Finish the idea with a specific benefit, such as taking a short break during the working day. Avoid repeated words and do not leave the final sentence unfinished.

Example: Yes, definitely. There are not many parks in my city at the moment, so I would like to see more of them. If the city built more parks, people could take a short break, exercise, or relax outdoors during the day.

Suggestion: Give a clear, realistic answer and correct “one of my dream park” to “one of my dream parks” or “a park I would love to visit.” Since Jurassic Park is fictional, explain that you mean a dinosaur-themed park or museum inspired by the films. Replace “involve of” with “see” or “learn about,” and avoid repeating “wildlife animals.” Add one specific reason, such as seeing life-sized dinosaur models or learning about prehistoric creatures.

Example: I would love to visit a dinosaur-themed park or museum inspired by Jurassic Park. It would be exciting to see realistic dinosaur models and learn more about prehistoric animals. Although the film’s park is fictional, a museum like that would be a fascinating place to explore.

× In my childhood I I used to go to the park daily as in the deal daily basis.

✓ As a child, I used to go to the park daily.

The original sentence contains repeated words and an incorrect phrase, as in the deal daily basis. Use the simpler structure As a child, followed by the subject and verb.

× After my school with with my friends and family we used to get we used to go to the park and play some games and spend our time in the park.

✓ After school, my friends, my family, and I used to go to the park, play games, and spend time there.

After school is the natural expression. We do not normally use my school after after when referring to activities that happen after classes.

× Yes I do but due to the busy schedule I can go. I can go at the moment.

✓ Yes, I do, but because of my busy schedule, I cannot go at the moment.

The meaning requires a negative modal because the speaker says that the busy schedule prevents them from going. Use cannot or can not instead of can.

× But in my weekend days if everyone is free with my friends or my siblings then we used to go to the park and stay for a while for the peace.

✓ But on weekends, if everyone is free, my friends, my siblings, and I go to the park and stay there for a while to enjoy the peace.

Use on weekends, not in my weekend days. On is the standard preposition for regular days or periods such as on weekends and on weekdays.

× If everyone is free with my friends or my siblings then we used to go to the park.

✓ If everyone is free, my friends, my siblings, and I go to the park.

The question asks about a current habit. Used to describes a past habit that no longer happens, so use the simple present go for a regular activity now.

× In city there are not many park at the moment.

✓ In the city, there are not many parks at the moment.

Use the definite article the before city when referring to the speaker's particular city. The noun parks must be plural after the quantifier many.

× There are not many park at the moment.

✓ There are not many parks at the moment.

Many is used with plural countable nouns, so park must become parks.

× But if there will be many parks then it will be easy where we can go.

✓ But if there are many parks, it will be easier for us to find somewhere to go.

In a first conditional sentence, use the present tense after if, not will. Use it will be in the result clause. The phrase easier for us to find somewhere to go also gives the sentence a complete structure.

× We can go at the at the middle of our work and take some rest.

✓ We can go in the middle of our work and take a short rest.

Use in the middle of, not at the middle of. In is the correct preposition for a position within a period or activity.

× Then it will be easy where where we can go at the at the middle of our work and take some rest and.

✓ Then it will be easier for us to go there during our work break and take a short rest.

The original sentence has repeated words, an incomplete ending, and the incorrect structure easy where we can go. Use it will be easier for us to go there, followed by the purpose of going.

× One of my dream park is the Jurassic Park.

✓ One of my dream parks is Jurassic Park.

After one of, the noun must be plural, so park becomes parks. Jurassic Park is a proper name, so it normally does not need the article the.

× Which I have seen in the many movies and CDs.

✓ Which I have seen in many movies and on CDs.

Do not use the before the plural noun movies when speaking generally. Use in with movies and on with CDs because content is seen on a CD.

× Where where I can see the in in involve of dinosaurs and many wild wildlife animals in the in the Jurassic Park and the museum.

✓ There, I can see dinosaurs and many wild animals and visit the museum.

The original phrase contains repeated words and an incomplete structure. Use there to refer back to Jurassic Park, followed by the subject and coordinated verbs can see and visit.

× Many wild animals in the Jurassic Park and the museum.

✓ Many wild animals in Jurassic Park and the museum.

Jurassic Park is a proper name, so it does not normally take the definite article the. The article before museum can remain when referring to a specific museum.