Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which made those afternoons very happy.

Suggestion: Answer directly and naturally: say whether you still like parks and explain briefly with one clear reason. Correct grammar (use present tense) and avoid self-contradiction. Use a linking word to connect reason.

Example: Not so much, because I prefer exercising at the gym now. However, I still visit parks occasionally for walks when I want fresh air.

Suggestion: Respond clearly, avoid repetition, and give a specific reason with an example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct infinitive forms.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe places for children to play. For example, new parks with playgrounds and benches would allow families to socialize and children to meet friends.

Suggestion: Be specific about a park or type of park you want to visit and explain why. Use correct conditional and future forms, and a linking word to clarify reason.

Example: If I have the chance, I would like to visit national parks in Australia because they have unique wildlife and landscapes. For instance, seeing kangaroos and coastal cliffs would be a great learning experience.

× Yes, I really like going to the parks when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to parks when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'like' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the past context; also remove the definite article 'the' before 'parks' because speaking about parks in general does not require it. Suggestion: use 'I really liked going to parks when I was a child.'

× It's really happy and enjoy.

✓ It was really enjoyable and fun.

The original uses 'happy' and 'enjoy' incorrectly to describe the experience. 'Happy' describes people, not an experience, and 'enjoy' is a verb lacking a subject. Use adjectives like 'enjoyable' and 'fun' and match past tense 'was' to the childhood context. Suggestion: 'It was really enjoyable and fun.'

× No, I'm not.

✓ No, I don't anymore.

The examiner asked if the student still likes going to parks now. Reply 'No, I'm not' is incorrect because 'like' is not a state expressed with 'to be'. Use 'I don't anymore' or 'I don't anymore enjoy going to parks' to correctly negate the habitual action. Suggestion: 'No, I don't anymore.'

× Right now I am grow up.

✓ Right now I am grown up.

The verb phrase 'grow up' is the base form; to indicate completed state use past participle 'grown' with 'am' to form adjective 'grown up'. Alternatively say 'I have grown up'. Suggestion: 'Right now I am grown up.' or 'I have grown up.'

× I am old people so don't much go to the park park, but I like go to gyms.

✓ I am older now so I don't go to parks much, but I like going to gyms.

Multiple errors: 'old people' is incorrect — use 'older now' or 'an older person'. 'Don't much go' has wrong word order; adverb 'much' should follow auxiliary 'do' as 'don't ... much' but better 'don't go ... much'. Duplicate 'park park'. 'I like go to gyms' must use gerund: 'like going to gyms'. Suggestion: 'I am older now so I don't go to parks much, but I like going to gyms.'

× Yes, I really like, I really like to see some more parks in my city because it's really fun for children.

✓ Yes, I would really like to see more parks in my city because they are really fun for children.

The phrase 'I really like, I really like to see' is redundant and awkward. Use conditional 'would like' to express desire. 'It's really fun for children' should use plural 'they are' to refer to 'parks'. Also drop 'some' if unneeded; 'see more parks' is clearer. Suggestion: 'Yes, I would really like to see more parks in my city because they are really fun for children.'

× They can enjoy it and to meet a friend, to meet a new friend.

✓ Children can enjoy them and meet friends, including new friends.

Pronoun reference: 'it' is singular but refers to 'parks' (plural), so use 'them'. Also unnecessary infinitive 'to meet' after 'and' — parallel verbs should be used: 'enjoy' and 'meet'. Use plural 'friends' and add 'including new friends' for clarity. Suggestion: 'Children can enjoy them and meet friends, including new friends.'

× If I have a chance I want go to any parks.

✓ If I have the chance, I want to go to any park.

Missing 'to' before the verb 'go' — after 'want' use the infinitive 'to go'. Also idiomatic: 'the chance' is more natural than 'a chance' in this context; 'any parks' is awkward — singular 'any park' or 'any parks' depending on meaning. Suggestion: 'If I have the chance, I want to go to any park.'

× At Australia Parks, I think it's a strange place for me and I can learn more.

✓ In Australia, parks would be a strange place for me and I could learn more.

'At Australia Parks' is incorrect preposition and word order. Use 'In Australia' to refer to the country, and then 'parks' as the subject. Also adjust modality and tense: 'would be' or 'would seem' and 'could learn more' to express hypothetical possibility. Suggestion: 'In Australia, parks would be a strange place for me and I could learn more.'