Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: This is a clear, natural, and well-organized answer. You answer the question directly and support your opinion with specific activities and a reason. To sound slightly more natural, say “at weekends” or “on weekends” instead of “during weekends.” You could also avoid repeating “enjoyable” by using a more precise expression such as “a great way to relax.”

Example: Yes, I absolutely loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my family on weekends or during school holidays. I enjoyed running around, playing on the swings, and spending time outdoors. It was a great way to relax and have fun together.

Suggestion: This answer has a strong structure: direct answer, comparison with the past, and clear reasons. The phrase “a peaceful space for my daily routine” is understandable but slightly unnatural; “a peaceful place to relax” would be more idiomatic. Also, “take a leisurely walk” is good vocabulary, but adding one specific example of a nearby park or a typical visit would make the answer more personal and vivid.

Example: Yes, I do, although I don’t go as often as I did when I was younger. I like visiting parks because they’re peaceful places to relax after a busy day. For example, I sometimes take a leisurely walk there, get some fresh air, and clear my mind when I’m feeling stressed.

Suggestion: This is an excellent response with a direct opinion, several relevant benefits, and effective linking through cause and result. Remember to hyphenate “well-maintained” when it comes before a noun. To make the answer even more specific, you could mention a particular facility, such as playgrounds, outdoor gyms, or walking paths, that new parks could provide.

Example: Definitely. I think more well-maintained parks would make my city a much more pleasant place to live. They could include walking paths, playgrounds, and outdoor exercise equipment, giving residents more ways to stay active and spend time with their families. In addition, more green spaces could improve air quality and create a healthier urban environment.

Suggestion: You answer the question clearly and give a relevant future plan, but “after I moved there” should be “after I move there” because you are discussing a future situation. “Walking trailers, legs” is unclear and appears to be a word-choice or pronunciation error; use “walking trails and lakes.” You could also name a specific park or city in Australia to make your answer more precise.

Example: Yes, I’d love to visit some of Australia’s large and scenic national parks after I move there for my studies. I’m particularly interested in places with beautiful walking trails, lakes, and plenty of greenery. For example, I’d like to explore parks near Sydney or Melbourne because they would offer a relaxing way to experience Australia’s natural environment.

× I used to go there with my family, especially during weekends or school holidays.

✓ I used to go there with my family, especially on weekends or during school holidays.

The preposition on is normally used with weekends, while during is appropriate for a period such as school holidays. Use on weekends and during school holidays.

× Yes, I'd love to visit some of the large and scenic parks in Australia after I moved there for my studies.

✓ Yes, I'd love to visit some of the large and scenic parks in Australia after I move there for my studies.

The sentence refers to a future plan, so the present tense move is used after the time conjunction after. In future time clauses, use the present tense after words such as after, when, and before, not the past tense.