Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 在回答中注意语法和重复错误，句子要更简洁自然。开头直接回答然后补充一到两条具体细节（例如喜欢的活动、具体设施或一次记忆）即可。使用连接词如“because/so/for example”使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had many playgrounds and swings. For example, my friends and I used to spend afternoons racing on the slides and playing hide-and-seek, which always made me very happy.

Suggestion: 注意时态和表达准确性，避免重复。先直接回答，然后给出具体频率和原因，使用连词衔接句子并纠正语法（例如“don’t talk about during the day”）。

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for walking. I often take an after-dinner walk with my mother along the lake, and we use that time to talk about things we don’t discuss during the day.

Suggestion: 避免口语填充词（uh、like）和重复词。表达要更具体，例如提到改善空气质量、休闲空间和社区活动。注意主谓一致（parks provide）。用一至两句明确理由并给出具体好处。

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they improve air quality and create pleasant recreational spaces. Parks also encourage community activities and give children safe places to play.

Suggestion: 回答要直接且语法正确，避免犹豫和重复。先说明想去哪里，再给出明确理由（例如体验文化、观察日常生活）。把疑问句改为陈述句并用连接词组织。

Example: Yes, I would like to visit parks in Tianjin in the future to learn more about local life and customs. Walking in those parks would help me observe how residents spend their leisure time and understand their daily routines.

× Yes, I love to go to the park.

✓ Yes, I loved going to the park.

句子在回答过去喜欢的经历（Did you like... as a child?）时使用了一般现在时“love”，时态不一致。应使用过去时或过去习惯表达，如“loved”或“used to”来表明过去的习惯。建议将动词改为过去时或使用“used to”。

× When I was a a child I always asked my friends to go to the park with me because there are lots of facilities for kids to play and we we always had a great time playing in the park.

✓ When I was a child, I always asked my friends to go to the park with me because there were lots of facilities for kids to play on, and we always had a great time playing there.

句子有重复词（a a, we we）和时态不一致。“When I was a child”引出过去习惯，后面的动词应为过去时“were”。“facilities for kids to play”缺少介词“on”或用“play at/ in”。建议删除重复词，统一使用过去时，并补足介词以使表达完整。

× Yes, I think a park is a good place for us to take a walk.

✓ Yes, I thought parks were a good place for us to take walks.

在回答“Do you still like going to parks now?”时，本句用了现在时“think”，但接下来学生叙述的是通常观点可用现在时。原句本身若用于现在仍喜欢可保持现在时；但为了与后文关于常做动作的一致性，建议若描述过去则用过去时。另可将“a park...a walk”调整为复数或泛指并使用复数名词以更自然。

× So I always ask my mom to go for a walk after dinner and we will walk along the lake in the park and chat some topics that we didn't we don't talk about at days.

✓ So I always ask my mom to go for a walk after dinner, and we walk along the lake in the park and chat about topics that we don't talk about during the day.

句中存在时态混用和多余重复（didn't we don't）。用于现在习惯的动作应用一般现在时“ask”和“walk”，而“will”不适合用于习惯性动作。“chat some topics”应为“chat about topics”。“at days”是错误的介词短语，应改为“during the day”。建议删除重复并统一使用一般现在时，修正介词搭配。

× Yeah, I'd love to see more parks in my city because parks can bring lots of green trees and green woods to the to the city and it they will make oxygen and uh, parks provides a space for people to play, so it's good for living.

✓ Yeah, I'd love to see more parks in my city because parks can bring lots of trees and green spaces to the city; they produce oxygen, and parks provide spaces for people to play, so they're good for living.

句子有重复词（to the to the）与主谓不一致（parks provides，should be provide）。“green woods”在城市语境中不自然，改为“green spaces”。“it they will make oxygen”中有多余主语与时态问题，改为“they produce oxygen”。建议删除重复，修正主谓一致，并使用更自然的词汇。

× So I'm a new graduate student attending university and I I like I would like to go to the parks in Tianjin so I can find how the local people lives and how is there what is their lifestyles?

✓ I'm a new graduate student attending university, and I would like to visit parks in Tianjin so I can learn how local people live and what their lifestyles are like.

句中有重复（I I like I）和时态/语序问题。“find how the local people lives”中主语与动词不一致，应为“people live”。“how is there what is their lifestyles?”语序混乱，应改为“what their lifestyles are like”。建议删除重复，修正主谓一致并调整语序以形成正确的宾语从句。