Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb tense and pronouns, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I loved going to the park as a child because it was only a five-minute walk from my home. I often went there to play football and climb trees with my friends, so it was a fun and active part of my childhood.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and repetitive phrases. Give a clear topic sentence, state a reason, then add a specific detail or example. Use appropriate linking words (for example, because, so) and correct collocations (e.g., "relax", "there are a lot of flowers").

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially after finishing research because I need to relax. For example, I often sit by the flower beds and listen to birds, which helps me feel peaceful and refreshed.

Suggestion: Answer directly, avoid repetition, and provide specific reasons and an example. Use correct plural forms and linking words to make the response coherent. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many people live in high-rise apartments and have no private space for gardening or exercise. For instance, additional small parks with walking paths and benches would give residents places to walk, stretch and socialize.

Suggestion: Clarify your reason more clearly and correct unclear phrases. Begin with a direct statement of intention, then explain why with a specific reason (for example, interest in landscape design) and a linking word. Remove confusing words and keep sentences concise.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in New York because I am interested in landscape and environmental design. As someone who studies park design, I want to see how the park balances open lawns, pathways and planted areas to learn design ideas.

× Yes, I really like to go to the park when I child because the park near my home it's just 5 minutes walking to go there and I often go to there to play some games with my friends or and their.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to the park when I was a child because the park near my home was just a 5-minute walk away and I often went there to play games with my friends.

Multiple present/past tense errors and related structure problems: 'when I child' needs 'when I was a child' (missing verb and past reference). The question asks about childhood (past), so verb tense should be past ('liked', 'was', 'was', 'went'). 'it's just 5 minutes walking to go there' is ungrammatical; use 'was just a 5-minute walk away'. 'go to there' is incorrect; correct form is 'went there'. Suggestion: match verbs to the past time reference and use correct noun phrases for distances (a 5-minute walk).

× Yes, I still like going to park now, uh, especially when, especially when I finish my research, uh, I need some, I need, I need to relax myself and I will go to the park and stay and, and there are a lot of flower and plants. It enables me peaceful.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park now, especially when I finish my research. I need to relax, so I go to the park and stay there. There are a lot of flowers and plants, which makes me feel peaceful.

Tense and noun form issues: 'going to park' needs the definite article 'the park'. 'when I finish my research' is present/future; keep present simple for future scheduled events (acceptable), but avoid repetition. 'I need to relax myself' is non-idiomatic in English; use 'I need to relax'. 'I will go' can be simplified to 'I go' or 'I go to the park' to indicate habitual action. 'stay and, and there are a lot of flower and plants' needs restructuring and plural 'flowers'. 'It enables me peaceful' is incorrect; use 'which makes me feel peaceful' or 'it makes me feel peaceful'. Suggestion: use correct articles, plural nouns, idiomatic verbs and coherent sentence structure.

× Of course, I like to see more park in the city because many people live in high rise apartment, high rise apartment and they haven't space to plant a flower or trees and no other no extra space to exercise. So they need, they need park, they need many park to exercise.

✓ Of course, I would like to see more parks in the city because many people live in high-rise apartments and they don't have space to plant flowers or trees and have no extra space to exercise. So they need parks to exercise.

Article, plural and verb errors: 'more park' should be plural 'more parks'. 'high rise apartment' needs plural and hyphenation 'high-rise apartments'. 'they haven't space' is incorrect auxiliary use; use 'they don't have space'. 'plant a flower or trees' mixes singular and plural; use 'plant flowers or trees'. 'they need park, they need many park' should be 'they need parks' or 'they need many parks'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms, negative auxiliary 'do not', and consistent noun number.

× Yes, I would. I would like to go to the Central Park in New York because my ban, my bank is my banker's subject, banker subject is environment design. So I always say which park is good and which park is with good design.

✓ Yes, I would. I would like to go to Central Park in New York because my banker studied environmental design. So I always say which parks are well designed and which are not.

Errors include wrong words and verb forms: 'my ban, my bank is my banker's subject, banker subject is environment design' is unintelligible; intended meaning appears to be that the speaker's banker studied environmental design. Use past 'studied' for completed education. 'which park is good and which park is with good design' is awkward; use 'which parks are well designed'. Suggestion: clarify the noun ('banker'), use correct verb tense for completed study, and use idiomatic adjective forms ('well designed').