Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms, combine ideas into a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words if adding details (for example: because, so, and).

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child because they were a place where I could meet my friends and play. For example, we often played football and had picnics there, which made my childhood very fun.

Suggestion: Make a clear direct response first, then add one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and correct subject-verb agreement. Use linking words such as but or however to contrast present preference with past habits.

Example: Not really; as an adult I prefer visiting historical sites, shopping malls and cinemas because they offer more varied activities. However, I sometimes go to a park for a short walk when I want fresh air.

Suggestion: This answer is relevant and gives reasons, but improve phrasing, accuracy and cohesion. Start with a direct sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like because or therefore, and correct singular/plural forms.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they help improve air quality and reduce the effects of global warming. For example, new parks with trees and native plants could lower temperatures in busy neighborhoods.

Suggestion: Be careful to avoid absolute statements and repetition. If you truly do not plan to visit parks, explain why with a brief specific reason and consider admitting exceptions. Use correct tense and word order.

Example: I don’t have any specific parks I plan to visit in the future because I usually prefer cultural attractions and cinemas. That said, I might visit a park occasionally if a friend invites me or if there is a special event.

× Yes, I liked go to park when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child.

The verb 'like' when expressing enjoyment of an activity is followed by the -ing form: 'liked going'. Also, 'park' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to parks in general or a specific place from the speaker's childhood. Improve by using verb+ -ing and appropriate articles: 'liked going to the park.'

× It helps me.

✓ It helped me.

The student is talking about a past habit, so the pronoun 'it' is fine but the verb tense should be past ('helped') to match 'when I was a child.' Ensure tense consistency: use past tense for actions in the past.

× It helped me to me to met with my friend.

✓ It helped me to meet my friends.

Incorrect repetition ('to me to') and wrong verb form 'met' (past) after 'to' should be base form 'meet.' Also 'friend' is plural when speaking generally. Use 'helped me to meet my friends.' Remove redundant words and correct verb forms.

× Now I now I am adult, I can I do not want to go to park, but I like to visit many historical places and shopping malls and cinema.

✓ Now I am an adult; I do not want to go to the park, but I like to visit many historical places, shopping malls, and cinemas.

Multiple issues: extra repeated word 'now'; missing article 'an' before 'adult'; unnecessary 'I can I' fragment removed; 'do not want' is present simple correct for current preference; 'the park' needs definite article; list items need plural 'cinemas' and commas. Maintain present-tense consistency for current habits.

× Yeah, yes, I like to see more parks in my city and we know that global warming increased day by day and we need more forest and green plant in our country for good environment.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city, and we know that global warming is increasing day by day, so we need more forests and green plants in our country for a better environment.

'Like to see' is acceptable but 'would like to see' is more natural for a wish. 'Global warming increased day by day' mixes tenses; use present progressive 'is increasing.' Use plural 'forests' and 'green plants.' Add article 'a' before 'better environment.' Improve cohesion with 'so' to show consequence.

× In my future I think I will not go to any park because I am adult now and I don't like to go park now now in my age.

✓ In the future I think I will not go to any parks because I am an adult now and I don't like going to parks at my age.

Use 'In the future' and plural 'parks' for general reference. Insert article 'an' before 'adult.' Instead of 'don't like to go park now now' use 'don't like going to parks' (verb+ -ing) and 'at my age' for natural phrasing. Maintain future intention with 'I will not' but explain current preference in present simple.