Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct verb tense and article use, and limit to about 2–3 supporting sentences. Use linking words (for example, 'after school' instead of 'every time, every day after my school').

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. After school I usually went there with my friends to play sports or take a walk, which helped me relax before going home.

Suggestion: Be more fluent and correct minor grammar errors. Use clearer linking words to contrast past and present (e.g., 'although', 'however'). Correct plurals and word order (e.g., 'two or three times a week'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks; however, I don't go as often as I used to because I have a hectic schedule. Now I usually visit the park two or three times a week to exercise or unwind.

Suggestion: Answer directly and improve grammar and word choice. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' correctly. Replace awkward phrases ('help the environment cleaner') with natural expressions ('make the environment cleaner and fresher') and avoid incorrect pronouns ('socialize their' → 'socialize there').

Example: Yes, I would. More parks would make the city cleaner and greener, and they also provide pleasant places where people can gather and socialize.

Suggestion: Be specific and correct grammar (singular/plural, articles). Name the park clearly and give concise reasons. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' appropriately and avoid repetition. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I want to visit Kung Fu National Park, which is one of the largest in my country. I hope to see rare animals and plants and experience its landscapes and hiking trails.

× I had a habit of visiting the parks every time, every day after my school.

✓ I had a habit of visiting parks every day after school.

Use plural 'parks' or uncountable 'parks' without 'the' when speaking generally; 'every time' is redundant with 'every day'; 'my school' should be 'school' when referring to one's own routine. Suggestion: remove 'the' and 'my' and redundant phrase to make it natural.

× And I would say that I go there with my friends and I play sport or walk around before going home.

✓ I would say that I went there with my friends and played sports or walked around before going home.

The student is describing past habitual actions, so simple past tense is required ('went', 'played', 'walked') rather than present ('go', 'play'). Also 'play sport' should be 'played sports' for natural collocation. Suggestion: use simple past for past habits.

× Well yes of course I still keep the habit of visiting the parks but I think it's not very often as before.

✓ Well yes, of course I still keep the habit of visiting parks, but I don't do it as often as before.

Mismatch of tense and unidiomatic phrasing. Use 'don't do it as often as before' to compare present frequency with past. Remove 'the' before 'parks' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use negative present simple with 'as often as'.

× It's mainly because I currently I have a hectic schedule so I only visit parks like two or three time a week.

✓ It's mainly because I currently have a hectic schedule, so I only visit parks two or three times a week.

Remove the repeated 'I'; 'time' should be plural 'times' after a number; comma needed before coordinating conjunction. 'the' before 'parks' not necessary when generalizing. Suggestion: eliminate repetition and use 'times'.

× Well, that's of course I hope that there are more parks in my city because they help the environment cleaner and fresher.

✓ Well, of course I hope that there are more parks in my city because they help the environment be cleaner and fresher.

Original has extra 'that's' and unclear structure. To express cause, use 'help the environment be cleaner and fresher' or better 'help keep the environment cleaner and fresher.' Suggestion: remove 'that's' and use 'help keep' for natural phrasing.

× Moreover, parks are green places that people can gather and socialize their.

✓ Moreover, parks are green places where people can gather and socialize.

'Socialize their' is incorrect; 'their' is a possessive pronoun needing a noun. Use 'where' to indicate place and 'socialize' intransitively. Suggestion: use 'where people can gather and socialize.'

× Well yes of course I have a dream of visiting Kung Fu National parks because it's a one of the largest National Park in my country, so I want to visit it to see a rare animals and plants.

✓ Well yes, of course I have a dream of visiting Kung Fu National Park because it's one of the largest national parks in my country, so I want to visit it to see rare animals and plants.

Multiple errors: use singular name 'Kung Fu National Park' (proper name), 'it's one of the largest national parks' uses plural 'parks' after 'one of the', 'a one of' is wrong, 'a rare animals' mixes singular article with plural noun — should be 'rare animals and plants' without 'a'. Capitalization of 'national park' in middle of sentence should be consistent. Suggestion: correct proper noun, use 'one of the' + plural, and remove incorrect article before plural nouns.