Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense, avoid unclear words (e.g. “guncraft”), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep to under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I felt peaceful there because I could run around and explore nature, and I often played games with my friends on the grass. Because of that, parks are one of my favorite childhood memories.

Suggestion: Give a clear, concise reply using correct vocabulary and grammar. Use a linking word to connect reason with result (e.g. “because” or “so”) and mention specific activities you do in parks. Limit to three sentences.

Example: Yes, I still like going to parks now because they help me relax after stressful work. For example, I often go jogging or meet friends for a walk in the park, which makes me feel refreshed.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly: state whether you want more parks, give a specific reason, and use linking words for coherence. Avoid repetition and keep sentences short and grammatical.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my town because we have very few green spaces. Therefore, when I visit larger cities I often go to parks to enjoy nature and relax.

Suggestion: Be specific and concise: name the place clearly, give a reason why you want to visit, and use correct expressions (e.g. “I’m a nature lover”). Limit to two or three clear sentences and avoid filler phrases.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Rose Garden in Chandigarh in the future. It has a wide variety of flowers and beautiful walking paths, and as a nature lover I think it would be very peaceful and enjoyable.

× Yes, I love to go fast when I was a child because guncraft feels very comfortable and I feel very peaceful whenever I go walks as a child and sometimes I play with my friends.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child because being in nature felt very comfortable and I felt very peaceful whenever I went for walks as a child, and sometimes I played with my friends.

The sentence refers to past habits, so verbs should be in the past tense (loved, felt, went, played) rather than present. 'Go fast' is unclear; 'going to parks' or 'going for walks' fits context. 'Guncraft' is likely a miswording; replaced with 'being in nature'. Also change 'go walks' to 'went for walks' for correct collocation and verb form. Suggestion: Use past tense for past habits (would/loved/used to) and use natural collocations like 'go for a walk' or 'visit parks'.

× Yes, I love 2 quinks nowadays because on the wild days I am very stressful related to my work so usually I hope I will. I am interested in past for doing exercise and and spending time with my friends in the park.

✓ Yes, I like parks nowadays because on busy days I am very stressed because of my work, so usually I hope to visit them. I am interested in going there to exercise and spend time with my friends in the park.

The speaker is describing present habits, so use present simple (like, am stressed). '2 quinks' and 'wild days' are unclear; replaced with 'parks' and 'busy days'. 'I am very stressful' is incorrect; use 'I am very stressed' (adjective describing feeling). 'Related to my work' is better as 'because of my work'. 'I hope I will' is incomplete; 'I hope to visit them' clarifies intention. Use 'going there to exercise' and 'spend time' (infinitive and base form) for correct verb patterns. Suggestion: Use simple present for current routines and correct adjective/adverb forms (stressed, not stressful). Use infinitive after 'hope'.

× Well, honestly speaking, I live, I live in a very small town, which is no more, which is no too much parks. But when I but when I go for big cities, I usually I usually visit good parks because I I'm very I am very fond of because I'm nature lover person. So I usually go for far.

✓ Well, honestly speaking, I live in a very small town, which does not have many parks. But when I go to big cities, I usually visit good parks because I am very fond of nature. So I usually travel far to visit them.

'Which is no more, which is no too much parks' is ungrammatical; use 'does not have many parks' to indicate lack. 'Go for big cities' should be 'go to big cities'. 'I'm nature lover person' is incorrect word order and articles; use 'I am very fond of nature' or 'I am a nature lover'. 'So I usually go for far' is awkward; 'travel far' or 'go far' is better. Articles: include 'a' before 'nature lover' if used. Suggestion: Use 'does not have many' for scarcity, 'go to' for visiting places, and correct noun phrases like 'a nature lover' or 'fond of nature'.

× OK. And interesting question. When I would, I would like to go Chandigarh which is the park is located in Chandigarh that's called that's called Rose Garden where I where I would like to go because there are variety of flowers and I'm very as I mentioned earlier, I am on HLR person.

✓ That's an interesting question. I would like to go to Chandigarh to see the Rose Garden because there are a variety of flowers, and as I mentioned earlier, I am a nature lover.

Use conditional/future intent with 'I would like to' and correct prepositions: 'go to Chandigarh' and 'see the Rose Garden'. Remove redundant phrases ('which is the park is located in Chandigarh that's called'). Use 'a variety of flowers' with article 'a'. 'I am on HLR person' is unclear; replace with 'I am a nature lover'. Also ensure sentence flow and tense consistency. Suggestion: Keep 'I would like to' for polite future intent, use correct prepositions ('go to'), and proper noun phrases ('a variety of', 'a nature lover').