Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be careful with small grammar and preposition errors and make your answer slightly more specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid redundant phrases and keep to under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my friends to play hide-and-seek and football, and we sometimes had picnics under big trees. Those visits were exciting because we could run freely and make up games together.

Suggestion: This answer is clear but slightly repetitive. Combine ideas and add a specific reason or effect using a linking word to enrich the response. Keep sentences concise and avoid repeating words like 'morning'.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park; I usually go every morning for a walk because the fresh air helps me feel energized and focused for the day.

Suggestion: This answer has several grammar, word choice, and clarity problems. Correct word choice (parks, not perks), use clearer sentence structure, and add specific reasons with linking words. Provide examples or consequences to support your opinion and avoid fragmented phrases.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they give people a place to relax and exercise. For example, more green spaces would encourage walking and cycling, reduce pollution, and improve air quality for everyone.

Suggestion: The idea is fine but vague and repetitive. Offer a clear topic sentence naming the type of park you want to visit (e.g., botanical garden, national park), then give one reason and a linking word. This makes your answer more concrete and informative.

Example: I would like to visit a famous botanical garden in the future because I enjoy seeing rare plants and learning about different ecosystems. Also, I would like to go with my friends so we can take photos and enjoy a peaceful day together.

× I usually went to there to play games with my friends.

✓ I usually went there to play games with my friends.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before the adverb 'there'. Use 'went there' to indicate movement to that place. To improve, remove the extra 'to' and say 'went there'.

× I usually go there every morning for a morning walk.

✓ I usually go there every morning for a walk.

The phrase 'a morning walk' is not ungrammatical, but 'every morning' already indicates time, so 'morning' is redundant. Simplify to 'for a walk'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× We need more perks in my city because it's a place of people more relaxed and exercise, more greenery space.

✓ We need more parks in my city because it would give people more opportunities to relax and exercise, and more green space.

Several issues: 'perks' is the wrong word; 'parks' is correct (word choice, treated here as quantifier/word choice error). 'Place of people more relaxed and exercise' is ungrammatical—word order and choice are wrong. Use 'give people more opportunities to relax and exercise' to express purpose. 'Greenery space' should be 'green space'. Improve by using clear noun phrases and correct collocations (green space, opportunities to relax).

× It would also make clean air.

✓ It would also make the air cleaner.

The structure 'make clean air' is unnatural. Use the causative 'make' with an adjective complement: 'make the air cleaner'. Include the definite article 'the' because we refer to the air in the city. Use comparative 'cleaner' to show improvement.

× I would really like to visit a special park, but I can't think of a special one right now.

✓ I would really like to visit a special park, but I can't think of one right now.

Repeating 'special' is redundant. Also, 'I would really like' is a polite future/wish and 'can't think of one right now' correctly expresses inability in present. Simplify to avoid repetition.

× I would love to go there with my friends in the future.

✓ I would love to go with my friends in the future.

'Go there' is acceptable but 'go with my friends' is more natural when the park is unspecified; removing 'there' avoids repetition and keeps the future intention. 'Would love to' correctly expresses a future desire.