Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có nội dung, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'for picnic' → 'for picnics'), thì của từ (present vs past) và tránh lặp ý. Nên thêm một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể hơn về kỷ niệm hoặc cảm xúc để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My parents often took me there for picnics, and I remember swinging high on the swings while laughing with my friends. Those visits made my childhood feel carefree and joyful.

Suggestion: Bạn truyền đạt được ý chính nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng gây khó hiểu (ví dụ: 'visiting park' → 'visit parks', 'in the weekend' → 'at weekends' hoặc 'on weekends', 'sometime walking or going by school' không rõ nghĩa). Nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì đúng và thêm liên từ để làm rõ hoạt động cụ thể.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks on weekends. I usually go for a walk or do some light jogging to stay healthy, and sometimes I join friends for a short picnic.

Suggestion: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng thiếu câu chủ đề gắn trực tiếp với câu hỏi và có một vài lỗi số nhiều/ít (ví dụ: 'the park' → 'parks' hoặc 'more parks'). Nên mở rộng bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về lợi ích và dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks provide safe spaces for families and children. Moreover, they offer areas for exercising or practicing yoga, which improves community health.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng chứa lỗi nghiêm trọng về ngữ pháp và từ vựng ('read this park' không hợp nghĩa). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp (có/không), nêu tên hoặc mô tả loại công viên muốn tới, giải thích lý do và dùng thì phù hợp. Tránh thông tin mâu thuẫn và cung cấp một kế hoạch ngắn gọn nếu có.

Example: Yes, there are a few parks I'd like to visit in the future, such as the large botanical garden near the river. However, at the moment I'm very busy with my studies, so I hope to visit them during the next semester break.

× Yes, my parents used to take me there for picnic when I was young.

✓ Yes, my parents used to take me there for picnics when I was young.

'Picnic' should be plural here because 'take me there for picnic' refers to repeated occasions; use the plural 'picnics'. Also you could say 'for a picnic' for a single occasion. Use plural for habitual past activities.

× I love playing swings and slides with my friends.

✓ I loved playing on swings and slides with my friends.

The question asked about childhood (past), so verb tense should be past: 'loved' instead of 'love'. Also 'playing swings' is incorrect; use 'playing on swings and slides'. This fixes tense and preposition use.

× At present I'm still visiting park in the weekend.

✓ At present I'm still visiting parks at the weekend.

Use plural 'parks' if you mean parks in general. Also use the preposition 'at the weekend' (British English) or 'on weekends' (American English). 'Visiting' is possible but 'I still visit parks on weekends' is more natural for habitual present.

× I sometime walking or going by school to stay healthy.

✓ I sometimes walk or go by bike to stay healthy.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb meaning occasionally. Use base verb 'walk' after subject for simple present habitual. 'Going by school' is unclear; likely intended 'going by bike' or 'going to school'. Adjusted to 'go by bike' for meaning of exercise.

× Yes, the park is great for exercising or doing yoga.

✓ Yes, parks are great for exercising or doing yoga.

Context asks generally about more parks in the city; use plural 'parks' rather than 'the park' to speak generally. If referring to a specific park, keep 'the park'.

× It's good for families and children to play safely.

✓ They are good for families and children to play in safely.

Referring back to 'parks' (plural), use 'they' instead of 'it'. Also add 'in' after 'play' to indicate location: 'play in safely'. Alternatively: 'Parks are good for families and children to play safely.'

× I really want to go to some parks in the future but I don't have much time to read this park.

✓ I really want to go to some parks in the future but I don't have much time to visit them.

'Read this park' is incorrect; 'visit' is the correct verb for going to a park. Replace the noun phrase with 'visit them' to refer back to parks. Keep present tense for current lack of time.

× I'm too busy with study these days.

✓ I'm too busy with my studies these days.

Use the noun phrase 'my studies' or 'studying' rather than 'study'. 'Study' as a noun is countable here and usually plural when referring to one's studies. 'These days' indicates present continuous context.