Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and link ideas with a simple connector.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. My parents often took me there at weekends, and I used to play tag and climb trees with my friends, which was very exciting.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Give a clear topic sentence and a brief reason or example using a linking word (because/so). Correctly express feelings (embarrassed).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially with children because I like playing simple games with them. However, I feel a bit embarrassed going to parks with my adult friends, so I usually visit with family instead.

Suggestion: Make your answer focused and specific. Start with a clear opinion, then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid vague, exaggerated statements.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation. For example, adding small pocket parks in dense neighborhoods would make it easier for people to go for walks.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer but expand with a short explanation or alternative. Avoid repeating the same phrase. Use a linking word to introduce your reason and, if possible, mention an activity you prefer instead.

Example: Not really — I don't prefer visiting parks much because I find crowded parks noisy. Instead, I plan to visit museums or hiking trails in the future where I can enjoy quieter environments.

× Yes, I liked going to park when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child.

The noun 'park' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to parks in general experience; alternatively use plural 'parks'. Use 'the park' to refer to parks as a concept or a specific recurring place.

× My parents took me to the park parks and I played with my friends in the park and I have very fun.

✓ My parents took me to the parks and I played with my friends in the park and I had a lot of fun.

There is an incorrect repeated noun 'park parks' and 'have very fun' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'parks' if referring to multiple visits, and use past tense 'had a lot of fun' to match 'played'.

× I had very fun.

✓ I had a lot of fun.

The adjective 'fun' is a noun here and cannot be modified by 'very' in this way. Use the phrase 'a lot of fun' or 'lots of fun'. Also choose past tense 'had' to match the time frame.

× Yes, I still like to going to parks with children and have fun with them.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks with children and having fun with them.

After 'like' use either the infinitive 'to go' or the gerund 'going'. 'to going' is incorrect. Also maintain parallel gerund forms: 'going' and 'having'.

× I don't like to go to parks with my friends.

✓ I don't like going to parks with my friends.

While 'I don't like to go' is grammatically acceptable, using the gerund 'going' keeps consistency with previous sentence and sounds more natural when describing general preferences. Not strictly an error but stylistic improvement.

× I I kind of embarrassing.

✓ I am kind of embarrassed.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' and uses the adjective 'embarrassing' (which describes something that causes embarrassment) instead of 'embarrassed' (which describes the person's feeling). Also remove the duplicate 'I'.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city and in another city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city and in other cities.

The phrase 'in another city' is singular while the speaker likely means multiple other cities; 'other cities' fits better. 'Would like' is a correct modal expression for preference.

× More cities, any country, every country.

✓ More cities — in any country, in every country.

The original fragments lack prepositions and articles. Adding 'in' before 'any country' and 'every country' clarifies location. This also converts fragments into clearer phrases.

× No, I don't like parks that much to go see them in the future.

✓ No, I don't like parks that much to want to see them in the future.

The structure 'don't like parks that much to go see them' is ungrammatical. Use a clause like 'don't like parks that much to want to see them' or simply 'I don't want to visit parks in the future.' This clarifies intention using appropriate verbs.

× I don't like them that much.

✓ I don't like them that much.

This sentence is grammatically correct but short. It appropriately expresses the speaker's preference. No correction needed; included for completeness.