Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ваша відповідь дуже коротка і має граматичну помилку (повинно бути «I liked» або «I used to like»). Також ви назвали парки, але не дали жодних деталей чи причини, чому вони вам подобалися. Додайте тему речення, причину або згадку конкретних спогадів, використовуючи зв’язки (for example, because, especially).

Example: Yes, I used to enjoy going to Vaughan Park and Bedok when I was a child because they had large playgrounds and ponds where I liked feeding the ducks. For example, I remember spending whole afternoons there with my family on weekends.

Suggestion: Відповідь містить помилку в назві («Park Park» схоже на помилку) і занадто коротка. Необхідно використовувати правильний час і додати причину або приклад, щоб відповідь була змістовною. Використовуйте зв’язки (because, so, although) та до 3–4 додаткових речень максимум.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy visiting parks, especially for exercise and fresh air, because they are peaceful and spacious. For instance, I often go for a jog in the nearest park on Sunday mornings.

Suggestion: Відповідь має кілька помилок: «perks» замість «parks», відсутній артикль і неправильний порядок слів. Ви також обмежуєтесь однією причиною. Розширте відповідь, наводячи конкретні причини та можливі переваги (e.g., health, community, environment), і використайте сполучники для зв’язності.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because currently there is only one, and more green spaces would improve residents' health and provide places for families to relax. For example, additional parks could host community events and encourage outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Відповідь недоречна і не відповідає на питання. Ви повинні прямо сказати, чи є парки, які ви хочете відвідати, і надати одну-дві конкретні причини або приклади. Використовуйте зв’язки (maybe, for example, because) і до 3–4 речень максимум.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Botanic Gardens in the future because it has rare plants and beautiful walking trails. For example, I plan to go there next spring to see the flower exhibitions and take photographs.

× Yes, I like Vaughan Park and Bedok.

✓ Yes, I liked Vaughan Park and Bedok.

The examiner asked about childhood preference (past time). The verb should be in the past tense to match the time frame. Change 'like' (present) to 'liked' (past). Suggestion: use past tense verbs when referring to past experiences (e.g., 'I liked', 'I used to enjoy').

× Yes, I still like going to Park Park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to Park Park.

This sentence is already correct for a present habitual action. 'Still like' correctly uses the present simple for a current preference. No change needed; ensure proper noun 'Park Park' is the intended name.

× Yes I would like see more perks on my city because in my city there's one park.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there is only one park.

Multiple issues: missing 'to' after 'would like' (modal verb pattern requires 'to' + base verb), 'perks' is the wrong word (should be 'parks'), and incorrect preposition 'on' should be 'in'. Also 'there's one park' is clearer as 'there is only one park'. Suggestions: after 'would like' use 'to' + verb; choose correct noun 'parks'; use 'in my city' for location; use 'only' to emphasize singularity.

× Oh, monopoly joke.

✓ Oh, just a Monopoly joke.

This fragment lacks clear sentence structure and article usage. To make it a natural response, add a modifier like 'just' and the indefinite article 'a' before 'Monopoly joke'. Suggestion: use complete phrases for clarity (subject or interjection plus noun with article if singular).