Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I enjoyed the beautiful scenery and open spaces, and I often played games with friends there. Also, many families visited to exercise or relax, which made the parks lively and fun.

Suggestion: Use correct tenses and simpler, natural phrases. Begin with a direct topic sentence in present tense, then add specific reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'also'. Avoid awkward expressions ('to be more punctual', 'inner side', 'anoint').

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I go there because being in nature helps me relax and clears my mind, and the scenery is very attractive. I also see people exercising or studying there, which makes it a pleasant place to spend time.

Suggestion: Give a clear, complete response with a cause-and-effect structure. Use correct grammar and complete your thought—avoid sentence fragments. Provide one or two concrete benefits of more parks (health, community space) with linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation. For example, more parks would encourage families to spend time outdoors, improve air quality, and create safe places for children to play.

Suggestion: Be specific about the park and why you want to visit. Use natural expressions ('unwind', 'relax') correctly and finish your sentences. Mention particular activities or features you expect to enjoy to make your answer concrete.

Example: Yes, I want to visit Kathmandu Pond Park because I have heard it has beautiful water features and walking paths. I would like to relax there, join outdoor activities like boating or picnics, and experience the local atmosphere that attracts both residents and tourists.

× Yes, I love to go to the park when I was inside because in the park we are not only have beautiful scenery, but also we can enjoy what we can through the natural beauty.

✓ Yes, I loved going to the park when I was a child because the park not only had beautiful scenery, but we could also enjoy the natural beauty.

Tense inconsistency and incorrect verb forms: 'I love to go' (present) conflicts with 'when I was' (past), so use past tense 'loved going'. 'We are not only have' is ungrammatical; use 'not only had' for past. 'We can enjoy what we can through the natural beauty' is awkward; use 'we could also enjoy the natural beauty'. Improve by keeping consistent past tense and using correct verb forms and simpler structure. Suggestion: Keep past tense throughout when describing childhood, use 'loved going', 'the park had', and 'we could enjoy'.

× And many people also go there to exercise and some people go there for refreshment.

✓ Many people also went there to exercise, and some went there to relax.

Tense mismatch with previous sentence about childhood: change present 'go' to past 'went'. 'Go there for refreshment' is unnatural; 'went there to relax' or 'for refreshment' can be used. Maintain consistent past tense when talking about childhood habits. Suggestion: Use 'went' and prefer 'to relax' or 'for refreshment' depending on meaning.

× Well, to be more punctual, yes I still go to the park because going to the park not only keep my mind refreshed but also makes me feel refreshed from inner side and the scenery of the park is mind blowing and breathtaking.

✓ Well, to be precise, yes I still go to the park because going there not only keeps my mind refreshed but also makes me feel refreshed inside, and the park's scenery is breathtaking.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with singular gerund 'going'. 'Punctual' is incorrect; use 'precise'. 'Refreshed from inner side' is awkward; use 'refreshed inside'. 'Mind blowing and breathtaking' is redundant; 'breathtaking' is sufficient. Also 'park's scenery' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'keeps', 'precise', 'refreshed inside', and avoid redundant adjectives.

× And as people also go there too sometimes exercising and to anoint after school.

✓ People also sometimes go there to exercise or to relax after school.

Incorrect preposition/word choice: 'to anoint' is wrong in this context; likely intended 'to unwind' or 'to relax'. Word order 'also go there too sometimes exercising' is awkward; use 'sometimes go there to exercise'. Use parallel infinitives 'to exercise or to relax'. Suggestion: Use 'to exercise' and 'to relax/unwind', and place adverbs ('sometimes') before the verb.

× Well, yes, I like to see more parks in my city in the future because if we have parks in the city then it will also help the more people and as well as incorrect the people to visit it more often than usual people because visiting park not only keep their mind refreshed, but also they.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city in the future because parks would help more people and encourage them to visit more often. Visiting parks not only keeps their minds refreshed, but also benefits their well-being.

Mixed tense/modality and many structural errors: 'like to see' is okay but 'would like' is more natural for future wishes. 'Will also help the more people and as well as incorrect the people' is ungrammatical — change to 'would help more people and encourage them'. 'Visiting park not only keep' needs subject-verb agreement: 'keeps'. Sentence fragment ending 'but also they' must be completed — use 'benefits their well-being'. Suggestion: Use 'would like' for polite future preference, correct subject-verb agreement, and complete the second clause with a clear benefit.

× Yes, I want to visit the Kathmandu Pond Park because many people and also tourists visit there to unwind their modes and as well as to make their live life even more.

✓ Yes, I want to visit Kathmandu Pond Park because many locals and tourists go there to unwind and to enhance their lives.

Word choice and verb usage: 'visit there' is redundant; use 'go there' or 'visit'. 'Unwind their modes' is incorrect — likely 'moods' or simply 'unwind'. 'Make their live life even more' is ungrammatical; use 'enhance their lives' or 'make life better'. Maintain present tense for future plans expressed as intention. Suggestion: Use 'locals' instead of 'people' for clarity, 'unwind' for relaxation, and 'enhance their lives' for clearer meaning.

× And many play games and many more outdoor activities are there which will be beneficial for both residential and.

✓ There are many games and outdoor activities which will be beneficial for both residents and visitors.

Incomplete sentence and wrong nouns: 'residential' is an adjective; use 'residents'. The sentence ends abruptly after 'and' — complete with 'visitors' or 'residents'. 'Many play games and many more outdoor activities are there' is awkward; restructure to 'There are many games and outdoor activities'. Suggestion: Use 'residents and visitors', ensure noun forms are correct, and complete the sentence.