Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần nói rõ hơn, sửa ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi cung cấp 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp. Ví dụ: chia thì đúng (used to/ would), số nhiều/ít (parks, friends), và dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “and”.

Example: I loved going to parks as a child because they were a great place to play and relax. After school I often went there with my friends to play football, and sometimes I visited with my family for picnics.

Suggestion: Cần câu trả lời cụ thể hơn và hoàn chỉnh; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi giải thích lý do với một ví dụ; dùng liên từ như “because”, “so” hoặc “when”.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. For example, I often go jogging there in the mornings to relax and clear my mind after work.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và tự nhiên, dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng (I would like to see more…). Tránh tiếng lắp và từ thừa, cung cấp lý do cụ thể với linking word như “because” hoặc “so that”.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe places for children to play and help neighbors meet each other. More parks would also improve air quality and offer more space for outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời rõ ràng tên nơi và hoàn thiện ý tưởng; sửa ngữ pháp (I want to go to the hotel park), tránh lặp và nói rõ lí do cụ thể. Dùng 1-2 câu, có linking word như “because” hoặc “so that”.

Example: I would like to visit the nearby hotel park because it is popular and lively, so I can meet new people and relax after a busy day. I think the atmosphere there would be great for socialising and unwinding.

× I extremely like going to park as a child.

✓ I really liked going to parks as a child.

The adverb 'extremely' is unnatural with 'like' here; 'really' or 'very much' is better. The time frame is past, so use past tense 'liked'. 'park' needs the plural 'parks' (or 'the park') to be natural. Suggestion: use 'I really liked going to parks as a child.'

× I I go to park when I when after school and play with my friend.

✓ I used to go to the park after school and play with my friends.

Repetition 'I I' and 'when I when' are errors. The activity is habitual in the past, so 'used to' or past simple 'went' is appropriate. 'park' needs the definite article 'the' or plural. 'friend' should be plural if referring to multiple friends or 'my friend' if one. Suggestion: 'I used to go to the park after school and play with my friends.'

× Uh, sometime I going to park with my family.

✓ Sometimes I went to the park with my family.

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb) and past tense 'went' for past habits. 'going to park' is incorrect form; use 'went to the park' or 'went to parks'. Also plural/time expression 'sometimes'. Suggestion: 'Sometimes I went to the park with my family.'

× Yes, it's so fun.

✓ Yes, it was so much fun.

Because the speaker is describing past experiences, use past tense 'was'. 'so fun' is acceptable colloquially, but 'so much fun' is more natural. Suggestion: 'Yes, it was so much fun.'

× Yes, of course. Actually, I like going to park every every time because it's so relaxed.

✓ Yes, of course. Actually, I like going to the park all the time because it's so relaxing.

'going to park' needs 'the' before 'park'. 'every every time' is repetition; use 'all the time' or 'every time'. 'relaxed' is an adjective describing people; for the activity use 'relaxing'. Tense 'like' is present and appropriate if speaking about current preference. Suggestion: 'I like going to the park all the time because it's so relaxing.'

× I have fun in in parks and and they.

✓ I have fun in parks and enjoy them.

Repetitions 'in in' and 'and and' should be removed. 'they' is a pronoun without clear verb; use 'enjoy them' or 'they are fun'. Suggestion: 'I have fun in parks and enjoy them.'

× I could, I really could like to see more parks in my city.

✓ I would really like to see more parks in my city.

'Could' indicates ability or possibility and is incorrect here; 'would like' expresses desire. Repetition 'I could, I really could like' is incorrect. Suggestion: 'I would really like to see more parks in my city.'

× It's a good spot umm where children can go for relax after school and make new friends.

✓ It's a good place where children can go to relax after school and make new friends.

Use 'place' or 'spot' but 'go for relax' is ungrammatical; use 'go to relax'. 'umm' is filler and should be removed in formal speech. Suggestion: 'It's a good place where children can go to relax after school and make new friends.'

× I want to go to. Umm, hotel park because it's many people and I can I can to connect with them and unwind after a busy day and meet new.

✓ I want to go to the hotel park because there are many people and I can connect with them, unwind after a busy day, and meet new people.

Sentence fragments 'I want to go to.' and filler 'Umm' should be combined. 'hotel park' may be a name but needs article 'the' or no article if a proper name. 'it's many people' is incorrect; use 'there are many people'. Remove repeated 'I can'. 'I can to connect' should be 'I can connect'. 'meet new' needs object 'people'. Suggestion: 'I want to go to the hotel park because there are many people and I can connect with them, unwind after a busy day, and meet new people.'