Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but needs clearer structure, correct grammar and more natural phrasing. Focus on one topic sentence, give 1–2 specific supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, "also", "and", "because") and correct verb forms and prepositions. Keep it within 3–5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents and sometimes with friends, where we played football and fed the ducks. Those outings are pleasant memories because they were relaxing and helped me bond with family.

Suggestion: Good content and relevant reasons, but improve grammar (verb agreement and articles), and make the response more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 2 specific benefits with linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like "another spare of time".

Example: Yes, I still like going to parks whenever I have spare time. They help me reduce stress and improve my mental health, and I often exercise there because the fresh air and greenery make me feel refreshed.

Suggestion: Idea is good but language and clarity need work: correct plural/singular forms, word order and articles. Use a clear topic sentence and 1–2 concise supporting reasons with examples. Avoid repeated words like "park parks" and unclear phrases like "provide citizens and up space".

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they give people places to relax and spend quality time with family. For example, small neighborhood parks would be useful for parents with children and for elderly people to walk.

Suggestion: Correct the tense and word order, and make the answer more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, mention the park name or location if possible, give one reason why you want to visit, and finish with a plan. Use correct verb forms (am planning / will visit).

Example: Yes, my friends and I are planning to visit a new park near our city next month. I heard it has beautiful landscaping and walking trails, so we will go there to relax and take photos.

× I love parks.

✓ I loved parks.

The question asks about childhood habit (past). The student uses present tense 'love' which mismatches context. Use past tense 'loved' to match 'Did you like going to parks as a child?'. Suggestion: use past tense when referring to past preferences.

× I used to go to parks with my parents sometimes.

✓ I used to go to parks with my parents sometimes.

This sentence is correct. 'Used to' properly expresses a past habitual action. No change needed.

× I went there with my friends as well.

✓ I went there with my friends as well.

This sentence correctly uses past simple to describe a past event. No change needed.

× We played their sports and also social interact with social activities.

✓ We played sports there and also took part in social activities.

Problems: wrong possessive 'their' and incorrect verb phrase 'social interact with social activities'. Use 'there' to indicate location and 'took part in' or 'participated in' for activities. Suggestion: 'played sports there' and 'took part in social activities'.

× It was a nice memory in my childhood life and I recall it again and again.

✓ It was a nice memory from my childhood, and I recall it again and again.

Awkward phrase 'in my childhood life'. Use 'from my childhood' and join clauses with a comma. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use natural collocation 'a nice memory from my childhood'.

× I'm still going to park whenever I find another spare of time.

✓ I still go to the park whenever I find some spare time.

Use simple present 'go' for habitual actions. 'Going to park' is missing article and unnatural phrase 'another spare of time' should be 'some spare time'. Suggestion: use 'I still go to the park whenever I have some spare time.'

× Park help me to reduce my stress and improve my mental health.

✓ Parks help me reduce my stress and improve my mental health.

Subject-verb agreement: singular 'Park' with plural meaning causes error. Use plural 'Parks' with verb 'help' or use 'The park helps me...' Also drop 'to' after 'help' when followed by verb. Suggestion: 'Parks help me reduce my stress.'

× I also do exercise in the park.

✓ I also exercise in the park.

'Do exercise' is less natural; use the verb 'exercise'. Present simple is appropriate for habitual action. Suggestion: 'I also exercise in the park.'

× The natural beauty of park and the fresh air keeps me refreshed.

✓ The natural beauty of the park and the fresh air keep me refreshed.

Missing definite article before 'park' and subject-verb agreement: compound subject 'the natural beauty... and the fresh air' requires plural verb 'keep'. Suggestion: include 'the' and use 'keep'.

× Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my cities because park parks help to spend the quality time in the city's people.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks help city people spend quality time.

Multiple issues: 'cities' should be singular 'city' to match speaker, repeated 'park parks' is incorrect, awkward phrase 'help to spend the quality time in the city's people.' Use 'help city people spend quality time.' Keep conditional 'would like' is fine. Suggestion: concise phrasing and correct plurality.

× They can enjoy their free time with their families and friends as well.

✓ They can enjoy their free time with their families and friends as well.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× So huge number of park will provide citizens and up space for enjoying their free time.

✓ So a large number of parks will provide citizens with space to enjoy their free time.

Errors: missing article 'a', singular 'park' should be plural 'parks', incorrect phrase 'provide citizens and up space'. Use 'provide citizens with space to enjoy their free time.' Suggestion: 'a large number of parks' and 'provide citizens with space'.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you would like to go to in the future?

Original question from examiner is fine; student's response should match. This sentence is fine as a question but for a polite future preference 'would like' is better. No strict grammatical error but suggestion improves register.

× I along with my friends planning to visit a park which is established recently beside my cities.

✓ My friends and I are planning to visit a park that was established recently near my city.

Word order and verb form errors: use 'My friends and I' as subject, present continuous 'are planning', 'was established recently' (past passive) or 'recently established', and 'near my city' instead of 'beside my cities'. Also 'cities' should be singular. Suggestion: 'My friends and I are planning to visit a park that was recently established near my city.'

× I heard that the park is excellent and its environment is natural and very friendly.

✓ I heard that the park is excellent and its environment is natural and very pleasant.

Sentence is mostly fine; 'friendly' is odd for 'environment' — use 'pleasant' or 'welcoming'. Use of 'heard' (past) with present 'is' is acceptable. Suggestion: replace 'friendly' with 'pleasant' for collocation.

× So I think I will visited the very soon and enjoy the natural beauty of the park.

✓ So I think I will visit it very soon and enjoy the natural beauty of the park.

Future tense error: 'will visited' mixes future auxiliary with past form. Use base verb 'visit' after 'will'. Also include object pronoun 'it' for 'the park' and correct word order 'very soon'. Suggestion: 'I will visit it very soon.'