Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and shows personal experience, but it has many grammatical errors, repetitions and unclear phrasing. Focus on a clear topic sentence, correct tense use, and avoid filler words (uh, I, I). Use linking words like 'however' to show contrast and keep your answer within 3–4 concise sentences. Pronounce verbs correctly (e.g., 'spent' not 'spend').

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often went to the park with my parents and had a lot of fun. However, as I grew older I spent less time there and played more in open fields. I still remember enjoying picnics and games with other children.

Suggestion: Good idea expressed, but sentence structure, word choice and repetition need improvement. Replace informal phrases like 'busy stick day' and avoid repeating words. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons clearly. Keep answers concise (3–4 sentences) and use correct collocations (e.g., 'spare time', 'relieve my stress').

Example: Yes, I still enjoy parks. Whenever I have spare time after a busy day, I go there to relax because it helps me relieve stress and get fresh air. Walking in the park makes me feel better and more energetic.

Suggestion: The main idea is clear but grammar, word order and vocabulary are weak. Avoid filler words and correct noun forms (e.g., 'lots of parks', 'older people'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make reasons clear. Provide one or two specific benefits concisely and finish with a clear concluding sentence.

Example: Yes, I would. I think our city needs more parks because they give children and older people a safe place to relax and exercise. For example, parks allow families to gather, and they improve public health by encouraging walking and outdoor activity.

Suggestion: You answer shows interest but is vague and missing details. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use specific information (where the park is, what makes it attractive) and linking words like 'because' and 'so that'. Keep it to 2–4 clear sentences and mention who you will go with and when if possible.

Example: Yes, I plan to visit a well-known park just outside my city next month because I heard it has beautiful gardens and peaceful walking trails. I want to go with my family so we can enjoy a picnic and explore the nature together.

× When I was a child, I used to go to park with my parents and enjoy a quality time.

✓ When I was a child, I used to go to the park with my parents and enjoy quality time.

The noun 'park' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place the speaker visited repeatedly. 'A quality time' is incorrect because 'time' as an uncountable noun here does not take the indefinite article; use 'quality time' instead. Suggestion: use 'the park' and 'quality time'.

× But over the time when I, uh, I, I was growing up, I keep the distance from the park and I moved to the field.

✓ But over time, as I was growing up, I kept my distance from the park and moved to the field.

The phrase 'over the time' should be 'over time'. The verb 'keep' is present while the rest of the sentence is past ('was growing up' and 'moved'), so it should be past 'kept' for consistent past tense. Also use 'kept my distance' for the common expression. Suggestion: match verb tense to past and use idiomatic phrase 'kept my distance'.

× But I can remember I was spend a quality time, uh, at the park and enjoy a lot with other.

✓ But I remember I spent quality time at the park and enjoyed it a lot with others.

'Can remember' is awkward with the rest in past; use simple past 'remember' or 'could remember'. 'Was spend' is incorrect; past tense 'spent' is required. 'Enjoy' must be past 'enjoyed'. 'Other' should be plural 'others' and include an object 'it' or restructure. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past actions and correct plural pronoun.

× Whenever I find another spare of time, I go in the park and spend and spend quality time after a busy stick day.

✓ Whenever I find a spare moment, I go to the park and spend quality time after a busy day.

'Another spare of time' is incorrect; use 'a spare moment' or 'some spare time'. 'Go in the park' should be 'go to the park'. Repetition 'spend and spend' is wrong. 'Busy stick day' is not meaningful; use 'busy day'. Suggestion: simplify phrase and use correct preposition 'to'.

× If I spend spend sometimes in park, it will help me to be pressure myself as well as I can get enough fresh air from the park.

✓ If I sometimes spend time in the park, it helps me relieve pressure and I can get enough fresh air from the park.

Use 'spend time' not repeated 'spend spend'. Preposition 'in park' needs article and should be 'in the park'. 'It will help me to be pressure myself' is incorrect; use 'helps me relieve pressure' or 'reduce my stress'. Also tense should be present simple for habitual action: 'it helps'. Suggestion: use 'spend time in the park' and 'relieve pressure' or 'reduce stress'.

× I love going to the park. Whenever I find another spare of time, I go in the park and spend and spend quality time after a busy stick day.

✓ I love going to the park. Whenever I find some spare time, I go to the park and spend quality time after a busy day.

This repeats earlier issues: 'another spare of time' should be 'some spare time' and 'go in the park' should be 'go to the park'. Remove duplicated 'spend'. Use 'a busy day' not 'busy stick day'. Suggestion: use natural collocations 'some spare time' and 'go to the park'.

× Yeah, I own I I honestly a lots of park in my city because it will help to children and older generation to spend quality time.

✓ Yeah, I honestly want lots of parks in my city because they will help children and older generations spend quality time.

The original is unclear: 'I own I I honestly a lots of park' likely meant 'I honestly want lots of parks'. 'A lots of park' is wrong; use 'lots of parks' (plural). 'It will help to children and older generation' needs plural and no 'to': 'they will help children and older generations'. Suggestion: change verb to 'want', pluralize 'parks', and correct plurality for beneficiaries.

× That part Park is a an excellent place for spend quality time.

✓ That park is an excellent place to spend quality time.

'That part Park' is incorrect ordering and capitalization; likely 'That park'. 'a an' duplicates articles; use 'an' before 'excellent'. Use infinitive 'to spend' not 'for spend'. Suggestion: 'That park is an excellent place to spend quality time.'

× People can exercise and they can gatherings.

✓ People can exercise and have gatherings.

'They can gatherings' is ungrammatical; 'gatherings' is a noun, so use 'have gatherings' or 'gather'. Suggestion: use verb 'have' or 'gather' to express the activity.

× So I I want to see a huge part in my.

✓ So I want to see many large parks in my city.

The sentence is missing words and has 'part' instead of 'park'. 'In my' is incomplete; add 'city'. Also 'a huge park' or 'many large parks' depend on meaning; context suggests desire for more parks, so use 'many large parks'. Suggestion: complete the sentence with 'in my city' and correct noun choice.

× Yeah, I want to go another park beside my city.

✓ Yeah, I want to go to another park outside my city.

Use 'go to another park' with preposition 'to'. 'Beside my city' is better expressed as 'outside my city'. Suggestion: 'go to another park outside my city'.

× I see. I heard that this park is very excellent and the environment is quite so I'm planning to visit the park as soon as possible.

✓ I heard that this park is excellent and the environment is nice, so I'm planning to visit it as soon as possible.

'Very excellent' is redundant; 'excellent' alone is fine. 'The environment is quite so' is ungrammatical; use 'the environment is nice' or 'very good'. Use pronoun 'it' for 'the park'. Suggestion: simplify adjectives and use correct pronoun reference.

× At the same time, I am planning to carry with my family. They are.

✓ At the same time, I am planning to go with my family.

'Planning to carry with my family' is incorrect; likely meant 'go with my family' or 'visit with my family'. The trailing 'They are.' is incomplete and should be removed or completed. Suggestion: use 'go with my family' or 'visit with my family'.