Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and direct: start with a simple topic sentence stating whether you liked parks as a child, then give one or two specific supporting details (activities, places, feelings). Avoid fillers, repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas and keep answers within 3–4 concise sentences.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had a small pool where I could swim. I often spent afternoons there with friends, playing games and having picnics. Those visits made my childhood feel playful and carefree.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same word. Start with a clear statement about whether you still like parks, then explain why with specific examples or feelings. Use linking words like because or as a result. Keep the response natural and limited to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they remind me of happy childhood memories. For example, walking past the playground often brings a sense of nostalgia and helps me relax.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Replace casual words like "nope" with "no" or "not really" and explain what you mean by "enough" (e.g., size, condition, location). Mention maintenance issues as a reason and suggest an alternative (improve existing parks). Use linking words such as because or however.

Example: Not really. We already have enough parks in my neighborhood, but many of them need better maintenance. Instead of building new ones, the city should repair playground equipment and add benches and lighting so the current parks are safer and more pleasant.

Suggestion: Be specific about the park and why you want to visit. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the park and then give concrete reasons (facilities, atmosphere, activities). Use correct verb forms and linking words (for example, because, so) and limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, there is a park called Culture Park that I want to visit because it has wide paths and a lively running community. I think exercising there would motivate me to run more and enjoy a pleasant outdoor atmosphere.

× I like to call parks because I like swimming, swimming at my park it's limited.

✓ I liked going to parks because I liked swimming; swimming at my local park was limited.

The question asks about childhood habits, so past tense should be used. 'I like' should be 'I liked' and 'is limited' should be 'was limited' to match past time reference. Also 'call parks' is incorrect word choice but not in the provided list; corrected to 'going to parks'. Use past simple for habitual past actions (liked, was).

× So, uh, when I get that singing so I'm the proper person, lah.

✓ So, when I got that feeling, I thought I was the right person to do it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and mixes tenses and informal filler words. 'Get that singing' is incorrect; likely intended 'got that feeling'. Use past tense 'got' and 'thought' to match childhood context. Rephrase to clear subject-verb structure ('I thought I was the right person').

× A proper person to get thing when I kids, OK.

✓ A proper person to get things when I was a kid, okay.

The sentence needs past tense and correct noun forms. 'I kids' is incorrect; use 'I was a kid' or 'when I was a child'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' if unspecified multiple items. Use past simple 'was' for time reference.

× I like to coin parks now because it's give me more memorable, memorable moments and Deja vu when we kids, we played at that parks.

✓ I like going to parks now because they give me more memorable moments and a sense of deja vu when we played at those parks as kids.

The student mixes tenses and incorrect forms. Use present simple 'like' with the gerund 'going'. 'It's give' is wrong; third person plural 'they give' matches 'parks'. Use 'memorable moments' (plural) and 'a sense of deja vu'. For past reference 'when we played at those parks as kids' uses past simple and correct demonstrative 'those'.

× So it's give me, uh, that thing. Ah.

✓ So it gives me that feeling.

Use present simple third person 'gives' not 'give'. Also replace vague 'that thing' with 'that feeling' for clarity. The gerund form is not required here. This matches subject-verb agreement.

× Nope, because uh, that bug is already enough for our community and me.

✓ No, because that park is already sufficient for our community and me.

'Nope' and 'bug' are incorrect words; likely meant 'park' and 'enough' should be used with 'is sufficient' or 'is enough for'. While not strictly a modal error originally, corrected to clearer modal/adjective usage. Use 'is sufficient' for formality and correctness.

× So I think they have to give any maintenance at that park because uh that park is already lame so anything can broken.

✓ So I think they need to do some maintenance at that park because it is already run-down and many things are broken.

Incorrect quantifier and verb forms: 'have to give any maintenance' is unnatural; use 'need to do some maintenance'. 'Anything can broken' is ungrammatical; use 'many things are broken' or 'things can break'. 'Lame' is informal; 'run-down' is better. Use present simple for general statements.

× Umm, right now I know one which is culture poetry.

✓ Right now I know one called Culture Poetry Park.

'Know one which is' is awkward; use 'called' to name a place. 'Culture poetry' seems a name; treat as proper noun and capitalize. No gerund issue but restructuring improves clarity.

× So, uh, when people go there, they shoot more, uh, they're more prefer running.

✓ When people go there, they exercise more; they prefer running.

'Shoot' is incorrect here; likely meant 'work out' or 'exercise'. Use present simple 'prefer' with base verb 'running' or 'to run' but 'prefer running' is acceptable. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb choices.

× So when I go there I running. So it's give me a motivation to running.

✓ So when I go there I run. It gives me motivation to run.

Use base verb 'run' after 'I' in present simple, not 'running'. 'It's give' should be 'It gives' to agree with third person singular. Use infinitive 'to run' or gerund consistently; 'motivation to run' is idiomatic.