Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did), then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense or articles.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often went with friends to play football and volleyball, which helped me stay active and have fun outdoors.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and explain one or two reasons with linking words. Correct common mistakes (use present simple, avoid 'to going'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Not really, I rarely go to parks now. Instead, I prefer to relax or play games at home because I find parks less interesting and I enjoy the convenience of staying indoors.

Suggestion: State your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words (because, therefore) and correct vocabulary (parks, city). Avoid vague numbers and unclear phrases. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: I don't think we need more parks in my city because there are already several good ones. Moreover, many people prefer to travel during holidays, so investing in new parks might not be the best use of public funds.

Suggestion: Answer briefly and give specific reasons why you would visit that park. Use clear descriptions and correct phrases (e.g., 'famous for its gardens' not 'you are over there'). Keep sentences grammatical and avoid repeating words.

Example: Yes, there is a famous park in my city that I would like to visit. It has beautiful gardens and calm walking paths, so it is a great place to relax, get fresh air, and spend an evening with friends or family.

× So I generally prefer to go with my friends in the park and play football, volleyball.

✓ So I generally preferred going to the park with my friends and playing football or volleyball.

The context is describing a past habit ('when I was a child'), so verbs should be in the past tense. Use 'preferred' and gerund forms 'going' and 'playing' for parallel structure.

× Yeah, when I was a child, I used to prefer to play a lot of things because I'm I was getting bored in my home.

✓ When I was a child, I used to like playing many different games because I got bored at home.

The original mixes present and past tenses and has awkward phrasing. Use past habitual 'used to' with base verb or gerund 'like playing'. 'A lot of things' is vague; 'many different games' is clearer. 'Bored at home' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I'm opposite now, it's very boring for me to go in the park because I'm waiting now so I get a two days off.

✓ I'm the opposite now; it's very boring for me to go to the park because I am waiting to get two days off.

'I'm opposite now' is unnatural; use 'the opposite'. Use 'go to the park' (correct preposition). 'I'm waiting now so I get a two days off' mixes tenses and articles; correct to 'waiting to get two days off' and drop extra article before 'two days'.

× So I generally prefer to relax or play games in my home, not to going to park.

✓ So I generally prefer to relax or play games at home, not go to the park.

Use 'at home' instead of 'in my home' for habitual activities. After 'prefer' use the base form 'go' (not 'to going'). Also use article 'the park' with a specific noun.

× I think we have enough part, like it's around 4:00 to 5:00. Parts are there in my cities.

✓ I think we have enough parks; there are around four or five parks in my city.

'Part' should be plural 'parks'. Numbers should be words in speech transcripts and '4:00 to 5:00' is incorrect for counting; use 'four or five'. 'Cities' should be singular 'city' if speaking about own city.

× I don't prefer to add one more because people nowadays don't prefer to go over that.

✓ I would not prefer to add another because people nowadays do not visit them often.

'Prefer to add one more' is awkward; 'would not prefer to add another' is clearer. 'Don't prefer to go over that' is unnatural—use 'do not visit them often'.

× So I don't think so government need to waste money on park anymore because nowadays people prefer to travel outside of CD on their days or on their holiday or vacation.

✓ So I don't think the government needs to waste money on parks anymore because people nowadays prefer to travel outside the city on their days off or on holiday.

Missing definite article before 'government' and subject-verb agreement ('government needs'). 'Park' should be plural 'parks'. 'Outside of CD' is unclear—use 'outside the city'. Use 'days off' or 'on holiday' rather than 'on their holiday or vacation'.

× Yeah, there is a one park in my city which is very famous because there is a you are over there and it's a quite a better place to get your mood relaxed and you can have fresh air.

✓ Yes, there is a park in my city that is very famous because it is beautiful and a good place to relax and get fresh air.

Use 'a park' or 'there is a park' without 'one' after 'a'. Remove unclear phrase 'there is a you are over there'. Use 'that' or 'which' for clauses; 'quite a better' is incorrect—use 'a good' or 'quite a nice'. 'Get your mood relaxed' is unnatural; use 'relax' instead.

× You can go with your loved one, love ones and you can enjoy your evening time over there.

✓ You can go with your loved one or loved ones, and you can enjoy your evening there.

Use singular 'loved one' or plural 'loved ones' connected by 'or'. 'Evening time' is redundant; 'evening' suffices. Remove extra 'over there' for conciseness.

× It's very grateful for me.

✓ It makes me feel very grateful.

'Grateful' describes a feeling, not a thing; 'It's very grateful for me' is incorrect. Use 'It makes me feel very grateful' or 'I am very grateful for it'.