Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (“umm”) and correct verb forms (e.g., “I loved it,” “we played”).

Example: I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my little brother, and we spent hours playing games like tag and hide-and-seek. Those visits were fun because we could run freely and explore the playground.

Suggestion: Respond directly and use correct grammar and linking words. Begin with a clear statement, then give specific reasons and one example. Correct verbs and articles (e.g., “go to parks,” “after a busy day”).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially after a busy day, because they help me relax. For example, I often sit on a bench to watch the trees and listen to birds, which calms my mind.

Suggestion: Be decisive and organize your answer: state your opinion, then give clear supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases (e.g., “unique. Fuel”). Provide a specific example of a feature you would like.

Example: Yes, I would like more parks, although Baku already has several attractive ones. New parks with unique features, such as outdoor exercise equipment or a botanical garden area, would make the city even more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and then support it with specific details. Use correct prepositions and articles (e.g., “parks in Europe,” “in France”) and avoid sentence fragments. Explain what you expect to experience to make your answer more vivid.

Example: I haven't planned anything specific, but I would like to visit parks in Europe, for example in France. I imagine French parks have a relaxed atmosphere, beautiful gardens and historic features that would be interesting to see.

× I loved it when I was child because umm, I went to the parks with my little brother and we really enjoyed by playing some games in this park for instance.

✓ I loved it when I was a child because I went to the park with my little brother and we really enjoyed playing some games in the park, for instance.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'child' and incorrect use of definite article 'the' with 'parks' when speaking generally. Also 'enjoyed by playing' is incorrect; use 'enjoyed playing'. Use singular 'park' if referring to one or generic 'the park' for the place you visited. Suggestion: include necessary articles ('a', 'the') and use correct verb patterns (enjoy + -ing).

× We used to playing land umm and also umm umm.

✓ We used to play games like 'land' and so on.

After 'used to' the base form (infinitive without to) is required: 'used to play', not 'used to playing'. Also 'land' is unclear; I interpreted it as a game so corrected to 'games like 'land''. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb and be clear about the activity name.

× Yes, actually sometimes I prefer to go parks after busy and overwhelmed day because it helps me to relax and I just sit and watching, watch the view and. Like this atmosphere?

✓ Yes, actually sometimes I prefer to go to parks after a busy and overwhelming day because it helps me to relax and I just sit and watch the view and enjoy the atmosphere.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go'. Missing article 'a' before 'busy day'. 'Overwhelmed' is an adjective describing a person; the correct adjective for the day is 'overwhelming'. 'Sit and watching' mixes forms; use base verb 'watch'. Sentence fragments and question at end are informal — combined into a full statement. Suggestion: include correct prepositions and articles, choose the correct adjective ('overwhelming'), and use parallel verb forms ('sit and watch').

× Maybe yes I would like but on the other hand I think that there are many beautiful and eye-catching parks in my city in Baku, but maybe it would be great to build some new parks with unique. Fuel or unique features?

✓ Maybe yes, I would, but on the other hand I think that there are many beautiful and eye-catching parks in my city, Baku. However, it would be great to build some new parks with unique features.

'In my city in Baku' is redundant; use 'my city, Baku' or 'in Baku'. The fragment 'with unique. Fuel or unique features?' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'unique features'. Remove stray word 'Fuel' and complete the sentence. Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: avoid redundancy, remove stray words, and finish the sentence with proper noun phrases ('unique features').

× Actually I have never thought about it, but perhaps if I have a chance I will go to parks in the Europe, for example, in the. France, because I think that they have. Another vibe and atmosphere.

✓ Actually I have never thought about it, but perhaps if I have the chance I will go to parks in Europe, for example in France, because I think that they have a different vibe and atmosphere.

Do not use 'the' before 'Europe'. Use 'the chance' rather than 'a chance' when referring to a specific opportunity in this context; 'a chance' could also be acceptable but 'the chance' sounds more natural. Use plural 'parks in Europe' is fine; remove stray period before 'France'. 'Another vibe' is better expressed as 'a different vibe'. Suggestion: remove incorrect articles, fix punctuation, and choose natural collocations ('a different vibe').