Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a brief topic sentence stating your opinion, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitations, redundant phrases and grammar mistakes (e.g., tense and articles). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: No, I didn’t enjoy going to parks as a child. The parks near my home were small and had few attractions, so they didn’t interest me. As a result, I rarely spent time there.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same reason twice. Use a clear linking word to add a second brief detail (e.g., 'because' then 'however' or 'also'). Correct common grammar errors: use 'don't' vs 'didn't', 'enough' instead of 'sufficient' in some contexts, and avoid doubling words.

Example: No, I don’t go to parks much now because I’m very busy with work. Also, I usually prefer indoor activities in my free time, so I rarely visit parks with friends or family.

Suggestion: Be specific about what you mean by 'more parks' and explain one or two concrete benefits. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'spaces' or 'areas' instead of 'periods') and avoid repeating words like 'possible possibility.' Keep sentences concise and connect ideas with 'because' or 'for example.'

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because there are many unused plots of land that could become green spaces. For example, small community gardens or playgrounds would improve residents’ health and create places for children to play.

Suggestion: Give a clear, confident response and avoid filler words. If you are not interested, state that simply and add a reason or an alternative (e.g., museums). Use correct phrasing: 'I have no interest in parks' and 'I’m more interested in museums.' Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: To be honest, I have no particular interest in visiting parks in the future because I prefer cultural places. I would rather visit museums, as I find them more informative and enjoyable.

× I did not like to go back so when I was child because there uh, there is no any kind of park which attracts me more and that's why I did not visit any kind of parks in my side Rd. time.

✓ I did not like going to parks when I was a child because there were no parks that attracted me, so I did not visit any parks in my area at that time.

This sentence has multiple structural issues: incorrect word order, missing article, incorrect tense and plurality. Use 'going to parks' (gerund) instead of 'to go back so', include the article 'a child', use plural 'parks' and past plural 'were no parks', and simplify clauses for clarity. Suggestion: break long sentences into shorter ones, use 'there were no' for past existence, and use 'in my area at that time' for location/time clarity.

× No, I don't like to go in the park because I haven't any sufficient time to visit parks in my daily life because I am very busy in my work. That's why I I can't visit any kind of parks with my friends or siblings.

✓ No, I don't like going to parks because I don't have enough time to visit them in my daily life; I am very busy with work, so I can't visit parks with my friends or siblings.

Problems include incorrect verb forms ('don't like to go in the park' -> 'don't like going to parks'), wrong auxiliary ('I haven't any sufficient time' -> 'I don't have enough time'), repetition and awkward phrasing. Use 'don't have' for possession, 'enough' for sufficiency, plural 'parks' and pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition. Combine clauses with a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because there are many different periods which are not used. So there are many possible possibility to create a different kinds of parks in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are many unused areas, so there are many possible opportunities to create different kinds of parks.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'see more parks in my city' is acceptable but 'would like' is more natural for desire. 'Different periods which are not used' is incorrect; use 'unused areas'. 'Possible possibility' is redundant; use 'possible opportunities' or just 'opportunities'. Also change 'a different kinds' to 'different kinds' and correct article usage.

× Umm, to be honest, I, I have no, any interest in PAC uh, that's why I have no, umm, such kinds of future plan to visit parks. Uh, but I am actually interested about the museums, which is very effective for me, uh, too.

✓ To be honest, I have no interest in parks, so I have no plans to visit them in the future. However, I am actually interested in museums, which I find very appealing.

This sentence has filler words and structural errors. Remove hesitations and correct prepositions: 'interested about' should be 'interested in'. 'Such kinds of future plan' is ungrammatical; use 'plans to visit them in the future'. 'Which is very effective for me' is unnatural; use 'which I find very appealing' or 'which interest me'. Make sentences concise and clear.