Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct verb tense and plural/singular forms, and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. In the afternoons I often played games with other kids there, such as tag and hide-and-seek, which made those visits really fun.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first, use correct grammar (singular/plural, full verbs), avoid fillers like 'uh', and use a linking word to add a reason or situation. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Example: Yes, I still go to parks sometimes. When I have free time I often visit them for jogging and walking because they are peaceful and good for exercise.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct sentence structure and use linking words to expand. Provide specific details (numbers, distances) clearly and avoid repetition. Use complete sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because we only have one nearby park. The next nearest park is about 30 kilometers away, so more local parks would make outdoor activities much more accessible.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear statement and then explain using correct grammar and linking words. Correct tense and phrasing for travel time (e.g., 'it takes six to seven hours'). Add a brief reason why you want to visit to make the answer more specific.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Bukidnon Park in the future. It takes six to seven hours to get there, but I want to go because of its beautiful scenery and hiking trails.

× Yes, I like going to parks, especially in the afternoon and playing some other kids.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks, especially in the afternoons and playing with other kids.

Errors: verb tense and missing preposition/verb form. The question asked about childhood, so past tense 'liked' is appropriate (Past tense issue ID 5). 'Afternoon' should be plural when speaking generally ('in the afternoons'). 'playing some other kids' is missing the preposition 'with' to show activity with others and sounds ungrammatical; correct is 'playing with other kids'. Suggestion: use past tense for childhood memories, pluralize recurring time expressions, and include necessary prepositions with 'play'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Sometimes when I have a free times and sometimes if uh wanna have some time in jogging and walking.

✓ Sometimes when I have free time, and sometimes if I want to go jogging or walking.

Errors: 'free times' is incorrect pluralization; use uncountable 'free time' (Singular and plural issue ID 1 / Quantifier issue ID 14). 'wanna' is informal and missing subject; use 'I want to' or 'I want to go'. Also need 'go jogging or walking' to use correct verb phrases. Suggestion: use 'free time', include subject 'I', avoid contractions like 'wanna' in formal speech, and use 'go' with activities like jogging and walking. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, because uh, we only have, we only one park here near in our house and the other one maybe 30 kilometers.

✓ Yes, because we only have one park near our house, and the other one is maybe 30 kilometers away.

Errors: missing verb 'have' was present but word order was wrong; 'we only one park' lacks auxiliary and correct word order (Sentence structure/verb issue ID 26). Article error: 'one park' was fine but position of 'only' made sentence awkward; move 'only' before 'have' or after 'we' is acceptable. Preposition error: use 'near our house' not 'near in our house' (Incorrect preposition ID 11). Also need 'is' and 'away' to indicate distance: 'the other one is maybe 30 kilometers away.' Suggestion: use correct word order, include 'is', use 'away' with distances, and remove unnecessary fillers. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, I love going to Bukidnon Park, but it's took six to seven hours going there.

✓ Yes, I loved going to Bukidnon Park, but it took six to seven hours to get there.

Errors: tense mismatch — question asked about future or general desire to go; if referring to past trips use past tense 'loved' and 'took' (Past tense issue ID 5). 'it's took' incorrectly combines contraction 'it is' with past 'took'; correct is 'it took'. Also need 'to get there' or 'to go there' to express travel time (Sentence structure ID 26). Suggestion: choose consistent tense (present for current preference: 'I love... but it takes six to seven hours to get there' or past: 'I loved... it took...'), avoid mixing 'it's' with past verb, and use 'to get there' for travel duration. Grammar problem type ID:5