Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words (uh, so).

Example: No, I didn’t have the chance to go to parks as a child because there were no parks in my village. As a result, I spent most of my free time playing games with neighbors or helping my family on the farm.

Suggestion: Give a concise direct answer using correct grammar and a reason. Limit repetition and use linking words to connect ideas (because, so, therefore). Include one or two specific examples of what you do at home.

Example: No, I don’t usually go to parks now because I prefer staying at home to relax. For example, I often watch TV or play video games in the evenings, which helps me unwind after work.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and avoid contradicting yourself. If you are unsure, say so briefly, then explain why. Use coherent linking words (however, although) and correct noun forms (parks, city).

Example: I’m not sure I would personally use more parks because I don’t enjoy going to them. However, I think having more parks is beneficial for the city because they provide green space for families and improve air quality.

Suggestion: Be specific about the park and why you want to visit. Use present or future tense correctly and give concrete details (name, features, activities). Link reason to your personal goal (photography).

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park next year because it has diverse scenery and interesting architecture. As a photographer, I want to take landscape and portrait photos there to build my portfolio and enter local competitions.

× No, when I was a child, uh, we are not have park in our village so. Yes.

✓ No. When I was a child, we did not have a park in our village.

The sentence mixes past context with present-tense 'are' and incorrect verb 'have'. Use simple past 'did not have' for a past fact. Also remove filler words and fix article 'a park'. Suggestion: Use 'did not have' for negative past statements and include 'a' before singular countable nouns.

× Honestly, I I don't like go, I don't like to go to park because I always like to stay at home to relax myself.

✓ Honestly, I don't like to go to the park because I prefer to stay at home to relax.

Incorrect verb form 'go' after 'like' requires infinitive 'to go' or gerund 'going'; also article 'the' is needed before 'park' when speaking generally about parks in context. 'Relax myself' is unnatural; use 'relax' or 'relax at home'. Suggestion: Use 'I don't like to go to the park' or 'I don't like going to the park' and prefer simpler verbs ('prefer to stay at home to relax').

× I really like to stay at home and I always, sometimes I will watch TV and play game.

✓ I really like staying at home, and I sometimes watch TV and play games.

Use gerund 'staying' after 'like' or keep parallel structure. 'Sometimes I will watch' is unnatural for habitual actions; use simple present 'sometimes watch'. 'Play game' needs plural 'games' or 'play a game'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits and correct plural for countable nouns.

× No, but I think they'll have a lot of parks in all in my city.

✓ No, but I think there are already many parks in my city.

'They'll have' implies future and wrongly uses 'they' for parks. Use 'there are' for existence in present. 'A lot of' is acceptable but 'many' is more natural with 'parks'. Remove redundant 'in all'. Suggestion: Use 'there are' for present existence and 'many' with countable nouns.

× But you know, I don't like going to parks. So honestly, I don't know. I don't say the those park.

✓ But you know, I don't like going to parks. Honestly, I can't say which ones I mean.

Original has unclear phrases and wrong article 'the those park'. 'I don't say' is incorrect for 'I can't say' and 'those park' mismatches number and article. Suggestion: Use 'which ones' to refer to specific parks and 'I can't say' to express uncertainty.

× Yes, they'll have one that I I really want to go because I am a photographer so I need to collect my picture to join activities.

✓ Yes, there will be one that I really want to go to because I am a photographer and I need to collect my pictures for activities.

'They'll have' wrongly uses plural 'they' and is ambiguous; use 'there will be' for future existence. Add preposition 'to' after 'go'. 'Collect my picture' should be plural 'pictures' and 'to join activities' is better as 'for activities'. Suggestion: Use 'there will be' + 'go to' and correct noun number and preposition choice.