Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add 1–2 concise supporting details with correct grammar and appropriate linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and keep sentences natural (max 5). Focus on specific activities you did and how they made you feel.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. After school I usually went there every day to play football with my friends or have small birthday parties. Because the park had a big playground and open grass, it was an easy place for us to relax and have fun.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give one clear reason with a linking word. Correct grammar for tense and pronouns, and avoid contradictory phrases like 'only want to spend more time'. Keep it concise and specific about frequency and purpose.

Example: Yes, I still like going to parks, but now I go less often because I am a high school student and have to study. However, I try to visit the park at least once a week to relax with my friends or family because it helps me clear my mind after studying.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and avoid vague expressions. Be specific about problems (e.g., only one park, lack of facilities) and realistic suggestions for improvement.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there is currently only one public park and it is often crowded. If the government invested in creating new parks with playgrounds and safe parking for motorcycles, more families and young people could enjoy outdoor activities.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and clearly. If mentioning a specific park, give concrete reasons why you want to visit (attractions, activities) and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Example: Yes, in the future I would like to visit Disneyland because I have seen many photos and videos showing interesting rides and themed playgrounds. For example, I want to try the escape-game attractions and family-friendly shows, which look very exciting.

× Yes, when we try.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear (Grammar Problem Type 26). It uses 'we try' which doesn't fit the past context. Use a full past-tense clause that matches the examiner's question about childhood: 'I did when I was a child.' This provides a clear subject and past tense verb.

× I love to use this park that much every day after school.

✓ I loved to use that park every day after school.

The sentence mixes present tense 'love' with a childhood reference (should be past). This matches Present vs Past tense issue (Types 6 and 5) but per instructions we correct only relevant listed types; here it's primarily a past tense issue (5). Change to 'loved' and simplify phrasing: 'that park' and 'every day after school.'

× I know very well to party with others, to play sports or just let my head out afterwards.

✓ I knew how to play with others, play sports, or just clear my head afterwards.

The original uses 'I know very well to party' which is ungrammatical. Use past tense 'knew' and correct verb patterns: 'knew how to' or an infinitive list without 'to' repeated for parallelism. 'Let my head out' is not idiomatic; use 'clear my head.' This addresses tense and verb pattern errors (Types 5 and 8).

× It's easy today.

✓ It was easy back then.

The student is referring to childhood, so tense should be past. 'Today' is incorrect in this context; use 'back then' for past reference. This corrects tense and adverb/time-word usage (Types 6 and 20).

× Yes, although I'm a high school student so I have to study more but I only want to spend more time supporting my friends or my family because I think that it helped me let my head out after school.

✓ Yes, although I'm a high school student and I have to study more, I still like to spend time with my friends or family because it helps me clear my head after school.

The original is a run-on with mixed tenses and unclear connectors (Grammar Problem Type 26). Combine ideas using 'and' and 'still', keep present tense 'helps' to match current habit, and replace 'helped me let my head out' with the idiomatic 'helps me clear my head.' Also 'only want to spend more time supporting' is awkward; 'like to spend time with' fits the question about liking parks.

× Yes, there are just one parked in the city now, so the playground are limit is future.

✓ Yes, there is only one park in the city now, so the number of playgrounds is limited for the future.

Multiple plural/singular errors (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'There are just one parked' should be 'there is only one park.' 'Parked' is incorrect form; use noun 'park.' 'Playground are limit is future' is ungrammatical: 'playgrounds are limited' or better 'the number of playgrounds is limited.' Also adjust word order and articles.

× I hope that government will invest more in create new playground for persons who have motorcycle.

✓ I hope that the government will invest more in creating new playgrounds for people who use motorcycles.

Several issues: missing article 'the' before government (Article error Type 22/17), 'invest more in create' should be 'invest more in creating' (use gerund after 'invest in'—Type 8), 'playground' should be plural 'playgrounds' (Type 1), and 'persons who have motorcycle' is awkward; use 'people who use motorcycles.' Modal usage 'will' is acceptable for prediction/hope.

× Any future I may want to visit Disneyland to stay?

✓ In the future I might want to visit Disneyland to stay there.

The original is ungrammatical and misorders words (Types 7 and 26). Use correct phrase 'In the future,' modal 'might' for possibility, and add 'there' after 'stay' or rephrase 'to stay there.'

× I have seen it on social media and it's very beautiful and luck with many playground or escape game.

✓ I have seen it on social media; it's very beautiful and lucky, with many playgrounds and escape rooms.

'I have seen' is fine (present perfect), but 'luck' is wrong word choice; use 'lively' or 'lucky' depending on meaning—likely 'lively' or 'full of attractions.' Also pluralize 'playgrounds' and use 'escape rooms' not 'escape game.' Ensure punctuation and parallel nouns. This addresses word choice and pluralization (Types 13 and 1).

× It's so interesting. I hope that I can be do it one day.

✓ It's so interesting. I hope that I can do it one day.

The phrase 'can be do it' is ungrammatical; remove 'be' and use 'can do it' (modal + base verb). This corrects modal verb usage and verb structure (Type 4 and Type 8).