Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. For example, I often visited the UMM Botanical Garden to see magnolias and cherry blossoms, which I found beautiful and calming.

Suggestion: Use consistent tense and concise phrasing. Provide one clear reason and a short result or feeling, linked with a connector. Avoid hesitations and repeated words.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they have many stunning views, and walking there helps me relax and clear my mind.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct noun and preposition usage (e.g., 'near my home', 'my city has many parks'). Keep sentences complete.

Example: Yes, definitely. My city already has several parks near my home, but I would like more neighborhood parks so families can have easy access to green space.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give specific details about why you want to visit, using linking words for clarity. Correct article use and plural/singular forms, and avoid filler words like 'umm'.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in New York because it has wonderful views and many trees, which I think would help me unwind and enjoy nature.

× I like to going to park since I was child and I was a child.

✓ I liked going to parks when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present 'like to going' (incorrect) and wrong tense for past habit. Use past tense 'liked' for a past habitual action. Use gerund 'going' after like, not 'to going'. Also use plural 'parks' and include article 'a' before 'child' -> 'a child'. Suggestion: use 'I liked going to parks when I was a child.'

× I like to see UMM Botanical Garden such as Magnolia and cherry blossom.

✓ I liked seeing the UMM Botanical Garden, such as the magnolia and cherry blossoms.

Maintain past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'. Use gerund 'seeing' after like. Include definite article 'the' for a specific garden. 'Magnolia' and 'cherry blossom' should be pluralized as 'magnolia trees' or 'cherry blossoms' and use lowercase for common nouns. Suggestion: 'I liked seeing the UMM Botanical Garden, such as the magnolia and cherry blossoms.'

× And there's.

✓ And there were many beautiful plants.

Original fragment 'And there's.' is an incomplete sentence (no object/complement). Provide a complete clause. Use past tense 'were' to match context and add a noun phrase to complete meaning. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; always include subject and predicate.

× Yeah, of course I really enjoyed liked it going to the park because there is a lot there are a lot of splendid, stunning views.

✓ Yes, of course I really enjoyed going to the park because there were many splendid, stunning views.

Mixed forms 'enjoyed liked it going' are incorrect—choose one past verb 'enjoyed' plus gerund 'going'. Use past tense 'were' to describe past features. Remove redundant phrases 'there is a lot there are a lot'. Use 'many' with countable 'views'. Suggestion: 'I really enjoyed going to the park because there were many splendid, stunning views.'

× I if it make me feel.

✓ I think it makes me feel relaxed.

Original is fragmentary and ungrammatical. Add subject 'I think' and correct verb 'makes' for present simple with subject 'it'. Use appropriate adjective 'relaxed' to complete idea. Suggestion: complete thoughts and match verb agreement.

× My study has a lot of park and my nearby my home and there is a park and the park has.

✓ Near my home and university there are many parks; there is a park close to my house, and the park has many trees and benches.

Original has pronoun and noun errors and fragments. 'My study' is incorrect for 'my university' or 'my studies'. Use 'there are' for plural parks (existence). Provide complete clauses and proper nouns. Suggestion: use 'near my home and university there are many parks' and avoid repeating fragments.

× Yes, I really want to. My favorite park is Central Park in New York and there is a wonderful views and there are a lot of trees I think it makes me feel umm, unwind I think.

✓ Yes, I really want to. My favorite park is Central Park in New York; it has wonderful views and many trees, and I think it helps me unwind.

Use 'it has' instead of 'there is' for specific features of a named park. 'a wonderful views' mixes singular article with plural noun; change to 'wonderful views' or 'a wonderful view'. Use 'many' for countable 'trees'. 'Makes me feel unwind' is incorrect; use 'helps me unwind' or 'makes me feel relaxed'. Suggestion: use consistent subject 'it' with proper verb forms and correct quantifiers.