Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a direct, coherent answer with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (past tense), simple linking words, and avoid unclear phrases. For example, say you liked parks, explain why (activities, people, memories) and include one brief example.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were a safe place to play with friends. For example, my parents often took me to the park near our house where we played football and had picnics on weekends.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly, then give concise reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use present simple for routines. Mention one specific activity you do instead and why.

Example: Not really, because I am very busy with work and I usually prefer indoor activities. For instance, I often play computer games in the evenings, and I also exercise at home to save time.

Suggestion: Start with a clear yes/no and then explain why using linking words. Use correct noun forms and add one specific benefit (environment, health, community). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks because they make the city greener and improve air quality. In addition, more parks would give people more places to relax and exercise, which is good for public health.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use correct tense and concise reasons, and avoid unclear phrases. If you don't plan to visit parks, explain why (lack of time, other priorities) and mention one condition that could change your mind.

Example: Not really, because I don't have much free time at the moment and usually spend it at home. However, if I had a weekend free or a friend invited me, I would consider going to a nearby park.

× Absolutely my hometown, however original park.

✓ Absolutely. In my hometown we had an old park that I liked.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear structure and verb. It also misuses however and 'original' to describe the park. Use a complete sentence with subject and verb: 'In my hometown we had an old park...' This clarifies meaning and corrects the fragment.

× Why was our child?

✓ Why did we go there as children?

The original 'Why was our child?' is incorrect pronoun and structure for asking the reason for visiting the park in childhood. Use 'we' and a past interrogative with 'did': 'Why did we go there as children?' This forms a correct question in past tense.

× My parents usually lead me to there.

✓ My parents usually took me there.

'Lead me to there' is incorrect use of preposition and verb tense. Use the verb 'take' in past tense for habitual past actions: 'took me there.' Omit 'to' before 'there.'

× No, because I'm busy now and uh, it's a boring thing for me right now.

✓ No, because I'm busy now and visiting parks is boring to me at the moment.

The sentence repeats 'now' and uses 'it's a boring thing' which is unnatural. Use a gerund noun phrase 'visiting parks' and 'boring to me' to express current preference. Keep present continuous for current state: 'I'm busy now.'

× I prefer I prefer play computer games or do exercise every day.

✓ I prefer to play computer games or exercise every day.

After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to play' or the gerund 'playing.' Also avoid repeating 'I prefer.' Combine activities with parallel structure: 'to play... or exercise.'

× Of course, more park is means that the city is green.

✓ Of course, more parks means that the city is greener.

'More park' is incorrect; use plural 'parks.' 'More parks means' treats 'more parks' as the subject (singular verb 'means' can be acceptable but 'parks' normally pair with plural verb; here 'means' is okay idiomatically but better to adjust sentence). Also use comparative 'greener' to compare city greenness when parks increase.

× It's improving.

✓ It makes the city look healthier and improves the environment.

'It's improving' is vague and doesn't clearly state what improves. Replace with a clear present-tense effect: 'It makes the city look healthier and improves the environment.' This gives specific consequences of more parks.

× Maybe no, I don't have many times again.

✓ Maybe not, I won't have much time in the future.

'Maybe no' is unnatural; use 'Maybe not.' 'I don't have many times again' is incorrect pronoun and noun use. Use 'I won't have much time' to express future lack of time.

× And uh, I have a lot things to spend my time inside.

✓ And I have a lot of things to do indoors.

'A lot things' is missing 'of' (quantifier error). 'Spend my time inside' is awkward; 'do indoors' is natural. Use 'a lot of things to do indoors.'

× Go parking isn't a right way.

✓ Going to parks isn't the right thing for me.

'Go parking' is an incorrect verb phrase; use the gerund 'going to parks.' Also 'a right way' is unnatural here; use 'the right thing for me' or 'suitable for me.' Ensure article 'the.'