Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите более грамотно и кратко: используйте правильные времена и структуру предложений, избегайте лишних слов (например, «actually, yeah» и неправильных форм «to going»). Дайте чёткое тематическое предложение, затем одно-два поддерживающих предложения с конкретикой (когда, с кем, что вы делали).

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my parents and friends to play games and have picnics, which made those weekends memorable.

Suggestion: Сосредоточьтесь на правильной грамматике и избегайте повторов. Используйте связки («because», «so», «therefore») корректно и стройте предложения до пяти строк. Уточните, как именно парки полезны (например, для отдыха, спорта или общения).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy visiting parks because they are a great place to relax and exercise. I often meet friends there for a walk or a chat, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

Suggestion: Используйте более формальную структуру: начните с прямого ответа, затем перечислите причины в логическом порядке, используя связующие слова («first», «second», «because»). Избегайте ошибок в согласовании и словоупотреблении (например, «parks help people clear their minds»).

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because currently there are only a couple, which is not enough. More parks would give residents places to exercise and relax, helping them clear their minds.

Suggestion: Не показывайте, что не поняли вопроса; лучше переформулировать и ответить сразу. Избегайте разговорных вставок («OK, yeah, Actually») и исправьте грамматику («that opens nearly» → «that are opening nearby»). Дайте конкретику: назвать пример парка или что вы хотите там сделать.

Example: Yes, I plan to visit several new parks opening near my neighbourhood next year. I would like to go there with a friend to explore the walking trails and have a picnic.

× Yeah, of course I like to going to park as a child because it's actually really important to go walking around and go to parks with your friends or with your parents.

✓ Yeah, of course I liked going to parks as a child because it was actually really important to walk around and go to parks with your friends or with your parents.

The sentence refers to a past habitual action ('as a child'), so present tense 'like' is incorrect; use past 'liked' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'to going' is incorrect verb form after 'like' when expressing preference in past; use the gerund 'going' without 'to' or rephrase to 'liked going' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'to park' should be plural 'to parks' to match general reference to parks (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'go walking around' is wordy; use 'walk around' for correct collocation (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Suggestions: use past tense consistently, use correct verb forms after 'like', and pluralize 'parks' for general statements.

× So actually, yeah, I love because it's really grateful time for me.

✓ So actually, yeah, I loved it because it was a really great time for me.

The meaning relates to past feeling, so 'love' should be past 'loved' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'grateful time' is incorrect collocation; use adjective 'great' to describe 'time' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Also include object 'it' after 'loved' to be grammatical (Grammar Problem Type ID 23). Suggestions: choose correct adjective and tense, and include necessary object.

× Yeah, I still love going to parks now because in every age we should walking around and just take time with our close people.

✓ Yeah, I still love going to parks now because at every age we should walk around and take time with our close people.

'should walking' is wrong; after modal 'should' use base verb 'walk' not gerund (Grammar Problem Type ID 4 and 8). 'in every age' is awkward; use 'at every age' for correct preposition (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). 'take time with our close people' is understandable but 'spend time with loved ones' is more natural (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Suggestions: use modal + base verb, correct preposition, and prefer natural collocations.

× Just it's needed in every age.

✓ It's just needed at every age.

Word order is awkward; place 'just' after the subject or before the verb for clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Use preposition 'at' with 'every age' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Suggestions: correct word order and preposition.

× So yeah, I love being with my friends in the park.

✓ So yeah, I love being with my friends in the park.

This sentence is acceptable as present tense expressing current preference; no grammatical correction needed. If marked, ensure consistency with present simple 'love' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6).

× Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my country because first of all is we have only two or three parks.

✓ Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my country because, first of all, we have only two or three parks.

The phrase 'first of all is we have' is ungrammatical; remove 'is' and use proper clause 'first of all, we have...' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Comma usage and word order needed. Suggestions: omit extraneous 'is' and use commas to separate discourse markers.

× That isn't enough.

✓ That isn't enough.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change. It correctly uses present simple to state insufficiency (Grammar Problem Type ID 6).

× Secondly, parks are helped to people to get clear up their mind and just walking with close people.

✓ Secondly, parks help people clear up their minds and just walk with close people.

Passive 'are helped to people' is incorrect; use active 'parks help people' (Grammar Problem Type ID 21). 'to get clear up their mind' mixes infinitive and phrasal verb incorrectly; use 'clear up their minds' (Grammar Problem Type ID 9 and 10). 'walking' after 'just' should be base verb 'walk' to maintain parallel structure with 'help' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). Also pluralize 'mind' to 'minds' to match 'people' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). Suggestions: use active voice, correct verb forms, and maintain parallel structure.

× Like in my country or city or just another country? Another country? I don't understand the question.

✓ Do you mean in my country or city, or in another country? I don't understand the question.

The original is fragmented and lacks auxiliary 'do' for question form; rephrase into a clear question 'Do you mean...' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26 and 23). Use 'in another country' with preposition 'in' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Suggestions: form complete question clauses and include proper prepositions.

× OK, yeah, Actually in my city, in the future, I want to visit new parks that opens nearly.

✓ OK, yeah. Actually, in my city, in the future, I want to visit new parks that are opening nearby.

'that opens nearly' is incorrect: 'parks that open' requires plural agreement and correct progressive form 'are opening' for near-future events (Grammar Problem Type ID 7 and 27). 'nearly' is wrong adverb; use 'nearby' as an adjective/adverb to indicate proximity (Grammar Problem Type ID 13 and 11). Suggestions: use future or present progressive for planned future events, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct locative word 'nearby'.

× I want to visit it with my friend.

✓ I want to visit them with my friend.

'Parks' is plural, so pronoun should be 'them' not 'it' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12 and 1). Also consider 'with my friends' if visiting with more than one friend. Suggestions: match pronoun number to noun and ensure consistency.