Parks— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Candidate
Yes definitely when I was a kid I enjoy visiting parks, what lost greenery and Wednesday also some playground so I can't I could run around, spend time with my close friends and get some fresh air.
Examiner
Do you still like going to parks now?
Candidate
Yes, absolutely. I still like going to parks. I usually visit them on weekends or in the evening to unwind my mind and stretch my legs, and I sometimes go to attend smart festivals or outdoor events.
Examiner
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Candidate
Yes, for sure, Park is an ideal place for many people to unwind and clear their mind after busy days. Also, they can enjoy some outdoor activities like doing exercise and drug cycling or cycling around.
Examiner
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Candidate
Yes, I would love to visit the garden by the base in Singapore same day because I first saw it on TikTok videos and were impressed by its striking designs and units refineries. I would like to take a long lazily walk there to enjoy the peaceful atmospheres and fresh air.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và trật tự từ; nói rõ hơn bằng một câu chủ đề rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi thì (mixing past/present) và từ sai (ví dụ: “what lost greenery”, “Wednesday”). Nên dùng liên từ phù hợp như “because” hoặc “and” để mạch lạc.
Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had many green spaces and playgrounds. I could run around with my close friends and enjoy the fresh air, which made weekends feel fun and relaxing.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên nhưng có vài lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: “unwind my mind” nên “unwind” hoặc “clear my mind”; “smart festivals” không đúng). Hãy dùng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên.
Example: Yes, absolutely. I usually go to parks on weekends or in the evenings to unwind and get some exercise. Sometimes I join outdoor events like music festivals or community yoga classes, which makes the visits more enjoyable.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (đại từ/viết hoa) và tránh lỗi từ nghiêm trọng (ví dụ: “drug cycling” là sai từ). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể về loại công viên bạn muốn và các hoạt động (walking, jogging, cycling). Sử dụng một câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp.
Example: Yes, definitely. I think more parks would help people relax after busy days. They could use them for activities like walking, jogging or cycling, and parents would also have safe places for their children to play.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp (thì và số nhiều), sửa từ vựng không chính xác (“garden by the base”, “units refineries”, “lazily walk”, “atmospheres”). Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề, nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao muốn tới đó và mô tả một hoạt động cụ thể bạn sẽ làm. Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu và dùng liên từ để nối ý.
Example: Yes, I would love to visit the Gardens by the Bay in Singapore because I saw it on social media and was impressed by its unique architecture and beautiful plant displays. I would spend a long, leisurely walk there and take photos while enjoying the calm atmosphere and fresh air.
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