Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите более ясно и грамматически правильно: используйте простые правильные формы (например, "I liked"), избегайте повторений и лишних пауз, уточните, с кем именно вы гуляли (children / my children / other children). Постройте ответ из темы (topic sentence) и одного-двух поддерживающих предложений с конкретикой.

Example: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often walked there with my younger cousins, and we spent hours playing on the swings and having picnics, which made me very happy.

Suggestion: Используйте правильное время и избегайте путаницы ("Yes, I do" вместо "Yes, I did"). Дайте чёткое утверждение и конкретные причины, связывая идеи связками (because, so, and). Уберите лишние слова и исправьте лексические ошибки ("walking is good for my health" вместо "It's a beautiful sport").

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy going to parks now because I like walking there with my friends and family, and regular walks help me stay healthy and relax.

Suggestion: Дайте развернутый, но краткий ответ: начните с прямого мнения (Yes, I would), затем приведите 1–2 конкретных причины с подходящими словами-связками. Избегайте повторов слов (very, with).

Example: Yes, I would. More parks would give people more space to relax and exercise; for example, families could spend weekends there and children would have safe places to play.

Suggestion: Отвечайте прямо и логично: начните с прямого ответа (No, not really) и объясните одну ясную причину в правильных временах (I'll be busy studying/working). Используйте связки (because, as) и исправьте грамматику ("I will be studying").

Example: No, not really. I probably won't visit many parks because I'll be busy working and studying at university, and I'll need to prepare for my English exams.

× Yes, I did. I like, uh, walking to the park in with child because child with child very happy and I like spend a lot of time with child.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked walking to the park with my child because my child was very happy and I liked spending a lot of time with them.

The speaker refers to past habitual actions, so verbs should be in the past tense (liked, was, liked). 'Spend' should be the gerund 'spending' after 'liked'. Pronouns and possessives are incorrect: 'with child' should be 'with my child' and using 'them' or 'my child' avoids repetition. Use subject-verb agreement for 'child was'. Suggestions: Use past tense consistently when describing childhood activities; use possessive 'my' before 'child'; use gerund after verbs like 'liked'.

× Yes, I did. I like going to the park and now because I love walking with my friends, I like working with my parents and walking.

✓ No, I do not. Now I like going to the park because I love walking with my friends; I also enjoy walking with my parents.

The question asks about present preference, so answers should use present tense. The original 'Yes, I did' is past and mismatches. Use present simple 'I do not' or 'Yes, I do' appropriately. 'I like working with my parents and walking' is unclear; likely intended 'walking with my parents'. Ensure verbs match present tense for current habits. Suggestions: Match tense to the timeframe asked (now = present simple); avoid mixing 'did' with present statements; use clear parallel structures.

× It's a beautiful sport. It's a health for my it's a help for my health and I am.

✓ It's a beautiful activity. It's good for my health and it helps me.

Calling 'walking' a 'sport' is acceptable but 'a health' is incorrect; use 'good for my health' or 'helps my health'. The phrase 'it's a help for my health and I am' is ungrammatical and incomplete. Replace with clear adjective or verb phrases and complete the sentence. Suggestions: Use 'good for my health' or 'it helps my health'; complete sentences and avoid leftover 'I am' fragments.

× Yes, because Park, it's a very beautiful place. It's a place where people can walk with family, with child, with with friend, because it's very, very beautiful.

✓ Yes, because the park is a very beautiful place. It's a place where people can walk with their family, with children, or with friends because it's very, very beautiful.

Use the definite article 'the' when referring to parks in general. 'Child' and 'friend' should be plural or matched with determiners: 'children', 'friends', or 'a child', 'a friend'. Use possessive 'their' for general statements. Remove duplicated 'with'. Suggestions: Use 'the park' for general reference; use plural nouns when speaking generally; use 'their' as a gender-neutral possessive.

× I think no, because in the future I don't have, I didn't have a lot of time because I will work, I will studying in university and I will prepare to for my English exams.

✓ I don't think so, because in the future I won't have a lot of time. I will be working, studying at university, and preparing for my English exams.

Mixing present and past negatives ('don't have, I didn't have') is incorrect. For future plans use future forms: 'I won't have' and progressive 'will be working' or simple 'will work'. 'I will studying' is wrong; use 'will be studying' or 'will study'. 'Prepare to for' is incorrect; use 'preparing for'. Suggestions: Use consistent future forms; for ongoing future activities use 'will be + -ing'; use 'preparing for' without extra preposition.