Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatical and natural: use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh) and use correct tense (past). Add a brief reason or memory to enrich the answer and use linking words if adding details.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I often went there with my parents to play and feed the ducks, which was one of my favorite activities.

Suggestion: Improve accuracy and fluency: use the correct article and plural (the park / parks) and give a specific current reason. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use a linking word if you add a reason (because / so).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now because they are a peaceful place to relax and exercise when I have free time.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with specific details. Avoid repetition and fillers. Use correct nouns and adjectives (more parks, pollution) and linking words (because, so) to connect ideas. Provide a concrete example of benefit (cleaner air, recreation).

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the city suffers from heavy pollution. More parks with trees would improve air quality and provide places for families to exercise and relax.

Suggestion: Clarify your meaning and give a specific and grammatical response. If you mean "in other countries," say so and name an example park or country and why you want to visit. Use a topic sentence then one supporting detail and avoid filler sounds or numbers unrelated to the answer.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit parks in other countries, for example Central Park in New York or Hyde Park in London, because they are famous and have beautiful landscapes to explore.

× Yes, I was. I like, uh, go to the park when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked, uh, going to the park when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'like' and base verb 'go' to describe a past habitual action. Use past tense 'liked' and the gerund 'going' after 'liked' to indicate habitual past action. Also 'Yes, I was' is incorrect responding to 'Did you like...'; use 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: answer yes/no questions in past with 'did' and use past forms for actions (liked, went or liked going).

× Yeah, I still like going to park now when we have free time.

✓ Yeah, I still like going to the park now when we have free time.

The noun 'park' here is specific (going to the park), so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omit or change article when speaking generally: 'going to parks' for general statement, or use 'the park' for a specific park. Suggestion: use 'the park' or plural 'parks' depending on meaning.

× Yeah, I would like to see more park in our, in my city, Sorry uh, because, uh, the city is very, uh, the city is very pollution, so we need to, we need a lot of trees, uh, to, uh, to clean the.

✓ Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my city. Sorry, uh, because the city is very polluted, so we need a lot of trees to clean the air.

Multiple issues: 'more park' needs plural 'parks' (count noun) so use 'parks' (Article/quantifier error). 'Our, in my city' is redundant; choose 'my city'. 'The city is very pollution' uses noun instead of adjective; the correct adjective is 'polluted'. Also the sentence ended incomplete 'to clean the.' — add the object 'air'. Suggestions: use plural for countable nouns ('parks'), use 'polluted' to describe condition, and complete the phrase 'clean the air'.

× Yeah, 12 uh, go to visit more park in the other country.

✓ Yeah, I want to visit more parks in other countries.

The original mixes fragments and incorrect verb forms. 'Go to visit' is redundant; use 'want to visit' or 'go to visit' with proper structure. 'More park' should be plural 'parks'. 'In the other country' is awkward; use 'in other countries' for general future intention. Suggestion: use 'want to visit' + plural noun for general plan and 'other countries' if speaking generally about traveling abroad.