Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) with one topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, up to 5 sentences. For coherence use a linking word when adding details (for example, 'because' or 'and').

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I especially enjoyed playing on the swings and having picnics with my family because it was a special time to relax outdoors. Also, I often met friends there, so it was a social as well as a fun place.

Suggestion: Again, you repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. Answer directly (e.g., 'Yes, I still enjoy parks') and give a specific reason or recent example. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas and stay within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I go for a jog there most weekends because the paths are peaceful and well maintained. As a result, I find it helps my mood and keeps me fit.

Suggestion: You repeated the question rather than giving an opinion. State your view clearly (yes/no/partly) and support it with a reason and a specific benefit or example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to make the reply cohesive.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and offer places for exercise. For instance, adding small pocket parks in residential areas would give people easy access to relax and for children to play.

Suggestion: You repeated the question and made a small word error ('parts' instead of 'parks'). First, answer directly (mention a specific park or type of park), then explain why you want to go there with one or two details. Keep it concise and correct vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park that opened nearby. It has long walking trails and a botanical garden, so I'm interested in seeing the plants and going for a long walk on the weekend.

× Did you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.

The student's response repeats the question instead of answering. The correct form should use past tense 'liked' to match 'Did you... as a child?' Provide a full declarative sentence beginning with a subject and past-tense verb: 'I liked.'

× Did you still like going to parks now?

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now.

The student's reply repeats the question and uses past question form incorrectly. The question asks about the present ('now'), so the answer should be present tense 'I still like.' Ensure subject-verb structure in present tense.

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The student repeated the question instead of answering. Use a full answer with subject and modal verb: 'I would like' to show polite desire. Keep 'my city' to indicate possession.

× Are there any parts you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The student wrote 'parts' instead of 'parks' — this is a word choice error (likely a typo) rather than grammar, but it affects meaning. Also ensure 'go to' is acceptable; the question is fine. Correction fixes the noun to 'parks' to match the examiner's question.