Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答内容自然，但存在重复和语法问题。建议使用更简洁的主题句，避免重复表达（如“the park is not just like the park”），并提供一两个具体细节（例如喜欢的活动或玩具）。注意时态一致（过去式）和冠词用法。可将回答控制在3-4句内，使用连接词如“for example”或“such as”来组织细节。

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks with my family when I was a child. For example, my brother and I always played on the swings and climbed the jungle gym, while my parents relaxed on a nearby bench. Those visits felt like a small fair because there were often food stalls and games.

Suggestion: 表达清楚但时态和人称混用（应使用现在时或现在完成时表达现在的习惯），句子略显啰嗦。建议开门见山用一两句说明现在的情况，再用一两个具体原因支持。用连接词如“because”或“so”但避免重复“I need”。例如用“I don't often go to parks now because...”并给出具体情境。

Example: Honestly, I don't often go to parks these days because I'm busy with work and household chores. When I do have free time, I usually prefer to rest at home and catch up on sleep.

Suggestion: 观点明确但语法和词汇搭配有问题（如“green ground”、“set up more park”）。建议用更准确的词汇（green spaces, parks）和更自然的结构：先给出直接回答，然后用一两句原因支持，并举例说明公园的好处。注意单复数和动词形式一致。

Example: Yes, I would. I think people in modern cities need more green spaces because parks provide a place to relax and exercise. For example, new parks could host small community events and give residents a place to unwind.

Suggestion: 回答自相矛盾且存在语法和用词错误（‘outgoing people’ 与“不喜欢外出”矛盾；时态混乱；动词形式错误）。建议先明确态度（例如不常去公园），然后解释原因并给出一两个具体活动。避免自相矛盾的描述，注意人称和单复数。

Example: Actually, I don't usually plan to visit parks in the future because I prefer staying at home. I find watching TV or playing computer games more relaxing after a long day.

× I really like to go to the park with my brother and my parents because the park is not just like the park, it's more like a fun fair.

✓ I really liked going to the park with my brother and my parents because the park was not just a park; it was more like a funfair.

原句時態與語境不一致。考官問的是童年時是否喜歡去公園，應使用過去時描述過去的經歷；另外“not just like the park”結構不自然，應改為“not just a park”。建議：描述過去習慣用過去時（liked, was），簡化表達使語意清晰。

× To be honest, I do not like to go to the park when I grew up, because when I became an adult, I do not have a lot of time to visit the park.

✓ To be honest, I did not like to go to the park when I grew up, because when I became an adult, I did not have a lot of time to visit the park.

句中描述過去（長大、成為成人）卻用了現在時（do not like, do not have），時態不一致。應把與過去相關的動作改為過去時（did not like, did not have）。建議：講述過去經歷時統一使用過去時態。

× It has a lot of leisure equipment for us to relax and play.

✓ It had a lot of leisure equipment for us to relax and play.

因前句改為過去敘述，動詞時態需一致，將 has 改為 had。此處“leisure equipment for us to relax and play”語義可接受但需保持時態一致。建議：注意全文時態一致性。

× In my opinion I think people live in the modern city needs much more green ground and the government need to set up more park to let people make some leisure event and relax themselves.

✓ In my opinion, people living in modern cities need much more green space, and the government needs to set up more parks so people can have leisure activities and relax.

主要錯誤有：主語與動詞不一致（people ... needs → need）；“people live in the modern city”應用現在分詞短語或複數名詞“cities”；“green ground”用詞不地道，應為“green space”；“need to set up more park”中 park 應為複數且動詞需加 s（government needs）；“let people make some leisure event”表達不自然，改為“have leisure activities”。以上屬於情態/需要表達及主謂一致與詞彙選擇問題。建議：檢查主語複數/單數，使用恰當名詞搭配（green space, parks），並使用 can/so to 表達目的。

× Actually, I do not want to go anywhere. I am an outgoing people and I do not like to going outside.

✓ Actually, I do not want to go anywhere. I am an outgoing person and I do not like going outside.

錯誤在於“people”用作單數自稱應為“person”，且“不 like to going”是不正確的動詞形式（不定式與動名詞混用）。將“do not like to going”改為“do not like going”或“do not like to go”。建議：單數自稱用 person，注意動詞形式選擇（like + -ing 或 like to + 動詞原形）。

× When I grew up and when I was an adult, I prefer to stay at my home and watch TV, play my computer games that make me feel more relaxed.

✓ When I grew up and became an adult, I preferred to stay at home and watch TV and play computer games because they made me feel more relaxed.

這句在表達過去的習慣時使用了現在時（prefer, make），應改為過去時（preferred, made）。此外“stay at my home”更常用“stay at home”；“play my computer games that make me feel more relaxed”結構不夠流暢，改為“play computer games because they made me feel more relaxed”。建議：描述過去習慣時統一使用過去時，使用更自然的搭配（stay at home, play computer games）。