Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), correct verb forms and use specific details. Use one or two supporting details linked logically. For example, mention the park name fluently, what you did there, and why you enjoyed it.

Example: Yes. I often visited Angkor Wat Park as a child because it was a peaceful place to relax. I played games with my friends there and enjoyed exploring the gardens, which made my childhood afternoons fun and active.

Suggestion: Make a direct topic sentence and reduce repetition. Use linking words (because, since, so) to connect reasons and give a specific example (how often, which park, who with). Remove filler words and correct grammar ("I play cricket", "I used to go").

Example: Yes, I still enjoy visiting parks in my free time because they help me relax and exercise. For example, I often play cricket with friends at the neighborhood park on weekends, which keeps me active and lets me socialise.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use clear reasons with examples. Improve grammar ("children don't have free space"), avoid fillers, and use linking words (because, therefore). Be specific about benefits (health, play, community).

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because children today generally lack open spaces to play and relax. More parks would improve children's health, provide safe places for families, and strengthen community life.

Suggestion: Be concise and accurate: give the park name smoothly, include one or two specific reasons why you want to visit (features, attractions) and express likelihood. Remove hesitation phrases and repetition.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit Gardens by the Bay in Singapore because of its unique Supertree Grove and climate-controlled conservatories. If I get the chance, I would like to see the light show and walk through the botanical displays.

× Yes, I was uh, used to angkorutha umm park when I was a kid uh, because it gives me more uh, refreshment and I could uh, be able to play with my friends and hanging out with them.

✓ Yes, I used to go to Angkor Wat Park when I was a kid because it gave me refreshment and I could play and hang out with my friends.

Preposition and verb form errors: 'used to' should be followed by the base verb (used to go), not 'used to [place]'. Capitalization of proper noun corrected. 'Gives me' should be past tense 'gave me' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Could be able to' is redundant; use 'could' or 'was able to'. Use parallel verb forms 'play and hang out'. Suggestions: use 'used to' + base verb for past habitual actions, keep verb tenses consistent, avoid redundant modal pairs.

× Yes, I still love to go to the park when I do have my free time because uh, it gives me uh, for more refreshment and I can also, uh, play my cricket that I really love uh, because, uh, earlier days, uh, when I was a kid, I was used to go to the park uh, for sports purpose, uh, and uh, umm, for hanging out with.

✓ Yes, I still love going to the park when I have free time because it gives me refreshment and I can also play cricket, which I really love. When I was a kid, I used to go to the park for sports and to hang out with friends.

Tense and verb form issues: 'love to go' is acceptable but 'love going' is more natural. 'Do have' is unnecessary; use simple present 'have'. 'Gives me for more refreshment' is ungrammatical; use 'gives me refreshment'. 'Play my cricket' should be 'play cricket'. 'Earlier days... I was used to go' should be 'When I was a kid, I used to go' (used to + base verb). Suggestions: use simple present for habitual current actions, remove unnecessary auxiliaries, and use 'used to' + base verb for past habits. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× I will definitely agree that I want more uh parks in my city as nowadays the kid has not uh growing in a free area, so they really need it as to grow up with some relaxation and some free time.

✓ I definitely agree that we need more parks in my city because children today do not have enough open space, so they really need places to relax and have free time.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number issues: 'the kid has not growing' is ungrammatical and mismatches singular/plural. Use plural 'children' and correct verb phrase 'do not have' or 'do not grow up in open areas'. 'I will definitely agree' is unnatural for a present opinion; use 'I definitely agree' or 'I would definitely like'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general groups, correct auxiliary verbs ('do not'), and choose phrasing appropriate for current opinions.

× Yes, I would like to go to the one of the famous park which is called, uh, gardens by the park, uh, gardens by the Bay, which is located in uh, Singapore.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to one of the famous parks called Gardens by the Bay in Singapore.

Article and noun form errors: 'the one of the famous park' should be 'one of the famous parks' (no 'the' and plural 'parks'). Proper noun is 'Gardens by the Bay'; remove extra words. Suggestions: use 'one of the' + plural noun, and place proper nouns without extra articles unless required.

× It is one of the most, uh, uh, visitors, uh, parks in the world.

✓ It is one of the most visited parks in the world.

Incorrect adjective form: 'visitors parks' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'visited' (past participle used adjectivally) to describe parks that attract visitors. Suggestions: use 'visited' to describe frequency of visits, and avoid unnecessary fillers.

× So I would love to go there if I do have the chance in future.

✓ So I would love to go there if I have the chance in the future.

Unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in conditional: use 'if I have the chance' (simple present for real conditional referring to future). Add article 'the' before 'future'. Suggestions: use simple present in the if-clause for real future conditions and include 'the future' when speaking generally.