Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid hesitation sounds and incorrect grammar (e.g., "I was born" not "I I'm born").

Example: No, I didn't. I was born in a small village that didn't have public parks, so I rarely visited them as a child.

Suggestion: Give a clear main sentence and one precise reason with correct word choice. Use linking words for coherence and avoid filler words. Replace "interested" with "interesting" or better "enjoyable" and correct article usage: "going to the park."

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy going to the park now because I visit with friends or my boyfriend, and I find the atmosphere relaxing and enjoyable.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give one specific reason and a brief consequence. Fix grammar ("doesn't" instead of "don't") and finish your sentence. Avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: Yes, I would. Although my city doesn't have much space, I would like more parks because they provide green space for relaxation and improve air quality.

Suggestion: Provide a clear answer about future plans (yes or no) and then give a specific example of a park or type of park you'd like to visit. Avoid hesitations and vague phrases like "just."

Example: Not at the moment, but in the future I'd like to visit a large botanical garden nearby because it has many themed areas and would be a peaceful place to spend an afternoon with friends.

× No, I didn't because I I'm born in a village and this village can't have, umm, parks.

✓ No, I didn't because I was born in a village and that village didn't have parks.

The sentence uses incorrect present tense 'I'm born' instead of past passive 'I was born' and uses 'can't have' which is inappropriate for past situation; change to past simple 'didn't have'. Also replace 'this village' with 'that village' for coherence. Suggestion: use past simple or past passive when describing past facts (e.g., 'I was born', 'didn't have').

× So I didn't like parks.

✓ So I didn't like going to parks.

The verb 'like' typically takes a gerund when referring to activities: 'like going to parks' rather than just 'like parks' when context is visiting parks. Suggestion: use verb + -ing for activities (see Grammar Problem Type 8).

× Uh, yeah, I like, uh, going to park now I go to park with my friends or boyfriend and uh, I think it is so interested.

✓ Uh, yeah, I like going to the park now. I go to the park with my friends or my boyfriend, and I think it is very interesting.

English requires the definite article 'the' before 'park' when referring to a known place. 'Boyfriend' needs a possessive determiner 'my'. 'Interested' is an adjective describing a person; to describe something that causes interest use 'interesting'. Also separate into clearer sentences. Suggestion: use articles correctly and choose appropriate adjective forms.

× Yes but my city don't have more place for park.

✓ Yes, but my city doesn't have more space for parks.

Subject 'my city' is third person singular so use 'doesn't' not 'don't'. 'Place for park' is unidiomatic; use 'space for parks' or 'places for parks'. Also 'parks' plural fits context. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and choose correct nouns/phrasing.

× But I really want to see more parks in my city.

✓ But I really want to see more parks in my city.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It is retained. Suggestion: none.

× It is very enjoyable and I.

✓ They are very enjoyable to visit.

Original sentence fragments 'It is very enjoyable and I.' is incomplete. Use plural subject 'parks' with 'are' and complete idea: 'They are very enjoyable to visit.' Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; ensure subject and predicate complete the thought.

× Now I am not because I go to the park with my friends and with my boyfriend.

✓ Right now I am not sure, because I go to the park with my friends and my boyfriend.

The original 'Now I am not' is incomplete and unclear; likely intended 'Now I am not (planning to go elsewhere)' or 'Now I don't have a specific park I want to go to.' I provide 'I am not sure' to fit context. Also use 'my boyfriend' and keep present simple 'go'. Suggestion: express uncertainty clearly (e.g., 'I am not sure').

× So if umm they want to go to the park, I of course umm suggest just.

✓ So if they want to go to the park, I, of course, will suggest it.

The original sentence 'I ... suggest just' is ungrammatical and missing object. Use future/modal 'will' or present simple 'suggest' with object 'it'. Here 'will suggest it' sounds natural. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: include the object of 'suggest' and use appropriate auxiliary for intent.