Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Begin with a direct response (e.g., "Yes, I loved going to parks as a child") then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, and link ideas with a cohesive connector if needed.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often rode a pedal boat and fed fish at the pond, which I found very enjoyable. Parks were also a great place to burn off energy and play with friends.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer and use correct articles and verb phrases. Keep sentences concise (max 4–5 sentences). Use linking words (however, but, because) correctly and give a specific current habit or limitation. Avoid vague phrases like "go back to that time again."

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I rarely visit them now because I live at a boarding school far from my hometown. When I do visit, I relax by sitting on a bench and enjoying the green scenery. If I had more free time, I would visit parks more often.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct pronouns and plural agreement. Give one or two specific reasons with clear vocabulary and linking words (for example, because, for instance). Avoid unclear words like "news" or "screening sceneries."

Example: Yes, I would. For example, I think more parks would offer variety — some parks could focus on flowers while others could be small botanical gardens. This would give people new experiences and pleasant green views to enjoy.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and correct unclear expressions. Use a simple past or present perfect consistently when referring to past visits. Provide one specific detail about why you want to go or return. Keep it concise and natural.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit the Botanical Garden of Vilnius University in Lithuania again. I have been there once, and I found the variety of flowers and the peaceful green scenery really captivating, so I would love to return.

× Absolutely yes, at that time I remember that I have used to ride a pedal boat feeding fish and those things really is enjoyable cause parks is the best place to burn off energy.

✓ Absolutely. At that time I remember I used to ride a pedal boat, feed fish, and those things were really enjoyable because parks were the best places to burn off energy.

Error type aligns with present tense/tense usage and subject-verb agreement (IDs 6 and 27). The student incorrectly used 'have used to' instead of 'used to' for past habitual actions, and mixed present and past verbs. 'Is enjoyable' should be 'were enjoyable' to match past context. 'Parks is' should be 'parks were' or 'parks were the best places' to agree in number and tense. Combine actions with proper verb forms and plural agreement. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habits, keep verbs in past tense when recalling past events, and ensure subject-verb agreement for plural subjects ('parks' -> 'were').

× I still enjoy going to park, but since I'm in boarding school I rarely go back to my hometown to go to the park to like please in relaxing by watching those green scenery.

✓ I still enjoy going to the park, but since I'm in boarding school I rarely go back to my hometown to relax and enjoy the green scenery there.

Errors involve incorrect article usage and awkward verb phrases (IDs 22 and 11 and 6). 'going to park' needs the definite article 'the park'. The phrase 'to go to the park to like please in relaxing by watching those green scenery' is ungrammatical: 'please in' is incorrect and 'those green scenery' has wrong determiner and noun form. Use 'relax and enjoy the green scenery' and 'scenery' is uncountable so no plural determiner. Suggestion: use 'the park' for a specific park, use 'relax and enjoy' for intended meaning, and treat 'scenery' as uncountable.'

× But if I have the chance I would definitely go back to that time again.

✓ But if I had the chance, I would definitely go back to that time again.

This is a mixed conditional/modal issue (ID 4 and 7). The sentence mixes present simple 'have' with conditional 'would', creating a hypothetical contrary-to-fact meaning. For an unreal past/hypothetical situation, use past tense 'had' with 'would'. Suggestion: use 'If I had the chance' for hypothetical situations contrary to reality, or 'If I have the chance, I will...' for realistic future possibilities.

× I definitely would because each park has their own unique features to discover like different parks like flowers or Botanical Garden would give me news, experiences and screening sceneries I would say.

✓ I definitely would, because each park has its own unique features to discover. Different parks, such as those with flowers or a botanical garden, would give me new experiences and beautiful scenery, I would say.

Errors include incorrect pronoun agreement and article/capitalization issues (IDs 12, 27, 22, 13). 'each park has their' should be 'each park has its' for singular 'each'. 'like different parks like flowers or Botanical Garden' is repetitive and ungrammatical; use 'such as' and 'a botanical garden'. 'news' is incorrect in this context; use 'new' (adjective) and 'scenery' is uncountable, not 'sceneries'. Suggestion: match pronouns to singular subjects, use 'its' with 'each', choose correct articles and vocabulary ('a botanical garden', 'new experiences', 'scenery').

× Yes, there is. It is a Botanical Garden, which is not likely a part.

✓ Yes, there is. It is a botanical garden, which is not like a park.

Errors are article/capitalization and incorrect phrase choice (IDs 22 and 16). 'Botanical Garden' need not be capitalized unless a proper name; 'not likely a part' is ungrammatical — intended meaning is 'not like a park'. Suggestion: use lowercase for common nouns, and replace 'not likely a part' with 'not like a park' to convey contrast.

× I really, I've been there once and I think the green scenery and the flowers are really captivating.

✓ I have been there once, and I think the green scenery and the flowers are really captivating.

This sentence has minor punctuation/structure issues and tense is acceptable but awkward (IDs 6 and 26). Starting with 'I really,' then inserting 'I've been' is disfluent. Use 'I have been there once' or 'I went there once' for clarity. Suggestion: streamline the sentence by removing filler words and keeping a consistent tense: 'I have been there once, and I think the green scenery and flowers are really captivating.'