Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and use correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, um). Use past tense for childhood and reduce redundancy.

Example: No, I didn't like going to parks when I was a child. I spent most of my free time playing online games and watching cartoons at home, so I rarely visited outdoor places.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use present tense with correct verbs, and give one or two clear reasons. Replace fillers with linking words (because, so) and include a brief example to support your reason.

Example: No, I don't like going to parks now because I prefer indoor activities. For example, I enjoy reading books and spending time in my room, which feels more comfortable and quiet for me.

Suggestion: Be clearer and more structured: give your opinion, then one clear reason with a specific example. Use correct plural forms and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many children and families need outdoor spaces. For example, additional parks would give kids safe places to play and encourage people to exercise more.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and use future reference correctly. Provide a short reason and, if possible, a contrast or alternative. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: No, I don't plan to go to parks in the future because I prefer indoor activities. Instead, I expect to spend my free time reading, using my phone, or relaxing in my room.

× In my childhood, I don't like to going to parks as a child when I was, uh, when I was a child, I spent a lot of time with my phones and I playing with online games and watching cartoons.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't like going to parks; I spent a lot of time on my phone, playing online games and watching cartoons.

The original mixes present tense and past context. Use past tense 'didn't like' for childhood. 'Don't like to going' is ungrammatical: after 'like' use gerund 'going' or infinitive but not both; here past 'didn't like going' is appropriate. 'With my phones' should be 'on my phone' (preposition and singular). 'I playing' lacks auxiliary; use 'playing' as part of a participle phrase ('playing online games'). Also remove repetitive 'as a child' phrasing for clarity.

× No, I don't like to going parks nowadays umm, because umm, I don't like outside uh, umm, things. I like inside, uh, things and I like to spend a lot of time with my bedroom and reading books. What?

✓ No, I don't like going to parks nowadays because I don't like outdoor activities. I prefer indoor activities and I like to spend a lot of time in my bedroom reading books.

Use present simple 'don't like' for current habits. 'Don't like to going' is incorrect; use 'don't like going' or 'don't like to go'. 'Going parks' needs preposition 'to' ('going to parks'). 'Outside things' is unnatural; use 'outdoor activities'. 'Inside things' -> 'indoor activities'. 'Spend time with my bedroom' is wrong; use 'spend time in my bedroom'. Combine verbs correctly: 'spend time... reading books' rather than 'and reading' separated awkwardly.

× MMM I think umm I like to see more packs in my city and because many children's wants to go parks umm and they go to the parks so.

✓ I think I would like to see more parks in my city because many children want to go to parks.

Use plural 'parks' (already intended) and correct 'packs' to 'parks'. 'Children's' is possessive; the plural subject is 'children'. Verb agreement: 'children want', not 'wants'. Include 'to' before 'go to parks'. Also 'I like to see more' in future preference is better as 'I would like to see more' for politeness, though present 'I want' is acceptable.

× No, umm, I don't want to go to in the parks, umm, in future because I don't like outdoors activities. I like indoors activities. I'm all, I'm, uh, prefer to, umm, stay at my room and uh, enjoy with my phones.

✓ No, I don't want to go to parks in the future because I don't like outdoor activities. I like indoor activities. I prefer to stay in my room and enjoy my phone.

'Go to in the parks' is incorrect word order; use 'go to parks' or 'go to the park'. 'In future' is normally 'in the future'. 'Outdoors activities' should be 'outdoor activities'; 'indoors activities' -> 'indoor activities'. 'I'm all, I'm, uh, prefer to' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'I prefer to'. 'Stay at my room' should be 'stay in my room'. 'Enjoy with my phones' -> 'enjoy my phone' or 'enjoy using my phone' and 'phones' singular unless multiple devices.